@ReusableSword It's well formatted, clean, and interesting. It's a solid sheet, but the issues that @datadogie mentioned are there. It's mostly lore stuff. If you can change everything he mentioned, fantastic, but at least provide some more info as to how he went from being ONI's golden boy to being some random-ass marine in Whiskey Squad. Also, your sheet insinuates that Whiskey Squad has been together for some time, but it hasn't. I'll concede, that's my bad, since I've never really explicitly mentioned that. Fix those issues, and I'll be a happy camper. Fix everything datadogie mentioned, and I'll be a very happy camper.

The IC will start Sunday, 8/27! Prepare yourselves.

@datadogie @ReusableSword @CaptainBritton @FrostedCaramel @Raknarion @Driving Park @NarayanK

I have elected to let players decide on their own gear. All I ask is that you please do be reasonable.

And the IC is up. Go wild. I changed my mind about a posting order. Just make sure you don't bullet post. Give some other people a chance, yeah?

Also, sorry about that post. It's shitty, I know. I promise that subsequent posts of mine will be of greater quality.

@FrostedCaramel, forgot to mention you in the IC post before I edited you in so it probably didn't notify you. :P