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If I provide a picture of the appearance I do not describe. If that is unacceptable let me know.
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My body is ready.
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Hey, I'm interested in making a character for this but I may only be able to get a character sheet up by Monday is that okay? :)
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Qunari mage inbound!
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Good thing I like to stalk @POOHEAD189's posting history sometimes. And if I may adopt the most overused expression on this site ever, I'd like to throw my hat into this ring.
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@josephb
That is totally fine


@BurningCold
The hat is considered in the ring!

So just so you guys are aware. I'm looking for a hard cap of seven people for this. And in the interest check we got about double that. That being said not everybody is going to probably apply. But still your more than welcome to make a sheet, because I don't really believe in the whole first come, first serve thing.

@Burning Kitty
I'm just going to say I would prefer it if you did both. But I'll leave the actual choice to your own digression.

And finally. Deadlines for character applications is going to be five days from now. Since for me that will be Saturday the 16th, to give me the weekend to go over sheets and make decisions.
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@Techne Done it. Still having second thoughts on some areas, they may not be final yet. Dunno. But, let me know if I missed or went overboard with some things.

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I'm also done, might tweak the timeline of her background a bit, nothing much, minor fixes here and there.

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If anything needs to be adjusted feel free to let me know! :)
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Power out here from the hurricane. Will post when I can. Sorry for the delay.
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I can't tell if I want to be a Dwarf warrior, an Anderfels DEUS VULT Knight a few year shy of 40, or a wily Rivian Corsair.

I'll probably go with how I feel in the end, but anyone have thoughts?
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Nevermind. I have decided on none of them.
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@POOHEAD189 They all sounded interesting, what sort of character are you cooking up? Or is it a hush hush situation?
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@Asher890 I usually go with Dwarves but I decided to do an apostate Elf with a highwaymen streak this time!
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@POOHEAD189 Sounds neat! I'll look forward to reading your character sheet. I was sooo tempted to do a female elf, but decided on doing something that I don't normally rp.
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@Asher890 Thank you, my friend
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@POOHEAD189 If you could, do you think you could glance over my sheet and tell me what you think? Sorry, I am pretty anxious about these sort of things! :)
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@Asher890 Well, I am not the GM so I cannot say too much. But as someone who has GMed before, here's my two cents on what to improve.

  • Keep your history out of your appearance, or give only a very brief explanation of how you got the scar.
  • Put the 'how you met Wren' paragraph somewhere other than the end, even if you're describing on how he thinks of her often.
  • Give a tiny bit more reason on a few things happening, like when she was killed. Were the guards disdainful towards her because of any particular reason other than them being douchebags?
  • When describing his personality, don't say he remembers Wren dying often in his dreams unless it's the beginning of a point for his personality. And even then, like with your appearance, all the GM wants is 'they look/wear this' and 'they act/think like this.'


Also, reread your character once over just to make sure you have good word choices. To me it was mostly good, but there were one or two I'd change.

Other than that, he looks pretty fricken good. Honestly, if I can LIST the things that need improvement, that means it was a good character sheet. The bad sheets are ones I just go with "wow, I cant even begin to correct this."

There's never been a character sheet submitted that didn't need a tiny bit of improvement! But he looks good.
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Still accepting? Or have you secretly got 43 submitted sheets in your inbox?
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