Spookyhat, with as much respect as I can possibly convey...I do not understand what you were trying to say in your post.
The way I understood it was: Ignrak grabbed the electric whip, wrapped it around the guard's neck, and said "Let them hear you scream, bitch!" to that guard.
If I'm right, then you may want to edit that. Because it really conflicts with what Yoshi had already posted, in which Ignrak was held at gunpoint while the other guard whipped Tani. Tani had already blacked out by the time Yoshi finished her post, which means that all of that was set in stone.
Having Ignrak try to take down the guard with the gun, as I understood it in the beginning of your post, that works, but you can't really do much with the other guard.
Of course, if I misunderstood, just clarify it for me. XD