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This is pretty much a fancy of mine, as someone who doesn't actually mind the recent changes to 40k lore too much, and as someone who thinks that there is quite a bit of potential to be had in a narrative sense from them. Writing from the viewpoint of a Primaris Intercessor squad - which requires at least 4 writers at least - I intend to explore various elements, including the partition of the galaxy, how they are viewed by others of the Imperial forces, and what it is to be the next step up in Astartes 'evolution'.

I've chosen the Unnumbered Sons AKA 'Greyshields' so that folks have a nice choice of Marines from any of the 9 loyalist legions, of Primaris who may well have been frozen during the Heresy/Scouring (probably the 'first batch' so to speak) to others that are more recent in their 'ascension'.

The timeline will be starting, as with Dark Imperium, during the closing years of the 200-year Indomitus Crusade, and possibly culminating in the formation of a new Chapter. Who knows?

Please submit your character sheets by Private Message to me, myself and I - once accepted you can post them in the Char tab.

Name: Your character's name. Feel free to give it Legion/Chapter specific 'flavour'.

Rank: Obvious.

Age: Age in real space time, not including freezing.

Gene-sire: From which Loyalist primarch does your Marine take his gene-seed?

Personal Demeanour: What kind of person is your character outside of simply being living weapons, what are their motivations etc, and how do they interact with others? Also please include any hatreds, grudges, and so on.

Description: A written description of your character's appearance, feel free to include the condition of their armour and so on.

History: A sketch of your character's life and history, preferably until their selection by Cawl and subsequent 'ascension'. Give me three solid paragraphs, at least, please.

Equipment and Armament:



Miscellaneous: Anything you want to mention but haven't been able to cover yet.
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Great.

Il have one done in a day or two.

Go Dorn!
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@Apollosarcher@Bluetommy

We wait upon your leisure, gentlemen.

I also need to know, @Apollosarcher, if you wish to take the role of Sergeant or not.
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@Jbcool Sure. I'll happily take the spot.
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@Apollosarcher Good, you get your power sword, you also get to lead the squad; I look forward to your character sheet.
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@Jbcool I will be finished ASAP, now that I'm free from schoolwork
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@Jbcool The Sargeant from the first has landed to get everyone into shape to combat vile traitorous scum.
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@Apollosarcher

No one needs to teach a imperial fist how to do bolter drill lol
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@Apollosarcher Would prefer that you PMed it to me first, but it's an alright CS, so I'll let you off.

Right, I'll get a first post started. :)
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@Apollosarcher Would prefer that you PMed it to me first, but it's an alright CS, so I'll let you off.

Right, I'll get a first post started. :)


First post ready yet?
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<Snipped quote by Jbcool>

First post ready yet?


Works being an arse at the moment, but I'll have a post for you tomorrow, swear on the Emperor.
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Right, first post is up!

Feel free to post pre-attack thoughts, actions and so on, anything you want really; if you want to commence the attack then that's also fine, I expect some sort of initiative from you guys (you all seem capable of it without derailing the RP). If you've any questions then please ask them before posting, I'll answer ASAP.
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Your on my to do list. I had a over 1000 word post to do on another RP.
Il try and get one tonight.
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@Bluetommy You're up, my man!
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@Jbcool I did a thing!
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Il have a post up later on today. The imperial fists shall hold the line!
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Oookay, just a couple of quick things.

All is good thus far, good posts etc, but @PrinceAlexus could you please just have a quick check of your posts before you post them? I say this only because we get things like 'seige warfare', 'pervious assaults', and so on. Just a quick once-over would be appreciated. That and remember that all of us were created from the gene-seed of pre-Heresy sires; my Blood Angel does not have any desire to get in close that the modern ones do (not yet anyway...), nor does he care about pretty armour, especially since his is exactly the same as your own.

As for the guns, well, I've got a bad feeling about this.
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@PrinceAlexus@Bluetommy@Apollosarcher@Ollumhammersong

Oookay, just a couple of quick things.

All is good thus far, good posts etc, but @PrinceAlexus could you please just have a quick check of your posts before you post them? I say this only because we get things like 'seige warfare', 'pervious assaults', and so on. Just a quick once-over would be appreciated. That and remember that all of us were created from the gene-seed of pre-Heresy sires; my Blood Angel does not have any desire to get in close that the modern ones do (not yet anyway...), nor does he care about pretty armour, especially since his is exactly the same as your own.

As for the guns, well, I've got a bad feeling about this.


Sorry, I assumed 40k stuff... I can go back to a more blank template.

And spelling off a phone but they are UK spelling at times too. So I do spell ous and other alternatives.

Armour. Previous, siege OK that was a mistake my spell check missed off when I ran it via my phones spell check.

I can try Google docs, but that's also using the same spell check brain at end of day. I try to find them all but the odd ones do dona alpharius.

Il try Google docs but cannot promise it finds everything.

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It is a good point that none of us are in any way familiar with the reputations of our parent chapters. Aside from what we may have been told. As we are proverbial blank slates we do not and likely would not have to embody the stereotypes of our chapters. If anything we would be closer to the older Legion personalities.
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