Name: Ezekiel Bracewell

Age: 26

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Profession: Gladiator


Level: 1
Exp: 0/12

Weapon: Worn Cestus.


Armor: Fighter's Rags

Filthy cotton trousers with a ragged, torn appearance. Held up at the waist by a tightly drawn sash of fabric. These rags provide no additional bonus to defenses, but also allow for complete freedom of movement.

Accessory: Tear Pendant


A-Ability:

+ Crushing Blow: Empowered strike with 110% STR Potency. Reduces the targets DEF Stat by 1 for 3 turns. Range: Adjacent Cell.

+ Shoulder Charge: Runs as the target before colliding his full weight into them, dealing 90% STR damage. Target is knocked back 1 Cell. Range is 3 Cells and increases as Ezekiel's movement stat does.

R-Ability:

S-Ability:

+ Thick Skin: Ezekiel's DEF Stat is increased by 2 when he is wearing light or no armor.

B-Ability:

D-Ability:

+ Giants Charge: Charges and tackles an opponent up to two size categories larger than Ezekiel, grappling them whilst continuing to charge forward with them. Opponents in the way of the charge are knocked aside 1 Cell and take 50% STR Damage. At the end of the charge, the target is dealt 150% STR Damage and is knocked prone for 1 turn. If Ezekiel collides with terrain while charging, the target is instead dealt 180% STR Damage and is stunned for 3 turns. Ezekiel can charge up to double his Movement Stat: 6 Cells.

Stats:

HP: 23
MP: 15 (+5 from Tear Pendant)
DD: 0/10
Atk: 5 (+1 from Worn Cestus)
Def: 3 (+2 from Thick Skin)
Int: 1
Spr: 1
Evade: 3%
Move: 3 (+1 from Gladiator Profession)

Skill Points: 0

Name: Carbo

Age: 47

Gender: male

Appearance:




Profession: Shielded Lancer. His mighty shield stands for his allies, and his heavy strike with his halberd keeps the enemy at bay, while him and his comrades march forward. (Shieldbearer)

Level: 1
Exp: 0/12

Weapon:
Rusty halberd: A rusty halberd, thrown into countless battles. Old and damaged, but still useful. (Damage: atk based. Range: 2 cells) +1 ATK
Armor:
Wandering mercenary’s wear: Tough clothing for long time traveling. Might need some washing at some point. +1 SPR
Accessory:
Rusty armor: Rusty metal armor for protection, covering shoulders, chest, and waist. Comes with armored boots too. +1 DEF
-Shield:
Wooden greatshield: An old wooden greatshield. Its size is big enough to intimidate enemies without a fearsome drawing on its front. +1 DEF

A-Ability:

+SHIELD IS UP(requires any GREATSHIELD equipped): Carbo slams down his shield to the ground, pushing away an enemy in front and standing for defense.
120% DEF damage. Range: adjacent cell. 10 MP. Physical damage.
(For the next turn, Carbo is unable to attack and goes into DEFENSE mode. In this state, all attacks directed to any allies adjacent to him will be directed to Carbo, while his DEF and SPR is increased by 20%.)

+Threatening Swing: Carbo swings his halberd widely to fend off enemies.
90% ATK damage. Range: adjacent cell, plus the two cells left and right to it(in Carbo’s point of view). Physical damage.
Enemies hit by the Threatening Swing suffer 10% extra damage to the next attack they receive. 6 MP.

R-Ability:

S-Ability:
-The Towering Protector(works only with any GREATSHIELD):
All attacks except for ones behind deal 10% less damage.
If an attack from such direction deals less damage than 10% of the respective defensive stat(DEF if physical, SPR if magic/INT based), it is ignored and will deal zero damage.
#note: Might need editing depending on GM’s opinion, more over other skills.

B-Ability:

D-Ability:
War Cry: DEFENDER
“FORWARD! WITH NO MERCY!”
With a fearsome warcry, Carbo buffs his teammates.
For the next 3 turns, Carbo and his allies:
Have 50% increased DEF and SPR stats
Will have their first attack after getting buffed deal 130% damage to enemies

Stats:

HP: 25
MP: 15
DD: 0/10
Atk: 4(+1 from Rusty Halberd)
Def: 3(+0 from Wandering Mercenary’s wear) (+1 from rusty armor) (+1 from Wooden Greatshield)
Int: 1 (+0 from Rusty Halberd)
Spr: 2 (+1 from Wooden Greatshield) (+1 from Mercenary’s Wear)
Evade: 1%
Move: 2 (+1 from Shielded Lancer profession)

Skill Points: 0

– In general please change all instances of STR to Atk
– For Crushing Blow I would suggest going off a percentage rather than a pure number. This will allow it to scale with enemies. My suggestion would be to make it 10% for three turns with the ability to stack up to three (3) times. If you went with this your MP Cost would be 6 MP.
– For Shoulder Charge I am curious what happens if used in an adjacent cell of an enemy. Does Zeke still go all of his movement stat? Or does he stop as soon as he hits a target? Does his target still only get moved one cell? In what direction? I can cost this once I have more information.
– For Thick Skin I would change to a percentage rather than a pure number so it scales. My suggestion is 15% for now knowing that it can be upgraded later with skill points.
– Explain what 'knocked prone' means for the D-Ability. Also, clarify who is stunned if he collides with terrain during the charge. Other than that, it looks great.
– Please change his stat spread/equipment bonuses to the following:
HP: 25
MP: 20 (+5 from Tear Pendant)
DD: 0/10
Atk: 4 (+1 from Worn Cestus)
Def: 2 (+0 from Fighter's Rags) (+1 from Thick Skin)
Int: 1 (+0 from Worn Cestus)
Spr: 2 (+0 from Fighter's Rags)
Evade: 3%
Move: 2 Cells (+1 from Gladiator Profession)

– Under the Accessory category please add 'Shield' as a category to list your shield under.
– SHIELD IS UP in its current state will cost you 22 MP. If you would like to reduce this, I would suggest lowering the buff to your Def/Spr and potentially the covering range. My personal suggestion would be to increase Def and Spr by 20% and cover allies in adjacent cells. This would bring the cost down to a much more manageable 10 MP and you could always upgrade/purchase a stronger defensive skill later.
– Threatening Swing will cost 6 MP.
– Because of the S-Ability know that in battle you will have to denote with each post which direction your character is facing at all times. Up/Down/Left/Right. If you forget I will default to whatever your previous direction was during battle updates.
Just wanted to give you the heads up now so you can change it if you don't want to keep up with it.
– I could use a range on the damage for the D-Ability. Also, are the enemies hit taking 130% damage each turn or just once?
What stat is being used to calculate this damage?
– Please change his stat spread/equipment bonuses to the following:
HP: 25
MP: 15
DD: 0/10
Atk: 4 (+1 from Rusty Halberd)
Def: 3 (+0 from Mercenary's Wear) (+1 from Rusty Armor) (+1 from Wooden Greatshield)
Int: 1 (+0 from Rusty Halberd)
Spr: 2 (+1 from Mercenary's Wear) (+0 from Wooden Greatshield)
Evade: 1%
Move: 2 Cells (+1 from Shielded Lancer Profession)

Name:Wricythe

Age: 23000

Gender: Male

Appearance:


Profession:Dark-Ice Knight

Level: 1
Exp: 0/12

Weapon: Common frozen sword covered in ice webs
Armor: Common frozen armor covered in ice webs
Accessory:

A-Ability:

+Frozen Recovery - Completely nullifies the regeneration of a target's HP and M pool, either caused by their own abilities and effects or other's, for x rounds.

+Ice Armory - Can conjure an ice weapons to use them alongside his sword or completely switch to them. The ice has the same duration and strength as iron. The ice construct lasts for a number of rounds before it shatters.

-If the ice comes into contact with fire or lightning, the duration of the construct is reduced by x rounds.
-If it comes into contact with water or ice, the duration of the construct is increased by x rounds. Any subsequent turns added to the duration of the weapon increase the chance of it spontaneously shattering at the start of the owner's turn by xx%.

R-Ability:

S-Ability:

+Chilling Touch - If an enemy comes into contact with Wricythe, his abilities or attacks, there is a xx% chance that the target freezes for x rounds, unable to perform any actions for the duration. When in a frozen state, any attack on the target has xx% chance to shatter the ice and the target, instantly killing them.
-If the target comes into contact with fire or lightning, the duration of the frozen state is reduced by x rounds. Any fire or lightning attacks that don't shatter the ice have a xx% chance of removing the condition and freeing the target.
-If it comes into contact with water or ice, the duration of the frozen state is increased by x rounds. Any subsequent turns added to the duration of the status effect by this effect, increase the chance of the target freeing itself, in their own turn, from the condition by xx%.

B-Ability:

D-Ability:

+Dark Ice - Wricythe turns black(and he can never go back LOL) along with all his abilities, transforming his ice into dark ice that boosts his base stats and adds special effects to all his other abilities when cast or if already activated.

Stats:

HP:
MP:
DD:
Atk:
Def:
Int:
Spr:
Evade:
Move:

Skill Points: 0

Positive

Bravery - ATK is increased by x1.5 for 3 turns.

Bubble - HP doubles for 3 turns.  When the effect ends, HP is halved.

Covered - Damage is taken by a Covering ally.

Covering - Afflicted takes damage for an ally.

Faith - INT is increased by x1.5 for 3 turns.

Float - Afflicted hovers in the air which causes an immunity to Earth-based attacks and a weakness to Wind-based attacks for 3 turns.  Afflicted can also travel over Water cells and other usually impassable cells.

Haste - Afflicted can take 2 move actions and 2 act actions per turn instead of 1 for 3 turns.

Immune - Afflicted becomes immune to negative status effects for 3 turns.

Invincible - Afflicted does not receive damage and is unaffected by status effects for 1 turn.

Invisible - Afflicted cannot be targeted for 3 turns.

MP Regen - MP increases by 5% Max MP at the beginning of the recipient's turn for 5 turns.

Protect - Reduces all PHYSICAL damage taken by 50% for 3 turns.

Regen - HP increases by 15% Max HP at the beginning of the recipient's turn for 5 turns.

Shell - Reduces all MAGICAL damage taken by 50% for 3 turns.

Veil - Increases Evasion Rate by 50% for 3 turns.

Negative

Accessory Break – Afflicted loses all bonuses/effects linked to their first accessory for 3 turns. Can stack if applicable.

Addled - Afflicted cannot use any skills for 3 turns.

Apathy - Afflicted is unable to recover MP by any means for 3 turns.

Armor Break – Afflicted loses all bonuses/effects linked to their armor for 3 turns.

Berserk - ATK is doubled, but DEF is halved.  Only normal attacks can be executed while Berserk.

Bleeding - Afflicted loses 8% Max HP per turn for 3 turns.

Blind - Attacks have a 50% chance of missing for 3 turns.

Blood Loss - Afflicted loses 25% Max HP in addition to damage dealt by an enemy's attack.  Only occurs upon enemy attack.  Only occurs once.  Acts as a damage modifier.

Burn - Afflicted takes 8% Max HP damage for 3 turns.  The amount of damage taken is doubled if the afflicted is weak against Fire.  Can be cured via Water/Ice magic or Water-/Ice-based attacks.

Charm/Mesmerize - Afflicted falls in love or becomes intrigued by the enemy and aids them in their endeavors which causes the afflicted to attack allies.  Charm only affects the opposite gender of the inflicter.

Confused - Afflicted has a 33.33% chance of attacking itself, an ally, or an enemy.  Is cured upon physical attack.

Critical - An automatic status placed on a character when HP reaches 25% or less and remains on the character until the HP of the afflicted is higher than 25% of its Max HP.

Curse - Afflicted becomes the victim of a curse and takes damage equal to have of the damage the afflicted deals with any attack for 3 turns.

Deep Sleep - Afflicted cannot move or take actions for 3 turns.  All attacks made on the afflicted are critical hits.  Awakens upon repetitive physical attacks in a single turn.

Deprotect - Doubles all PHYSICAL damage taken for 3 turns.

Deshell - Doubles all MAGICAL damage taken for 3 turns.

Disable - Afflicted can no longer take action for 3 turns.

Doom - Afflicted experiences Instant Death after 5 turns.

Fear - Afflicted is unable to move or act for 3 turns.  Is cured upon being attacked by any means.

Frail - Afflicted is unable to recover HP by any means for 3 turns.

Freeze - Afflicted can no longer move or take action and also takes twice as much damage as normal for 3 turns.  Can be cured via Fire magic or Fire-based attacks.

Immobilize - Afflicted can no longer move for 3 turns.

Instant Death - Afflicted is instantly killed.  Bypasses all abilities that have to do with HP reaching 0.

Mana Drain - Afflicted loses 8% Max MP per turn for 3 turns.  MP damage is absorbed by the one who inflicted the status as MP.

Misfortune - Afflicted has a 60% chance of skill failure for 3 turns.

Oblivion - Afflicted is lost forever, their existence shattered from the face of the planet causing the afflicted to be completely removed from the battlefield for the rest of the fight.

Paralyze - Afflicted can no longer move or take action for 3 turns.

Peril – An automatic status placed on a character when HP reaches 5% or less and remains on the character until the HP of the afflicted is higher than 5% of its Max HP.

Petrify - Afflicted is turned to stone and cannot move or act.  Can be destroyed by a critical hit.

Plague - Afflicted takes 8% Max HP damage per turn for 3 turns and cannot be healed by spells or skills of any sort.  Items will still recover HP properly.

Poison - Afflicted takes 8% Max HP damage per turn for 3 turns.

Reverse - Afflicted takes damage from healing attempts and is healed by damaging attacks for 3 turns.

Sap - HP is reduced by 8% Max HP per turn for 5 turns and regenerates health of the inflictor by the amount of damage dealt to the inflicted per turn.

Seal - Afflicted can no longer move or take action for 3 turns.

Severe Burn - Afflicted takes 16% Max HP damage for 3 turns.  The amount of damage taken is doubled if the afflicted is weak against Fire.  Can be cured via Water/Ice magic or Water-/Ice-based attacks.

Severe Poison - Afflicted takes 16% Max HP damage per turn for 2 turns.

Shrink - All PHYSICAL attacks deal 1 Dmg and all PHYSICAL damage taken is doubled for 3 turns.

Silence - Afflicted cannot execute any INT-based skills.

Sleep - Afflicted cannot move or take actions for 3 turns.  All attacks made on the afflicted are critical hits.  Awakens upon physical attack. Progresses to Deep Sleep.

Slow - Afflicted can only take a Move action or an Act action in one turn, not both, for 3 turns.  Movement is halved.

Stasis - Afflicted is unable to move or act for a short period of time, usually just 1-2 turns.

Stop - All Player Phases are skipped for the afflicted character for 5 turns.

Venom - Afflicted becomes Stopped and takes 17% Max HP damage per turn for 3 turns.

Weak - Max HP of the afflicted is reduced by 15% for 3 turns.

Weapon Break – Afflicted loses all bonuses/effects linked to their armor for 3 turns. Weapon-based skills become unsuable while afflicted.

Wet - Afflicted takes double damage from attacks of the Lightning element for 3 turns.

Zombie - Afflicted is turned undead causing a weakness to Light elemental attacks and healing moves for 3 turns.

Name: Ezekiel Bracewell

Age: 26

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Profession: Gladiator


Level: 1
Exp: 0/12

Weapon: Worn Cestus.


Armor: Fighter's Rags

Filthy cotton trousers with a ragged, torn appearance. Held up at the waist by a tightly drawn sash of fabric. These rags provide no additional bonus to defenses, but also allow for complete freedom of movement.

Accessory: Tear Pendant


A-Ability:

+ Crushing Blow: Empowered strike with 110% ATK Potency. Reduces the targets DEF Stat by 10% for 3 turns. This effect can stack up to 3 times. Can be used during Lock Up. Range: Adjacent Cell. Mana Cost: 6 MP.

+ Lock Up: Ezekiel grabs his target, giving them the Grappled condition for 1 Turn. Ezekiel can maintain Lock Up for an extra turn for an additional Mana Cost. This can be done up to 2 additional turns for a potential total of 3 turns grappled. Maintaining the grapple counts as a movement action, and Ezekiel can make an attack against his grappled target in these extra rounds. Range: Adjacent Cell.

Grappled: Target is immobilized. Both the target and the assailant lose their Evasion Bonus while Grappled. An attempt can be made to escape the grapple at the cost of the targets movement action. This attempt has a 50% success chance. Successive attempts to escape a Grapple increase the success rate by 10%.

Ezekiel can only grapple targets who are up to one size category larger than he is. Grappling larger enemies increases the success rate of them escaping the grapple up to 80%.

R-Ability:

S-Ability:

+ Thick Skin: Ezekiel's DEF Stat is increased by 15% when he is wearing light or no armor.

B-Ability:

D-Ability:

+ Giants Charge: Ezekiel rushes down an opponent in one direction, able to charge up to double his movement stat (4 Cells). This can be used on targets up to 2 size categories larger than he is. If he collides with his target, they become Grappled and are pushed in the direction of Ezekiel's charge until the end of his movement. Any enemies in the way of the charge are pushed aside 1 Cell and take 50% ATK Damage. At the end of the charge, the grappled target is knocked Prone for 1 turn and takes 150% ATK Damage. If Ezekiel charges his victim into terrain, they instead take 180% ATK Damage and are stunned for 3 turns.

Prone: Target is pushed to the ground, completely losing their Evasion bonus. Non-movement actions can be made while Prone with a 25% Chance of said action failing.

Stats:

HP: 25
MP: 20 (+5 from Tear Pendant)
DD: 0/10
Atk: 4 (+1 from Worn Cestus)
Def: 2 (+0 from Fighter's Rags) (+1 from Thick Skin)
Int: 1 (+0 from Worn Cestus)
Spr: 2 (+0 from Fighter's Rags)
Evade: 3%
Move: 2 (+1 from Gladiator Profession)

Skill Points: 0