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I put the effort into making the character at least. Might as well post him. And I'll steal Mikey's codes like I always do. Because that's what friends are for.


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Still, his position as the most literate man on a farm did come with its perks. Being able to read for some of the least literate farm hands did well enough to make him a few friends around the barns.

Unlike MJ and Easy, the literate women whom the farmhands would have no interest in spending time with. :D
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Unlike MJ and Easy, the literate women whom the farmhands would have no interest in spending time with. :D


I mean if they tried they'd get blasted by Old Man Tackett's shotgun
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Actually, if Daniel's a rider he might be spending some time with MJ in the stables, helping to care for the horses while discussing the latest Jules Verne collections to arrive in America.
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It may not be rabies zombies that kills Mr. Marlowe but instead a paranoid old fart
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Quick update on the sheets - I've had to alter Alice's history to be singer turned nurse for my friends character. He's making a doctor. We're almost done on that front too, just need to flesh out our bullet pointed history and get Dr. Graham some traits.
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I put the effort into making the character at least. Might as well post him. And I'll steal Mikey's codes like I always do. Because that's what friends are for.


And here I was worried you were scared off. Phew.
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Ah shite. We've already got a doctor, don't we? I might have to completely rewrite Alice again...

EDIT: We found a way around it, but my buddy's sheet is going to take much longer than anticipated because of it. Here's Alice in the meantime.


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Dead has not accepted any sheets, so there aren't any character slots taken yet.
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Dead has not accepted any sheets, so there aren't any character slots taken yet.


He hasn't even provided any tangible answer on how many characters he wants in this RP or how many members he wants.
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He hasn't even provided any tangible answer on how many characters he wants in this RP or how many members he wants.

Correct.
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Sorry for the wait, ya'll. My reviews got deleted during an automatic update, so as a result, this rewritten post will be a lot less warm and friendly than my usual vibe, but also as straight and to the point as possible, so bear with me. Characters who are accepted can be moved to the characters tab and are clear to start building relationships, though as the IC is starting shortly, this is not paramount. Characters who are not accepted are "Waitlisted" until they complete any edits necessary. For some people this may be easy as there are only minor edits necessary, other people might find their extra edits more difficult. The only rule here is that you only get one edit/rewrite, so make it count. No "bad writers" applied, but I'm definitely looking for a specific, Grapes-Of-Wrath literary vibe that's hard to nail. Anyway, without further deliberation, here are the reviews.




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Given that you're in Florida, it also seems wholly unlikely that the ethnic makeup of the farmhands supported learning Polish, German, or Russian.

These were all nationalities who were working as itinerant labour around the US during the 20s and 30s, having been displaced from Europe during the Great War. As such MJ would've known at least some of them in her capacity on the farm during this time. However your point is taken and since everyone seems to be going with English speaking Americans the Bilingual trait seems a little redundant for now.

Viewing blacks as livestock is pretty extreme, especially considering Farmer Tackett is more of a prejudiced hick than a cross-burning eugenecist, so I'd like to see that toned down.

This was the prevailing social view of coloured folk in 1930s Florida, especially in the hick towns out in the country where social reforms were nonexistent. The situation was so bad with casual floggings, lynching and the spread of extreme racist ideologies that 8% of the African American population migrated to the northern states between 1916–1930, with a further 12% leaving 1930-1970. Again I concede your point though, I was a little worried about my ability to play as such a prejudiced character in the first place, so making her more 'cosmopolitan' will just make it easier for me.



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Amelie wasn't a serious applicant, just an example of a medically inclined character for others.
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Now that reviews are complete, I have a chance to answer all the questions people have asked.
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@DeadbeatWalking How many traits is too many, would you say? I've knocked it back to 6 positives and 4 negatives with a total of 3. Also, I've bumped her age up to 27.
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@Stitches

I think Dead is looking at 7-11 being a good threshold for trait quantity, but that's based on my impression and conversations with the man.
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@Stitches Ten traits would work, but any edits aren't showing up on my end.
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Ah, that's because I'm working with my buddy with Dr Graham before I submit my edited sheet. Just fiddling around with trivial parts of the backstory - if I only get one rewrite, I have to make Alice's history work with Elijah's even if he has to change it around a little. Thanks for the help though, we should be done by tonight!
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Ah, that's because I'm working with my buddy with Dr Graham before I submit my edited sheet. Just fiddling around with trivial parts of the backstory - if I only get one rewrite, I have to make Alice's history work with Elijah's even if he has to change it around a little. Thanks for the help though, we should be done by tonight!


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