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The OOC is up.

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I'm currently world building for a potential RP that I would like to share with you all. The basic premise is a fantasy world that takes place thousands of years after an apocalyptic event which threatened to destroy the world. The aftermath of that event left behind a broken world, in which the most of the evil that caused the event has been sealed away and long forgotten. There is only faintest of references to the event in ancient myths throughout the world. The evil that remains in the world is now considered to be a mysterious phenomenon that naturally occurs in a specific section of the world for reasons unknown. The people of the world don't realize that this remain phenomenon is actually an evil entity that has been simply bidding its time, waiting for the moment to strike and release it's brethren upon the world once again.

The story takes place during a war between two of the five great nations which make up the Land of Saencila (Each nation represents one of the five holy senses). The nation that is losing the war currently has become desperate. In their desperation, they have reached out for help from The Cult of Insight, a fanatical group of religious followers who have fallen prey to the last remaining evil force active in Saencila. By turning to the cult for help, this nation has unwittingly opened a flood gate that will eventually lead to the start of another apocalypse.

So who are the main players here? Well you are. You are just an everyday normal or not normal person who has been suddenly swept up in the danger that one nation has unleashed upon the world. But before we begin that, there is a lot of information to unpack. You don't have to read all of it to play right now. Just be mindful of the most relevant information at the moment. I advise you to at least look through The Discarded Overview section (an overview of the enemy) as well as Vi’daerus the Omniscient (Discarded of Sight).

Finally I'm open to thoughts, ideas and a discussion about the boundaries for the rp's magic. I just wanted to get a feel of what people thought before continuing.

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looks interesting. will you be describing the five nations soon. And as for the discarded it almost sounds like you are describing daemons. if thats the case I have a idea already formed for a character. lol
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So yes, The five Nations are in the works. Though right now they are more of a vague idea than anything. no longer a vague idea. The most important one starting out will be the one losing the war. However it isn't until after act 3, when things will really open up. As the climax to Act 3 will result in the release of the imprisoned Discarded.

Right now this is the most I have for the nations.

The nations for Smell and Taste are allies/rivals. They are not personally involved in the war but they do make a profit in trade.



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Whew, alright. Now in regards to you question about The Discarded. I think of them more as forces of nature. Although they do have physical forms which they use when necessary. Out of all The Discarded, Au'Diurale is probably the most physically active of the five.

I am open to another layer of evil beings below the Discarded that could act more like daemons.

In any case though. We'll see if people are interested. If people don't like the magic system rules, I can drop it and allow for more free form magic.

I'll have to come up with some actual names for the countries. Hmm....

My basic outline for the first four acts are:

Act 1: Vi’daerus minions are planting seed of Vi’daerus's essence across the Nation of Sight. One of these towns is where everyone will start.

Act 2: More of a recon where we are trying to learn more about the Vi’daerus. This may be it own complete arc or may continue into act 3.

Act 3: The heroes learn of an ancient artifact that might help defeat Vi’daerus. Their goal is to search for it in a generic "Nobody ever returns from here" location. This will result in the release of The Discarded.

Act 4: Up in the air may involve seeking out more artifacts.
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Interested in this concept
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Nice. Well that's two. Three if I decide to construct a character.
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The interest check. Where ideas go to die. lol. Well perhaps I'll omit the magic system for now. If there are other people who are interested, we can revisit that topic.

Edit: Just modified the OP to include The Five Nations and exclude the Magic system boundaries. I like the idea of having magic systems with boundaries, but we can discuss that topic if anyone else shows interest. Additionally I've added a section called adepts and modified the title for any potential RP to The Five Senses.
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If you are willing to take suggestions and if you want to keep the magic system in place. Keep it a generalized magic system like most others have it. The heat based magic is a good idea but it doesn't leave much to creativity. Another suggestion for the magic make it dangerous to the user and at the same time making it a watched over and regulated skill. Like the more you user or if you are a unskilled user the higher chance you become a a pawn of the discarded like the potential "daemons". It could also give you something to add to the cult. ie they are using unregulated magic in order to become closer to the discarded.

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That's a fun idea. Regulated magic, however begs the question of how much is too much? Any thoughts on that? Any thoughts on how it would work? What do you think of a free-form structured magic system?

Perhaps we could have a mix of Regulated Magic that runs the risk of corrupting (maybe it's activated with the use of one's senses and it's source is the Discarded?), and a mix of non corrupting magic with limitations. I like structured magic that requires a defined source of energy and will cause problems for those who don't manage it properly. Undefined magic makes abilities difficult to regulate in my opinion and that's what I would like to avoid.

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So onto the how much is to much. What you could do is have grades. Like a A grade is capable of destroying entire cities and armies. B grade is capable of destroying small towns. So on and so forth. A limitation you could throw on this is only a small portion of the population has this ability. The majority of the population either has limited use of non-corrupting magic or no magic.

Im not sure I understand on what you meant on the free-form structured magic system?

As for the use of corrupting and non-corrupting magic is a good idea. Corrupting magic could be magic that is able to harm or in some cases heal. And for non corrupting it can't be used for combat. just general uses.
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I suppose the term free-form structured magic system is very contradicting lol. What I mean is People could use whatever kind of magic they want, with the exception for game breaking magics, but they need to define a system for how it works and what the magic's source is. They need to layout the rules, the weaknesses and everything so that players can come up with strategies for how to deal with the magic.

In regards to the how much is too much topic. I was more so thinking how to define the limitations. Like how much magic can I use before I go insane? How does one measure it? .... You knooooooooooow.... I'm over thinking things aren't I?
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nah they are good points. hmmm what you could have is well with the grade system what you could have is lets says we have a c+ grade magic user they are able to use a easy corrupting spell lets say flame for 30 minutes straight before they are unable to use it anymore or before they could possibly start getting corrupted.
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Well regardless there doesn't appear to be much interest in this. I may just drop it for now and perhaps come back to it another time. I could just create an IC for it and see if anyone bites. But I mean... Nobody is really biting right now, soooo...

In your experience, do people tend to show interest for an actual IC rather than with the interest checks?
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Id say they get more interest from the ooc. not the interest.
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Alright then. I'll pull something together over the next week. I'll compose a map and type up a prologue. I'll try to have things ready by next weekend at the latest.
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Alright, So I typed up a prologue. You can review it below. It's quite long. Please make suggestions and comments. My biggest concern is the Emperor of Touch, who is mentioned briefly. The thing I wrote about him may turn people off despite the fact I emphasized that the man is horrible person even if his country doesn't realize it. I was simply looking for a reason for why The king in The Nation of Sight was certain his family would be killed if they lost the war. If you guys have other suggestions, I'm all for it.

Also back on the subject of magic. I may provide a few standard magic systems. One for each sense. People can use them or come up with their own system, but I may want to make all magic relate to the 5 senses in some way, even if it is abstractly. For example maybe you want to summon familiars. That's fine, but it should be triggered or have some connection in some way to one of the five senses.

Anyway, below is the prologue. The map is coming along slowly. I have an outline but haven't filled in everything yet. I'm doing it on paper, because I don't have a decent art editor on my computer.




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Medieval Fantasy is right up my alley.
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Medieval Fantasy is right up my alley.


Alright alright! Never would have guessed it from that avatar though... ;)

I'm working on a map right now. Once that's done I'll start working on the main thread. Hopefully it will be done by this week. Feel free to look through the prologue I typed up in my previous post. Let me know if you have suggestions or concerns.
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Coloring in the map right now. Here's a peak. On the left is the practice map. The right is the final-ish map. Water has been colored in. Going to add mountains next and color in the land. I'll scan it afterwards. Make some copies for future adjustments. Add land names on my computer and begin work on the ooc.
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Finished the map. Working on the OOC.



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OOC is going to have to wait a tad longer. My wife did something to her foot. I'm going take her to the hospital.
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