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Huh. So far 8 posted characters, and at least a 9th or 10th person interested.

You did say you liked reading for partial credit and not just yes/no grading, eh? @DruSM157

My humor is silly, ignore me.
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@DruSM157Hmmm, might go for the first idea then if that sounds good to you?
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Nepotism won’t save you this time boyo.

Also on technology: irs fantasy/steampunk where a lot of “tech” is scavenged from the old world.


Besides, when do I ever fail? I'll be making sure my backstory is well detailed don't you worry.
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I am going to spend time meticulously going through everyone’s characters to see who what characters would best fit the story. Diverse characters, interesting histories,secrets to be found...all are good marks.

Oh! I do have a thing to say to everyone with a CS already. Everyone is born with an aether sign, even if they don’t use Aether. Children born during the day are marked with the sign of the sun, children born at night are marked with the sign of the moon. It’s seen as bad luck if a child is born during an eclipse,like my character. Hence why he narratively lacks a sign. I apologize for not making that clear.

Also @GingerBoi123 go with whatever character you want! Just look at my CS, lore info and others. Part of what I’m looking for is a group thrown together by fate or bad luck and the adventure they go on.
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Good to know; Clarified that Terhikki was born during the day, thanks to a trusted coinflip.
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i like coinflips like toucans like cheerios
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Cheerios are actually bad for toucans if you let them eat too many. Just like coinflips are bad for me if I rely on them too much.
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Good stuffs everyone. I've been looking through CS's whilst grading an almost countless sea of tests and essays. There are characters I really enjoy, characters that I feel could use retooling, and characters that I feel need more information or more fleshing out.

One thing to consider is why your character would go on an adventure? Happy-go-lucky types are okay, but even Marlowe will have a drive or a goal to reach far beyond his simple "I want to see the world" mindset. Revenge, lost honor, forbidden knowledge, love; all of these are things are what give characters purpose beyond simple meandering.

A member of my secret Illuminati council said it best: what's all the skill in the world against the drive of a desperate man or woman? What drives people to seek out ancient treasure and certain doom? For some it's fool's luck and a naive sense of adventure, but others have starving families, sick children, dead parents, etc to spur them on.
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I shall edit Terhikki briefly to elaborate a bit more on her powerful wanderlust.
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I believe a pretty easy reason for Marea could be either her adoptive father giving her a request or just wanting to go along with Marlowe to make sure he stays fine during his shenanigans.

If you'd like, I could flesh out the relationships she has with the South Sea folk.
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I believe a pretty easy reason for Marea could be either her adoptive father giving her a request or just wanting to go along with Marlowe to make sure he stays fine during his shenanigans.

If you'd like, I could flesh out the relationships she has with the South Sea folk.


You haven't even imagined Marlowe shenanigans yet. In the opening post I've been building up, he even makes children embarrassed. But yeah, more fleshing out only leads to better things!
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It hasn't even started yet - and these shenanigans sound great already.

I'll probably make a few fleshing out changes as well where I can, too.

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I've edited in Rin's main motivation for becoming a Diver at the end of his History secton
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I shall edit my sheet when I get home. Racking in some overtime right now.
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There we are, added some elaboration to Terhikki's wanderlust. I feel satisfied with the elaboration.
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I've added more to Marea's history, fleshing out her motivations some more and explaining something I realize I left unanswered.
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Excellent stuff! I'm really excited to dig into these CS's and start mapping out more secret stuff!
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Are the abilities I gave Michi’s weapons alright?
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