Well, there we go, rewrote the backstory to be less dramatic since it wasn't the point of the character, made him a vampire because I might as well given what he was and polished up bits of the rest of the CS along with it. Will post soon.
@Rebirth Really sorry man, I don't think I can do this RP. Too much stuff is happening and I'm also suffering some sort of writers' block. I hope this RP goes well!
Oh no, sorry guys I thought I had uploaded and didn't check back for a few days, wifi is spotty around here. Hopefully they get through this time, sorry if I worried any of y'all I'd like to keep this going.