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Here's my character! Sorry, they are terribly late, I had an entirely different character made up, but they shared too many similarities with too many characters. So, I wanted to make something different. I do hope this character is okay.

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Oh my, @Sofaking Fancy, Dael was an absolute delight to read about. This character is something different indeed. Very consistent background, personality and capabilities, in addition to the high quality of grammar and spelling, make this a top notch character sheet.

Only two things I need you to address before approval.

  • I would change personality to Dael's major attribute, and either making strength or intelligence his minor attribute. Dael is a talkative guy for sure, and he is clearly much better at convincing someone than beating them down. Intelligence makes sense due to him being well-read and well-traveled, but strength fits a big Orc fine too.
  • You mentioned Kyne as daedric under Dael's weaknesses. Malacath and Azura make more sense here.
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Oh my, @Sofaking Fancy, Dael was an absolute delight to read about. This character is something different indeed. Very consistent background, personality and capabilities, in addition to the high quality of grammar and spelling, make this a top notch character sheet.

Only two things I need you to address before approval.

  • I would change personality to Dael's major attribute, and either making strength or intelligence his minor attribute. Dael is a talkative guy for sure, and he is clearly much better at convincing someone than beating them down. Intelligence makes sense due to him being well-read and well-traveled, but strength fits a big Orc fine too.
  • You mentioned Kyne as daedric under Dael's weaknesses. Malacath and Azura make more sense here.


Thank you!

Right! I debated over that for a long time and noted that another character had Personality first and Strength second. I didn't want to seem like I was duplicating them... but true... Dael's personality shines first beyond him being a scary orc boi. Yes, I have also had a hard time not knowing how to work all that in there. His main three attributes are Personality, Intelligence, and Strength, with the rest of them lacking SEVERELY. Anyway, fixed!

Yes. I had read some lore that had put Kyne as the Crone to Dibella's Maiden and Mara's Matron. Like Hecate, but with Skyrim goddesses. But that's me reading random internet lore and committing it to actualization. He's probably more Azura than Malacath. Fixed!
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@Sofaking Fancy, approved. You may add Dael to the roster now.

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@Sofaking Fancy, Dael is definitely a sleek and enjoyable read, and as someone who appreciates unorthodox characters, I personally like how he breaks the mold of the usual Orc tropes. However, I have two nitpicks:

One is that he seems to be an expert at wielding two handed axes, despite the fact that one of his traits that stood out to me in his character sheet is that he isn't that much of a martial character. I would make that skill Adept myself (and also gain an extra Adept skill, if my calculations are correct) for sake of consistency.

Two is that he wears heavy armor, even when he has a weakness about him having somewhat of a slow pace. That, combined with his pilgrim past, makes me think that he would opt for something lighter, like padded/quilted armor, or leather, or a shirt of mail.

Aside from these I'd say he's pretty crisp. The group could use the morale.
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Character sheet here - I'm currently on vacation with limited computer use so I'll fill in as and when I can as quickly as I can too!


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Narzul's the kind of guy who would spend a lot of time in HR if he worked in an office.
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Narzul's the kind of guy who would spend a lot of time in HR if he worked in an office.


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First off, I absolutely love how you described his appearance. He seems like the kind of super friendly uncle that you don’t really know what he does for a living, but he’s the kind of guy to liven up the room and just make everything, even the most mundane of things about his life, seem like it’s the most incredible thing that he feels lucky to have experienced. It’s impossible not take an immediate liking to someone like that.

I don’t know how you managed to take something as horrible as child abandonment/ attempted murder sound whimsical, but you managed to pull it off. I almost laughed out loud reading the first few paragraphs, which is definitely a sign of good things to come. You’re a monster, and I love you.

I loved the introduction of Yashta as his supporting character and mentor figure, she acts as a window into his people’s world and I like that she wasn’t a romantic interest to him, but more like a mother figure for someone who clearly was lacking any sort of parentage other than some priestesses, who obviously wouldn’t have that kind of relationship with him. His simple-minded ignorance is also really endearing; it’s great he decided on a whim that his purpose was to do a temple pilgrimage, likely because temple life is all he knew and a random flower pedal that could have been looked at 100 different ways. It speaks volumes for how people see patterns when there might not actually be any. For a lack of a better term, it humanizes him quite a bit.

And what a great and haunting thing to have happen to him, where his mercy finally led to the worst possible circumstances. His mercy reminds me a lot of my character and his no-kill ethos and he’s been struggling with what will happen when he’s forced to make a choice, or if there’s a situation where he refuses to act and it leads to the deaths of people he cares about. I think the two of them could learn a lot from each other, and it’s nifty to see someone else who has a clear patron in the gods.

Overall, I really like the history for this character!

For skills, I think it makes a bit of sense swapping Heavy Armour for Expert and 2H Axe as adept, the reason being that he never really had any proper combat training or experience, but he’s had a lot of practice travelling while being encumbered by weight. Everything else looks good, although you might want to throw in a line or two about how he picked up restoration rather than a few generic magic lessons. What made him realize he was magically inclined?

Overall, damn awesome. I love this character.
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Get ready for the first writing prompt of FoC chapter 2!

Write about your character's view on a historical figure of Tamriel (AKA an NPC from TES games or books). Please write in-character; all forms of writing (story, poem, letters, lyrics etc.) are acceptable.
Prompt 1


This prompt closes at the end of May.
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@Gcold ahhhh I should have spoke up sooner, but I’ll be gone tomorrow until May 16th. I can do work from GDOCS for the time being.
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@Gcold@Dervish@Peik
I tweaked Dael's skills to be more in line with your thoughts. He's basically a pure charisma character now, but that isn't bad! XD Let me know!

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@Sofaking Fancy, still approved. Let's see what my colleagues have to say.
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@Gcold@Dervish@Peik
I tweaked Dael's skills to be more in line with your thoughts. He's basically a pure charisma character now, but that isn't bad! XD Let me know!


He's still something to fear (I know I wouldn't want to be near a pissed-off Orc clad in plate wielding a sharp green axe, even if he's soft of heart), but now his skills are more consistent with his biography in my opinion. Dael has my approval.
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@Sofaking Fancy I'm totes on board
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The GMs have spoken, @Sofaking Fancy

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Still wip but a bit embarrassed to put a partial unfinished character sheet here. Will hopefully have time this weekend to finish it.
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Introducing the Discord Hall of Fame™; the best comments in our chatroom.

We have two inductees today.

1. @Peik tags himself.



2. @Chicken lets his inner edgelord out to play.

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On a more serious note, here are the top ten user-voted posts (or sets of posts) of chapter 1. These are in no particular order.


Bonus: The Apotheosis of Climb Kit (Read the entire page and 4 posts into the next)

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Okay, this little miss is done! :) Ready for feedback and any changes required/edits to be made. I'll let one of you lore beasts at it in case there is anything really obvious >.>



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