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My pardon if my post is too short or if there is any error in it. That said I should let everyone know that on the 24th I shall be heading to see my family for my birthday and won't be back until the 30th. I don't imagine having access to internet during this time, or at the least certainly not being in a position to write long well thought out posts. My pardon for any inconvenience this may cause.
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Friendly reminder that this is thematically canon. The clanging in Badastan's part is a result of his fat rolls smashing together as he ran down the stairs to protest this truth.
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@Guinemerz It's weird seeing my sketchy concept art appear in a clip. lol
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UPDATE: Thanks to @Narcotic Dollie we've got a dank Character Index at the first post of the CS to structure all faction characters.

(She made it a while ago and I forgot to put it in xd )
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Its udders are filled to the brim.

I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING AT THIS LINE! XD
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Lowering its horned head, the beast takes a voracious gulp of its own udders… before spewing out a bolt of transparent milk at the King.

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That should not be a lethal attack, nevertheless Cauroman felt he should steer clear regardless.

Good assumption, King Cauromam, I too would avoid being sprayed by demonic goat milk! This whole post was a journey and I 100% approve of these shenanigans.
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@Narcotic Dollie Well you see, emphasizing the full udders is all part of my artistic process.
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The battle for Tautom has begun in a treacherous surprise attack!
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I will be going to the dentist in a few hours, and I imagine I'll be at the dentist for a bit. I try to devote some time after the dentist to coming up with a post but I don't imagine I'll be able to come up with it today.
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I am still waiting for Wernher and @Serpentine's collab. After that me and Serp will do collabs together, depending on how things go.
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You know your city is screwed when you've started creating designated "Poverty Regions." :P
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I'd like to apologize. I simply don't feel inspired to continue partaking in this. I wish I had a better excuse, or some thing to say, but the simple truth of the matter is that I can't find the will or desire to continue with this.
I think I'm going to pull out of this RP. The idea that I might in some way hold back the RP due to my laziness and lost interest is terrifying and my pardon for any problems I have caused, or will cause as a result of my leaving.
I wish you all the best of fortune and the with the rich minds required to do this RP justice, I am sure you will all have fun.
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@neogreggorySorry to see you go. I appreciate you gave this story a shot nevertheless.
Can I convince you to make a final post where Ardoiwn meets an honorable death in battle? I prefer that over just retconning his whole existence.
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For the sake of Ardoiwn, the sake of the story, and the sake of this beautiful world you've woven I can force myself to do a little more writing.
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@Not Fishing I like the concept. You've clearly not designed him as a uniform Chlotar but rather a more morally ambiguous and shrewd politician, not so much a warring banner-man. Only thing really bothering me is the names lacking any... 'Germanic flare'. Darius and Gareth don't strike me as sounding particularly Chlotar. It could be explained away by them being from a different part of Chlotaringen, perhaps territory that had once been Celesean, making Darius' family a blend of barbarian and Celesean cultures.
After all, the Chlotars aren't a single race but rather a confederacy of various different tribes and barbarian ethnicities, and even a few Celesean ones deeper south.

Oh, a chronological technicality, but I still ought to bring it up:
Cauroman has only been King for a year. I imagine most of the stuff described in Darius' sheet would have taken place under the reign of King Carlovech instead.

If you are fine with making him a 'southern-Chlotar', Darius is fine. Though if you want him to be more traditional Chlotar, consider a name change.

Otherwise approved!

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Ah, I appear to have gotten the cultural names mixed up.
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Since I like world building I added more trivia to the lore.









--A bit more trivial--
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I forgot to add, since it's relevant to Tautom where like.. 50% of the IC currently takes place:

Tautom City houses a tremendous population unlike seen anywhere in the world. It is Visandza’s sole sprawling megalopolis to remain in the style of antiquity, with a staggering population from 100k up to 200k people. Each Tautan district is a city inside a city. Contrast this to Chlotaringen's capital of Aaixen, which has only roughly 10.000 inhabitants, and even that is considered a major city for the time.

Vast majority of people in the Barbarian Kingdoms live a rural lifestyle away from cities, as tribes do. What constitutes a city in this time, particularly a royal capital, is a castle or longhouse surrounded by housing districts for servants and their families. Aaixen is in a sense nothing more than a glorified fortress surrounded by houses where families of the royal staff live.
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I'm not off of this roleplay, I am just having a hard time irl. Reading up on the IC now.
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I updated my character sheet to add Abadactus and Raditschs, in relation to the last 2 posts.
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