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Telepathy and / or Telekinetic's a good show. Phasing / Density manipulation's another one. Looking into some established superheroes can be a good inspiration and figuring out what part of their abilities you can think of new and cool things to use it for. For example, taking some of Firestorm's powers can be a good amount of fun, especially the transmutation part.
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Hi there.

This is my character, let me know if it is okay or anything needs to be changed.

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Superhuman Ability | Energy Manipulation Sabrina possesses the ability to shape and manipulate energy from her body of varying degrees. At lower levels, she can expel energy sending a car flying away, crushing enemies against them. At higher power levels, she was able to level an entire scrapyard blowing up a large crater in the ground with a kinetic supernova. Sabrina can infuse the kinetic energy she harnesses with her physical combat to produce a potentially explosive combination. She can also use her powers in conjunction with a full body charge to attack strong opponents she is not able to defeat conventionally.

She can also use her explosive powers to cause an explosion capable of launching herself high into the air or forward into superspeed levels. She is also able to control the kinetic force spectrum, and energy field of her explosions, allowing her to create a concussive force field to shield her or others in event of an attack from projectiles or explosions.


Overall it's a very well done sheet I'd just like to lower her limits some. The tone of the RP is aiming to be something more in line with Marvel's Netflix offerings and so perhaps instead of leveling an entire scrapyard, we could bring that down to a small building such as a one or two-story residential home. Other than that, I like the sheet and her powers!
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@Lord Wraith So, I've been stalking this since the interest check phase, but I haven't yet posted any sort of interest (mainly cause November has been pretty hectic for me). However, since it's nearly come to an end, if you're still looking for new applicants, I'd like to officially throw my name into that hat.

I might not be able to really work out the kinks of my character until next week at the earliest (depending on how quickly I speed through the final week of NaNoWriMo), but if it goes all according to plan, I can certainly get something up possibly by next weekend. If that will be too long, then I shall lurk from afar. If not, then just ignore most of what I'm saying. Lack of sleep makes me a rambling mess.
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@Altered Tundra No, you should be good to post a sheet next week. Looking forward to seeing what you've got cooking up.
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@Lord Wraith

Hey thanks for taking a look at it.
I have toned down her powers and edited to what you suggested with the two-storey residential home!
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@Lord Wraith

Hey thanks for taking a look at it.
I have toned down her powers and edited to what you suggested with the two-storey residential home!


Thanks! Feel free to move the sheet to the Character Tab and post in the IC at your earliest convenience.
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@Everyone, I've updated the Character Roster to be easier for both current and new players to navigate.

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Here is my CS. sorry for how long it took to finally get it up. also feel free to make any suggestions about it.



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A post is in the works and will be up in the coming week. Will possibly have another scenario for other players to join in with if they'd like.
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A post is in the works and will be up in the coming week. Will possibly have another scenario for other players to join in with if they'd like.


That's nice. I'm still trying to figure out where exactly to insert my character in the story.
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@sly13 I'm going to sound like a pretentious asshole for a second here, but your spelling, sentence structure, grammar, and word use are off in a lot of places and need to be edited. I should also note that the sheet's formatting doesn't seem complete as you have a couple headers modified to blue but others aren't. Additionally, your jacket image isn't correctly linked or something as there's just a weird image in that hider.

In terms of actual content, I was wondering if you could take some time and further flesh out his abilities further. Chris' electrokinesis is kind of described in broad strokes and I'd like to know more about how it works, what sort of voltage/amperage he holds etc. How exactly does he skate on power lines and rails, and perhaps a better description than 'tasers on steroids'. Your weaknesses also make no mention of insulators.

Once you've finished the edits, let me know and I'll give the sheet another read but I can't accept it in its current state.
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I'm happy to announce the search for a pair of Co-GMs is over!

Allow me to introduce you to your new Co-GMs.

@Junkmail is our first Co-Gm and he will be helping me with character sheet reviews, offering his services to those who need help in fleshing out or improving their sheets. Additionally, Junk is available for post-proofing and will be aiding in approving the aesthetics of this place.

Our second Co-GM is @Hillan who will be overseeing crime in the IC having a specific focus on the development and consistency of the game's various gangs and mob. Hillan will be using his own character to push forward plots that are gang and mob-related.

Thank you to all who applied and all who have joined the game so far.
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@Junkmail is our first Co-Gm and he will be helping me with character sheet reviews, offering his services to those who need help in fleshing out or improving their sheets. Additionally, Junk is available for post-proofing and will be aiding in approving the aesthetics of this place.


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Anyone having any trouble finding a way to enter the game, deciding on what plot to join, in need of a general direction? I am here to help if anyone is stuck, so please let me know if you need it!
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Maybe but it looks like cooperative plots are rare and we mostly do our own thing?

Edit: Oh shoot! Silly me! I mistook this for the other RP where I am in with you, Lord.
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Gotta have that badass first issue.
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@Lord Wraith

Maybe but it looks like cooperative plots are rare and we mostly do our own thing?

Edit: Oh shoot! Silly me! I mistook this for the other RP where I am in with you, Lord.


Haha, in the case of Ultimate One Universe you're very much on the nose, here though I'm trying to maintain some open plots for everyone though I'll also be having my own that people are free to wander in and out of as they interact with Ellara.
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Post up by the end of this week! Would have posted sooner but I was home for a bit.
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I am planning on posting by the weekend or whenever baraquiel responds in case if anyone else wants to join in the Blood in the Water plot.

Actually, I decided to post something else. Of course, you are more than welcome to join with me and baraquiel.
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