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...so if you want to include it somehow with your character, it would be just Amaranthine for now


I can definitely do that. As for the basic structure, does it make sense to have the Lord-Governor at the top and perhaps Catherine St.Claire and her two sisters as the ones actually pulling the strings? If anything, my character might be savvy to anything they were doing since she is also a Vampire...

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Yes. Lord-Governors are the highest noble title in the Dremorian Empire. Catherine is definitely the one with the real power in Amaranthine. Her sisters are named Isabella and Helene. Isabella is a renowned clothing designer and artist while Helene is a prominent singer and musician.
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And I give you a fairy bard. Do tell if there are problems. Hope ya don't mind me throwing some Irish in here xD

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I definitely enjoyed your character. She was an interesting read, @Rune_Alchemist.

She's definitely a cute little mischievous royal fairy. I have a feeling that she won't be like being called Old, good thing she's a good liar then. XD
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Everything that is in her history is fine. There is an actual cult that I have in store dedicated to the resurrection of the Lich King so that bit falls nicely with everything else.

I am really enjoying seeing so many good characters
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I can't wait for more people's profiles to be posted. Therefore, I can read them, since I like reading profiles as much as working on them.

This is the most fun I will have in a fantasy roleplay.
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@Ithradine, here's my (mostly) completely CS. Aside from any feedback you might have on it, there are a few minor tweaks I'll make, including finding an image that works, which is probably the hardest part of creating a character :/

Anyway, let me know your thoughts...

(EDIT: Found an image!)


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Another great CS with some nice twists and turns. I really liked the mention of Catherine at the end. I didnt see anything really that struck me as needing to change. While the majority of people forget the actual way to and location of the Sanctuary due to its magic, Catherine is one of few that know it.
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Awesome thank you @Ithradine! Yeah, I had almost forgotten about her but thought that would have been a nice send off :)

Oh, and I added an image finally...
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I loved your profile, @Glyph. It was absolutely wonderful to read. And that send off was definitely chilling.
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Thanks @Landaus Five-One, it was fun to write :) I imagine I'll probably start her off wandering through some country, all the while attempting to decipher the clues to the whereabouts of the elusive "Sanctuary".
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I definitely enjoyed your character. She was an interesting read, @Rune_Alchemist.

She's definitely a cute little mischievous royal fairy. I have a feeling that she won't be like being called Old, good thing she's a good liar then. XD


Note the 'Also puts her own foot in her mouth a lot' part.

She will definitely cause a lot of trouble, but I doubt anyone is going to think she's as old as she is considering she behaves more like a spoiled brat than an adult, heh.
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@Rune_Alchemist, finally had a chance to read yours as well and Tania seems like she'll be a fun character to play. And she'll just love Rynia since she is the epitome of "morose and melancholy" lol.

Actually, that's not entirely true, but it's been a rough ride for her so be gentle or she might start swatting at you.
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Note the 'Also puts her own foot in her mouth a lot' part.

She will definitely cause a lot of trouble, but I doubt anyone is going to think she's as old as she is considering she behaves more like a spoiled brat than an adult, heh.


Spoiled Brat of a Fairy. Who's going to be a pretty nifty foil to anyone who's sad and depressed. And lol @ the "puts her own foot in her mouth a lot." On an Out of character experience, if she was near me I would probably laugh at her too. Like that elf. XD

Thanks @Landaus Five-One, it was fun to write :) I imagine I'll probably start her off wandering through some country, all the while attempting to decipher the clues to the whereabouts of the elusive "Sanctuary".


No problem. I enjoyed reading profiles anyway. Can't wait to meet your character in-rp with my character. A Human female, who's constantly unable to figure out that her jewelry is cursed in a sense. Ala, her mother was a complete bitch in a hand basket. Not able to allow her to have her inner thoughts stay her inner thoughts. At least Derrick, her father was slightly nicer even though its kinda sad she now can see other people's emotions. And if she's looking in a mirror she can see her own emotions too.
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Ill need to do some slight rewrites,

The more I think of my character the more uncertain of personality and how I want to play it off. Childlike yet strange and alien and unpredictable. I generally like making team player characters, allowing them to have their own goals, motivations, and arcs but seemlessly incorporating themselves as support characters in others personal stories as well.

A big giant walking tree person thats really nice and wants to be friends. Like Groot I guess, but more vocabulary.
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@Rune_Alchemist, finally had a chance to read yours as well and Tania seems like she'll be a fun character to play. And she'll just love Rynia since she is the epitome of "morose and melancholy" lol.

Actually, that's not entirely true, but it's been a rough ride for her so be gentle or she might start swatting at you.


Tania may or may not be well acquainted with being treated like a pest, and her elvish travel companion may or may not have had carried a glass jar labeled 'Time out'.

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Spoiled Brat of a Fairy. Who's going to be a pretty nifty foil to anyone who's sad and depressed. And lol @ the "puts her own foot in her mouth a lot." On an Out of character experience, if she was near me I would probably laugh at her too. Like that elf. XD


Glad to hear it, heh!

I did intend Tania to be a source of encouragement and confidence for people despite her obvious flaws. Mischievous and a troublemaker, but one that'll go to great lengths to help people.

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Everything that is in her history is fine. There is an actual cult that I have in store dedicated to the resurrection of the Lich King so that bit falls nicely with everything else.

I am really enjoying seeing so many good characters


Sounds good! Before I forget. If you wanna use that Elf in her history for something, feel free too, of course.
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Got a pretty good idea if things progress to that point hehehe
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I created a Discord for this RP for those who want to use it : discord.gg/wGvS7N9
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@Ithradine I've joined the Discord channel.
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Seems like we've had a pretty good turn out so far, and lots of interesting personalities, so I'm def looking forward to the official OOC

...no pressure though, @Ithradine ;)
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