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@Scarescrow

Glad you could see where we were coming from. I must admit that I'm not stoked to see Quantum physics and black hole interactions as the explanation for what's going on in your Sphere, but I'll talk to the other GMs about it and see what they think. Until then, you've got time make edits and hopefully take steps to address some of our qualms. We'll wait until you tell us that you're ready again, and then we can re-review your sheet.

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@Scarescrow

Glad you could see where we were coming from. I must admit that I'm not stoked to see Quantum physics and black hole interactions as the explanation for what's going on in your Sphere, but I'll talk to the other GMs about it and see what they think. Until then, you've got time make edits and hopefully take steps to address some of our qualms. We'll wait until you tell us that you're ready again, and then we can re-review your sheet.

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Love the questions, concerns and suggestions. A lot of which I too thought of after writing the sheet. We can talk about it tomorrow for sure. But with that and with this, fittingly, I sleep. Goodnight!
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Upon request by the author and for the integrity of the GM review process, feedback for @Cyclone's character:


And hell, let's do @BBeast's character, too:


And before you gooses honk at me for being too easy at approvals, I'll put it out there that I've rebuffed the least number of CSs behind the scenes than both the other GMs. Fite me, boi.
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@Scarescrow I have some comments on Noc and your interpretation of it.

The main issue is that you have come here assuming Earth physics and tried to shoehorn your vision of Noc into a hand-waved version of Earth physics. This is more convoluted than necessary. Noc is a Sphere. As a Sphere, Noc literally defines physics. Noc does not have to obey rules because it creates them.

If you desire Noc to function on the premises of probabilistic quantum mechanics (or its relatives), then have Noc cause probabilistic quantum mechanics. Then you can be more concrete - first you describe quantum, making sure to mention that this is Noc's contribution to the universe. Then you can link that to Noc's supernovae. Or, alternatively, don't explain the mechanism of the supernovae at all and say it just happens, because Spheres are allowed to say it just happens. (Cyclone would probably be happier with this latter one, but I'm a theoretical physicist so I'm cool with the former provided you can actually write it in a coherent manner.)

In terms of the geometry, how I see it is that the part of Noc which intersects Galbar-space is a fraction of an atom thick, while the web-home is sitting out in higher dimensions outside Galbar-space. Aside from the extreme differences in scale, this is a rather standard arrangement for numerous Spheres. How you transition from web-home to Galbar-space is unclear, though, although this is a rather minor point.

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Nice post gold
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Just did some light edits and added some stuff that makes him more involved with Galbar

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We continue our regularly scheduled () reviews.

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Nice post Rodent.
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Nice post Iso
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The GMs have discussed the matter of how your Spheres start. We have agreed upon the following:

- The Spheres begin featureless - this doesn't necessarily mean they are an empty void, but it precludes any interesting features. At most, you might have a flat barren plain with whatever passes for sky in this Sphere overhead. (P.S. The space above Galbar is empty. If you want celestial bodies visible from Galbar, those need to be created as per the points below.)

- The gods need to spend MP/FP to put features into their Sphere (subject to normal rules for spending MP/FP).

- The baseline price for producing the general broad features is 8 MP, although especially grandiose Spheres require 25 MP.

- More complex and fine details, such as life, require additional expenditure of MP, as normal.

- The influence of the Sphere on Galbar comes for free.

No changes are necessary to the character sheets. The Spheres entry in the character sheets are taken to be part of your plans for Turn 1 (or Turns 1 and 2 for exceptionally expensive Spheres).
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Sphereical man
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HEY THERRRRRRE

DOG MANNNNNNNN

NOW I DRRRINK FROM YOUR BOWLLLLLLL
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Scarifar Presto~!

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To those of you updating sheets because you were accepted contingent upon recommendations, rejected pending changes, or were accepted but nonetheless chose to react to my suggestions with changes (yay), just hang tight. I'll try to re-review your new drafts and respond appropriately, but I'd like to give every sheet its first review before returning to give any a second one.

That out of the way, moving on to a few more reviews.

@Strange Rodent for Eurysthenes


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And that it's for now folks, but hopefully I'll get another three or so out within five or six hours from now.
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Soon~
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Soon said the spoon one afternoon
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Here goes! Shield your eyes, fellas!


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