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@Vrrak Alright, I'm getting a better idea on what you're going for. I'll try redoing it a bit to better fit the RP (makes it easier for me to respond to).

Will be reviewing the sheets in a few hours and open up the discord.
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Just include an explanation on how he got his bounty. Also, you can give him a moniker or would you prefer that I just give you some random one?

Aside from the DF and the Metal Oar, any other ability/talent you want to include? Given his size, maybe you wanna give him enhanced strength or endurance?

If you've got nothing to put in others, you can just remove it from the sheet. Once you've addressed these issues, Kago's accepted.


So far, so good. I think no real changes are needed. Aqua's in.


Just remove the sections for OTHERS, CHARACTER PROGRESSION, and ARC SUGGESTION from your sheet.

Everything is good with Violet, but I'll be editing her DF ability a bit. I'll be posting the revised version; don't worry, won't be changing the concept you're going for. Otherwise, she's in.


No real issues here; Mera's in.

@Duthguy@pr3acher@Vrrak@Saltwater Thief Once you edited the stuff I've mentioned, feel free to post in the character tab.

Here's the link to the thread's discord server.

Other announcements will include:
- Plans to include an Item classification (to give you guys a general idea on an item's quality, rarity, and durability)
- For @Vrrak, the thing with your DF
- I'll be starting the RP in the next few days; feel free to work on your character's relationships with one another. Let's say they all met within the span of around a month; you guys decide on the sequence on how you guys joined the crew. And as the premise stated, we start in the South Blue.

I guess that's about it for now.


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Here she is. The potentially powerful Devil Fruit user so she is not really exceptional anywhere else. Jk that's just who she is.

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@pr3acher I mostly made Kago that tall to increase the number of hornets he has but I will give him give either increased strength or endurance. As for his bounty guess I needed to explain it a better but Wapol used his connections to the government, though even with those it was hard to get a high bounty for someone who basically stole an oar. I will include that though.

@Saltwater Thief Once Kago learns of Mera's backstory I can see them getting close, you?
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@alexfangtalon I'll be completely honest, "The Blaring Silence" is both edgy and cringey. But since "Roar of the Sea" exists, I guess we can roll with that,

Bounty-wise, I'll say they won't give her a big one just for eating a specific DF. I'll say betweem 3M-5M if the only thing she did was fight against some marines. Also, let's go with the non-alternative origin story.

DF-wise, I see nothing wrong for now. So yeah, Ade's in.
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@Duthguy Works for me! Since we're saying the crew's been together around a month, as long as nothing drastic has happened I think Mera will have decided to trust the lot of them. Just to simplify things.
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is this still accepting?
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@JackDLemmy Yup. Will probs start things out in the next day or two.
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@Vrrak As I mentioned earlier, I wanted to revise your DF. Hopefully with the same concept, but with slightly different mechanics.

I’ll try going at it in a step-wise manner.
  • Instead of a REPEAT FRUIT, it’ll be an IMAGE FRUIT instead. The base ability that it grants would be the power to create an object that the user has come in contact to and is able to see. Everytime the ability is use, the sound of a camera shutter is heard.
  • Using your words, with a few tweaking on my part, It creates a slightly fuzzy version of the original that floats in place and continues to exist until it's disturbed by anything that makes physical contact with it.
  • What your character is able to do with it now is to assign simple tasks to the objects she creates, such as repeating a certain action.
  • PASHA is the japanese onomatopoeia of a camera shutter. So it’ll be the IMAGE IMAGE FRUIT or the PASHA PASHA NO MI.
  • You might think that this would be unnecessary since you come up with the same thing, but it just makes things easier for me to regulate once things get more complicated.
  • Given what you sent me earlier on how you plan to upgrade this ability, we’ll be having the same thing. It just changes the base ability to image creation with additional upgrades being focused on manipulating the images you create.

Cleaning it up, you’ll be left with this. Its basically the same thing though, so I hope everything's cool with you.

Devil Fruit: Image Fruit (Pasha Pasha no Mi)
Violet is able to create an object that she is in physical contact with and within her field of vision. Everytime the ability is use, the sound of a camera shutter is heard. The image produced will appear as a slightly fuzzy version of the original that floats in place. and continues to exist until it's disturbed by anything else that makes physical contact with it.
  • Violet has learned to INSTRUCT the images she creates with simple commands. She primarily uses this of course with her weapon of choice: guns. She also uses this power to reload her guns. Theoretically the power would work on other things but why would she need to use it on anything besides guns?


By the way, I noticed that you actually have 4 abilities. 3 marksman-based ones and the DF itself, but its cool. I’ll just offer the same thing to the others as well.

@Solotros Will get to you in a bit.
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Included an item tier list in the opening post. It only serves as a general guide on what to expect from certain objects. For those with items, I’ll appraise the stuff your guys have.

@Saltwater Thief I’ll assume that its an unnamed weapon.
Tachi [T2]: Thirthy inches in length with its pommel decorated with a seashell


@SubjectVision I’ll say unnamed as well, unless you wanna give it one.
Kusarigama [T2]: A small, double-edged iron sickle that is connected to a weight through a strong chain, about eight feet long.


@Vrrak Since you gave it a bounty, your special gun should have a name.
2x Flintlock Pistols [T1]
1x Flintlock Revolver [T1]: A larger pistol made to fire larger ammunition, leading to extreme kickback but more power.
1x Named Revolver [T4]
An extremely exotic gold-plated revolver with intricate designs in the metal. It's a stolen priceless prototype capable of shooting exotic experimental bullets (of which Violet has none). It shoots regular bullets with amazing precision though, on top of looking amazing.


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Wapometal Oar [T3]: An oar made from Wapometal, that can change into a metal baseball bat or a buckler.


@Solotros Everything’s good here, dude. Just in time for the IC. With a bounty of 20M, the highest in the crew, and given his history, Leo should have a nickname by now. No worries, it'll be somewhat of a street name. Characters in the series have changed their monikers from time to time.

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@pr3acher Excellent! And yeah I figured he should have one, I just am horrible at that. I know I sent you a message regarding it, but if anyone here as any ideas for a good moniker feel free to let me hear them!
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What roles in the crew i.e doctor, carpenter are claimed by what character? I myself don't really care what Karo gets so I'll simply take something that's left
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@Duthguy Overlapping wrongs wouldn't be a problem, so don't worry about that. Both Sunny and Mera have navigation skills, but one uses the waves while the other winds. Same goes for marksmen with different weapons or doctors that practice different kinds of medicine.
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Couple of changes:
  • Edited the inventory, adding the Kusarigama as requested.
  • Changed the name of "Chain Syckle Style" to "Kusarigama Proficiency" to make it more consistent.
  • Added the "Acrobatics" skill.


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@Duthguy Overlapping wrongs wouldn't be a problem, so don't worry about that. Both Sunny and Mera have navigation skills, but one uses the waves while the other winds. Same goes for marksmen with different weapons or doctors that practice different kinds of medicine.


Mera's also a little more suited to piloting the ship as opposed to charting a course from island to island. So her primary role would probably be helmsman (plus rescuing these DF users when they end up in the drink)
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@Duthguy Eh don't worry. Worse case Kago and Leo get the lofty position as the ships official bruisers.
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@pr3acher Did something happen to the discord?
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I apologize for the sudden inactivity. I won't be able to continue with this RP and won't be on these forums for quite a while. Sorry for the effort and time some of you spent on this. Hopefully the next RP you join, be it One Piece or something else, will prosper. Good luck in RPing peoples.
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