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Additional people.
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I have changed my mind! I am making an ant-like nation. I think this will be interesting.
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Yo! I, uh, recognize a few people here from another space NRP that kind of fell apart a long time ago. Hope no one has any hard feelings about that but is this still open for applicants? I'm willing to throw my hat in

The concept I got right now is, essentially, shameless feudal not!vampires in space.
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So I'm still working on some thing's, but I was wondering if this fourth Ark I've made for the Draetor would work in the context of both the faction and the roleplay. If not, let me know and I'll change it. As always, suggestions are welcome.

{{The Ark of Tranquility: The Tranquility serves as both an embassy for foreign delegations, and as a place of study for galactic politics in general. Being what it is, the Ark of Tranquility is one of the only places in which a strong Draetorin military presence is not felt or even seen, despite the fact that there are still defenses in place should guests come with an intention of bringing harm. It is also one of the most unique of all the Arks ever constructed by the Draetor, as it not only has no real defenses other than the minor one's put into place by the Minister of War at the behest of the Emperor, but also looks nothing like the other's.

Rather than following the same angular golden black metallic format as the other Arks, the Tranquility looks more like a massive flying city that was built by a myriad of races over time rather than a highly imposing death fortress like all the others. The Tranquility is also unique as it is the first ship the Draetor send out when holding talks or negotiations, as allowing foreigners into the Ark of Governance is seen as too great of a risk. The Tranquility is overseen by the Minister of Foreign Affairs, Baheel Nadish. Her word is law for anyone aboard the craft and cannot be overridden by anyone or anything else save for the Emperor himself.}}
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@CrunchyCHEEZIT We got plenty of room, no worries.
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Siera is revising, Clock might rework his whole NS, so for the moment, I've addressed every NS.

Keep em coming, here or on discord.

I guess now is the time to go through the OOC more thoroughly and start answering questions here.

But I don't wanna read the whole thing properly, so if you have a question for me, repost it and tag me here, or PM it to me.
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@OzerathSo this came up early on regarding ship classes. Where would you put the Ashtar vessels?
While we have an unofficial "headcanon" on relative powerlevels some clarification could help.
If we'd face them again would Ashtar cruisers be the equivalent to modern battleships or greater? How large were they?
(asking as if they were cruiser sized as their name implies or actually bigger)

Second, where would the "Ashtar capital ships" be ranked at? Would hyperdreads be of similar size to them (small moon) or perhaps smaller? Would the capital ships of the Ashtar be still leagues stronger than whatever hyperdreads we are making?
Speaking of which what interpretation of "small moon" we should use?
My personnal impression is that they were the length of Phobos (~23km) but nowhere close to the same volume.
They were gigantic but we aren't talking about Death Stars.

Some clarification on this front could of course help.
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Cruisers were pretty normal cruiser size, but punched far above their weight because the high techness and such.

Capital ships were dramatically larger. They've scaled anywhere from 100km to 1000km long in their past incarnations, so pick a number that makes you comfortable somewhere in that range. Combat power would've increased proportionately. They'd outclass any hyperdread or combination of hyperdreads the galaxy could build.

I'm pretty determined that we will not be encountering those in the RP.
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@Ozerath
So I'm reposting my current WIP sheet here for critique. Again, any suggestions as to how I can improve my empire, or make their governmental system less confusing, are welcome.

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Alright, so I hate to do this, but I'll have to withdraw from this for the time being. I've just been feeling swamped lately, and the fact that I'm close to finishing the application process of getting into college has only made that feeling worse. I won't delete the Draetor, but I won't be able to reasonably participate in this anytime soon.
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@ZAVAZggg That's ok, it happens in life and sometimes you have set your priorities, but the rp is open if you decide to rejoin later or find you have the time.
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@ZAVAZggg Ditto what Sigma said, if we're running, you're welcome to come back.
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@ZAVAZggg That's ok, it happens in life and sometimes you have set your priorities, but the rp is open if you decide to rejoin later or find you have the time.


Thanks. And like I said, the Draetor aren't going anywhere, so I'll probably work on them from time to time still. Who knows, might even get some new inspiration along the way.
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@ZAVAZggg With that in mind I'll read the NS and PM you some feedback.
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Understood.
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Big work in progress, but I got the gist of the species, government, and overall theme down. Lemme know if anything looks off right away.

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@CrunchyCHEEZIT Creative.
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@CrunchyCHEEZIT Looks pretty good so far! I'll let Oz have the final say, but so far, I'm liking it :)
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Not all day i see that but truth be told very good @CrunchyCHEEZIT
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Heyo, Ozerath pulled me into this. I'll have a writeup posted tomorrow ideally.
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