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A few typos - recommend rereading it to take care of those. Concerning content I see no issues, other than maybe the kybuck inuendo. But that might be just me.

The relationship with Nathisse Ratinde is provisional, until that character's approval.
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Apologies on the typos - I proofed it a couple times but sometimes knowledge of the intent creates a blind spot, so I'll re-read and correct them. Regarding the kybuck innuendo, I understand that the character itself treads a fine line on the NSFW policy - she's in adult entertainment - but I hoped leaving it as innuendo or interpretation would stay on the safe side of the line. If I'm mistaken on that, then let me know and I'll be more careful with what slips in.

Understood on Nathisse.

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I will second (or third) this approval.
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