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I don't see anything either, and I'm on PC, so don't think its your phone, Akaya.
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Crawl

The Crawl is an ancient race of monsters. Found under Cyrin Primes surface. These creatures are savage, brutal killers, each designed to wield death. They have no mercy, fear no death and have no need for moral status. The creatures first took full control over Cyrin Primes undergrowth. Then, its above-ground lands, but even that was not enough, nothing was enough. They consumed and consumed until the planet became a barren wasteland, rotted with their filth. Then, a mining vessel came to explore. Some of them got on the ship unnoticed. They slipped into its cargo and were shipped off to almost every corner in the universe. They grew hoards and armies and began to terrorize small colonies in the outskirt sectors. Now they begin to sweep the larger colonized areas of space. When they met the Collation, they were all filled with rage. Even the thought of peace sutured their minds with hate, they wish not only to consume all. But to watch the survivors suffer. The Crawl has risen, and if they are going to go down, they want to take the universe with them.

The Crawl have many different creatures. Some, used for building and mining. Others, used for killing and war.

Crawler: A small creature that cannot fight well. These creatures are workers more than soldiers. They are the backbone of any Crawl operation. They construct and tend brood, and fight only if extremely necessary. There aren't that many of them in a hive.

Reaver: A medium creature that fights as well as it works. These creatures are a little of both soldier and worker. They are the main infantry, and can be found in massive swarms, normally around 200,000 - 100,000,000 in an army. They are weak though, two shots with a glock 17 and their already dead. You could even use a slingshot and a rock, throw it hard and hit its head: Its dead.

Ravager: Ravagers are medium creatures that are excellent fighters. They are strongly soldiers and rarely do work. They train and train and train. They begin training 3 hours after birth. They sleep 1 day a week and train and fight the other 6 days. They have biological air sacs built into them so they can breathe for about 4-9 hours in space. There are normally 100,000 - 60,000,000 in an army.

Scythe: Scythe's are assassins. They are medium creatures, about the size of a human. They always go alone. They have 4 arms and 2 legs. 2 of its arms are Scythe-like blades. They also have a natural cloaking ability and large amounts of intelligence. They sabotage ships and structures, and assassinate specific targets. Also, most have been known to leave no witnesses.

Besieger: This creature is massive in size, about the size of a small house. They are meant to literally charge at walls and ram them with their shield-shaped heads. They have massive amounts of natural armour and have 6 tentacles hanging just bellow its mouth, 4 large tusks that act as massive mandibles, each huge enough to impale a plane, and a massive maw full of teeth. This walking fortress also may carry Head splitters to protect it more.

Head Splitters: Head Splitters are large tentacle-like creatures that are long and thin. They are about as tall as a street lamp and as long as a semi truck. They crawl through air ducts and (as their name suggests), with its large spear-like blade at its tip, splits its targets head through the air duct. They are deadly and fast, but are weak and have no natural armour. Kind of like a worm.

Screecher: Screechers are medium sized creatures with no arms or legs. Instead, they have 4 bat-like wings and a 2 foot long tail. They are fast and agile, but weak. They have an unusual amount of eyes, and can spit an acid-filled spore that explodes upon impact with any physical object. They get their name from their strange ability to Screech at a very high-pitched volume, to alert other Crawl for danger, enemies or ambush. There is almost no escape from a Screechers gaze once it spots you. They also have a larger air sac they use and their wings are strong enough to lightly launch them in space, its like gliding in space, but they have little or no control of where they go, because of this, the prefer to go to places with any source of gravity.

Queen: A Queen is a massive hulking creature. They are huge and born for combat (though they do not do it often), and lay eggs almost all day, every day. The eggs vary, depending on what creature is going to spawn. The Queen has large natural armour, witch makes up to 63% of her body weight.

Sorry this took so long. A few incidents came up. Its finished though. Enjoy! You are free to change anything here, and add more to this.
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I don’t see anything attached or a link? Can you resend or repost? Sorry if I am missing it, I am on mobile.


Again. Sorry it took so long. I planned to post a second reply after the first a few minuets after the first. I did not get to for a while. Its here now though.
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anyway, here is a prototype of my character sheet.
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Name: Shade
Age: 27
Race: Crawl Scythe
Appearance: Tall, thin and sleek. Dark green scaled skin, lizard-like head, two yellow lizard-like eyes on each side of his head, and a long sleek tail.
Faction: Crawl
Role in team: N/A
Bio: Shade is smart, smarter than most Crawl. He managed to get past high level intelligence tests in the Hive. He was always good at stealth, he was born for it after all. He was excellent at what he does, witch is why he was tasked with killing the Marauders after they were discovered by the Crawl.
Personality: Aggressive, glass Half full, half empty kind of guy, with a little bit of greed here and there.
Weapons : T.S.S.R Automatic pulse rifle (stolen), T.S.S.R F39 plasma pistol (stolen), Plasma knife (stolen), 9 Pulse rifle canisters (stolen), 15 Plasma pistol canisters (stolen), torn dark brown cloak (crafted), 2 T.S.S.R Stun grenade (stolen)
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Hello? I just posted a couple minutes ago. I know I was late. Im getting tired. Its 11:27 PM........I just need to confirm if this is good to go....
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Hey, just stopping by because @Esailia was being passive aggressive in PMs out of the blue. It looked like things died here for a bit and I must have unsubscribed from the thread during the last inactive period when scrolling through on my phone.

Apologies for disappearing out of the blue, but I certainly won't return if other players in this thread are going to be jerks in PMs after 6 months. I'll try to stay subscribed and read through what y'all write still cause it was a great time.

Peace!
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what a gamer
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... you guys are still awake? So am i............
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can I post my character on the Character Chat now???
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Please give me time to look over everything and talk it over with the GM if possible.
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I am so sorry! I did not know that you were PMd and obviously whatever was said is not alright if you feel as though they were being passive aggressive. It is so good to hear from you and I wish we were doing so under better circumstances. Things got quiet and I completely understand you getting silent or unsubscribing as others have done. I love your character and it is sad to see you go but thank you for staying subscribed even to read. You are always welcome, just know that. Thank you for bringing this to our attention.
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its ok. Ill see you tomorrow!
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One more thing. The Crawl have not been discovered by the Marauders yet. The collation knows a little about them, but believe they are tall tails, fake stories and lies. I have Insomnia.........I haven't slept yet....
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Hi. What did the GM say?
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Hello? Can I get the discord link please?
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Gm doesn't come online often, he's busy. Chill out for a bit, things will happen. This RP is slow paced.
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Ok. I can wait.
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Hey, @Nate1008! I'm glad this RP caught your interest, and I'm sorry that I left you waiting!

Everything @Akayaofthemoon said I completely agreed with.

The Crawl give me a creepy "Flood" vibe from Halo haha! Although it'd be interesting to see, they are also somewhat similar to the "Dread" characters Akaya and I created as the main antagonists of the RP.

Also, creating an antagonist villain would be difficult for pacing. There will be times where the crew isn't in immediate danger, like right now, and having that character put in would either force us to rush through character development moments, or having your character wait to post again.

I'm not opposed to another challenge for the Marauders, but I think the Crawl would be difficult to balance with what's going on, you know?

I suggest making "two" characters that are intertwined at that point. The main character that's a part of the crew, and a second one that's an antagonist and related to your main character (for example: Twins, and one of them was infected by a hivemind-like enemy that's trying to go after their sibling, since it feeds on their memory, maybe trying to get revenge on them for abandoning them).

Again, I don't wanna shut down your idea, but it's just not the direction Akaya and I wanna go with
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