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@Haruharara

hello it is me, person.

You're review kind of inspired me to re-evaluate my character a little bit, and thus I changed her backstory. Now instead of revenge for her dad, her parents are alive and she is more just kind of a bitch to people for no obvious reason. But she is searching for identity and purpose and feels isolated, misunderstood, and useless. So she's lashing out at the world and searching for something to put herself to good use, you know? I have the previous version saved if this one doesn't make sense. I guess I just wanted to give her more room for character growth. But I made changes to clearly explain her attraction to Breath of the Wind.

I got rid of any mentions of Muzan because I don't know if that's a secret or what role that thing plays in the lore. I assumed Muzan was like, a villian known to everyone like demon hitler or something. my mistake.

Anyway, I changed Akira from someone looking for revenge to someone looking for identity and purpose. What do you think? Is that okay? Sorry if I sprung this on you, I can change her back and just make small edits.
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@Haruharara Is that the illustrious big green light, or is there anything else I should fix?
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You can move her over yes, I was just going to review it with other people’s sheets as well.
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@Haruharara okay! you could just tell me to wait though, you know? incase we need to follow the just and proper protocol
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This is amazing! I was hoping an RP of this series would open up sooner or later. I'm very well interested in joining, if it is possible.
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This is meant to be a large scale RP and I intend it to have many moving parts and independent variables.

The only thing I ask people adhere to is that if they apply for a Pillar role they must post at least once a week.
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Seeing some other sheets, it seems using a canon Breath but with altered forms is acceptable? So I hope the Breath of Love is okay, even if in canon it's pretty specific to one character. I have a back-up plan if it's not. I'd also like to throw my hat in for a Pillar spot if accepted. Let me know if anything needs changing! A FC/picture will come soon, I was more concerned with getting the actual content approved

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This interests me.

How many people we got so far locked in or close to?
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Yeah you can use canon breaths as long as their iteration is tasteful and creative, seems fine on your part. What does our holy woman look like though?
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I’m taking people till I start ripping my hair out.
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Updated my CS to include an image!
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As an additional note, Gerard no speak good Japan, so I'll be putting words he speaks in English in <<>>, straight up slap down Latin as it is, and leave his broken Japanese in quotation marks only.
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I'll draw the dude tomorrow.

I'm not sure if I should make him a pillar either though, but he certainly has that power level in mind.

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@Aviaire
As we've talked extensively in PMs about her and how much I like her, she is accepted and I look forward to Oceangirl.

@Demous
Simple, nothing too extra. There is a disappointing lack of Breath of Thunder users, I wonder why? Zenitsu is best boy. Accepted

@addamas
Demon #1 is accepted. Thanks for putting the wall-o-text in a hider.

@Vocab
Spirit Ninja with dat booty is accepted.

@Yankee
Maria-mommy is accepted, also thank you for making an older character as we are in a dire need for vets.

@ERode
Christian Saitama is accepted, edge face-claim. Thank you for coordinating with a fellow player before we even started!

@Sho Minazuki
The one openly critiqued sheet of this machine-gun review episode, the brief biography doesn't really tell me much to validate their spot as a pillar. PM if you would like to discuss that a bit, or just review it over, run it through the idea train and spin it back at me. Other than that? The breath is cool, I can tell you're very passionate in the idea and I respect the hell out of that. But just justify that pillar spot to me? I need to believe in the you, that believes in me.


TO ALL THE PEOPLE I DID NOT REVIEW! I WILL BE PMing YOU SHORTLY! I JUST GOT BACK FROM WORK!
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@Haruharara don't pull your hair out :(
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@Haruharara I'm actually just not sure what's involved with becoming a pillar in the lore so I have no idea lol. That's it.
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You think he's being edgy, but that's actually just him pouting about Maria not letting him keep mangy stray cats in her home.
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Sorry if these questions were asked before but:

You started off with the Showa period being the upswing of Japanese imperialism? But WWII isn't actually that far from the actual main series? Less than two years probably. So did, in this timeline, the Japanese win WWII? Like, was Tokyo never firebombed? Did we not get the two nukes? Or maybe the nukes didn't have as big an impact? Or maybe the Japanese didn't win the war but the Americans didn't have as heavy a hand in writing the Japanese constitution? Like, what's up with that?
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