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I'll drop a app soon.
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Hey fellas! I don't think any of you have come on into the Discord yet, so I'd like to invite you (and anybody else ut there that I'm overlooking) to come on in.

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I made this announcement yesterday on that Discord, but to anybody who isn't in there or who missed it: Oraculum and I will soon start reviewing the character sheets en masse, and hopefully within a few days we'll be able to get the IC started.
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Right so it's time to begin these formalized reviews. We've already given some feedback to many of you on the Discord channel, but nonetheless we'll still try to reciprocate your time and effort in crafting the CS with time and effort of our own in giving as much useful feedback and honest thoughts that we can, rather than just a flat approval or rejection. So without further ado:

@ZAVAZggg for Tarr'kash


@Vec for Gyvressainth


@Humble1 for Shiran


And of course @Antarctic Termite got accepted earlier today on the Discord. Oraculum and I have nothing but praise for your third CS there pal; it’s honestly better than the one that I made for King Uhtric, haha.

And that’s all for right now, for Oraculum is only a meager mortal and not a mighty scion, so he must succumb to weariness and sleep now. More reviews shall come later!

Those of you who get accepted can repost your sheets into the character tab for ease of reference later. And for anybody that didn’t get approved just now or doesn’t get approved on the first round when we do the pass over your sheet eventually, don’t sweat. A rejection from us is nothing personal; our criticisms may seem exhaustive, but that’s just because we don’t want to waste your time string you along three or four times when we could just tell you all our complaints so that you have a chance to address them in one go. For all our pickiness we’re happy to answer any questions and you’re welcome to edit your character sheets as many times as necessary, or scrap them altogether and start anew if that’s what you’d prefer.
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Hey, so this is a work in progress that has basically nothing in it right now, I'm just putting it here because I'm tired and would rather have it out there rather than leave it in my head.

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whoopsy, this was meant to go in the character section
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Am I on the right track here??

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HELLO
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The concept is interesting, but I am not sure if I would fit into the RP so I will lurk a bit. Character-wise, I am thinking of a corrupter/deal-maker type character. He will give you whatever you want, you just have to be slowly mentally and physically corrupted as you do increasingly sinister acts to keep it.
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By all means! There's no rush; I think we'll be accepting new applications even after the IC starts (hopefully that'll be in a few days). In the event that you make up your mind to join, DM Oraculum or I and we'll get you a link to the Discord.
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@Cyclone Second time 'round. Let's see what fishes we catch.
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Trying to have something down to be a bit more concrete than my ramblings of thoughts:


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Round two of the CS reviews is here.

@Forett for Sol’Kureth


@Pagemaster for the Orphan Twins


@Vec for Manzallu


More to come tomorrow, when I can rouse my henchman Ora!
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Time for another round of reviews! Most of these were written in a groggy haze, so if you see anything less than cohesive in there blame it on that (no, that doesn't mean the verdicts are negotiable).

@Fetzen for Vaught



@Sophrus for Mortan



@Leotamer for Cucaniensis



@Legion02 for Allura



More to come when we're out of Morpheus' embrace.
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I will get a CS up as well.
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Don't drink the water, kids.

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