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Sorry, I don't see OOC responses as quickly as IC. Asterisks is fine, kind of like if a camera were sitting in the room with them.
*The room is filled with stalagmites and cave slimes*


Oh so it's like a script writing format! That's actually fun!
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Oh hey! I didn't realize that you guys liked it! Thank you so much! And actually where do you I would fit in easily? It's fun to adapt especially if I mix suggestions to make something cool!


It'd probably be the least overhead to add you to this dungeon exploration mission that Gio and Lily just picked up Veil on. If you or @Franxx have any suggestions or better ideas, feel free to override me here.
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Oh so it's like a script writing format! That's actually fun!


I think it makes the interaction feel more real, personally. Not a lot of RPs do that format.
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I think it makes the interaction feel more real, personally. Not a lot of RPs do that format.


Aha cool! (^^)
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Actually, I really wouldn't mind. The more the merrier, it's like forming a four person party right off the bat on a random quest.
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Oooh how is my idea? I basically make an introduction helping you guys within the dungeon, Cersei flying overnight swooping down to blind the current opponent and Aerith hops down in a land and smile. "Looks like you need help, mind if I join in?"
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Aha cool! (^^)


Actually, I really wouldn't mind. The more the merrier, it's like forming a four person party right off the bat on a random quest.


Awesome, sounds like we can add you to the dungeon then, unless you're opposed to that. Could probably have some really neat dynamics.
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Oooh how is my idea? I basically make an introduction helping you guys within the dungeon, Cersei flying overnight swooping down to blind the current opponent and Aerith hops down in a land and smile. "Looks like you need help, mind if I join in?"


Hmm, I'm not opposed, but we'd need to get engaged with it first so I'll just say heads up to @Fractured
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Hmm, I'm not opposed, but we'd need to get engaged with it first so I'll just say heads up to @Fractured


Hey I'm pretty good! Just waiting on your command! Can't wait to talk to you all!
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Hmm, I'm not opposed, but we'd need to get engaged with it first so I'll just say heads up to @Fractured


Sounds good to me. Let's make it a tough monster, then.

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Hey I'm pretty good! Just waiting on your command! Can't wait to talk to you all!


Likewise!
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Alright, I've got to go to bed here in a short few. If you two are in a different time zone or night owls, feel free to continue this without me until I get up.

@Vacare@Franxx
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Alright, I've got to go to bed here in a short few. If you two are in a different time zone or night owls, feel free to continue this without me until I get up.

@Vacare@Franxx


Oh I see, will do! Thanks for the help with the intro!
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One last thing @Franxx, nice first post! A couple of tricks to make it easier is that we usually use first person present tense for actions, which we’ve found helps keeps the flow going. So something like

Hey, who are all of you??
*The girl with auburn hair said to the strangers in front of her*

would end up feeling more real and impactful if written like

Hey, who are all of you??
*Brushes my auburn hair behind my ear, wariness scribbled across my face*

The second example ends up bringing the character to life, and feels like we’re personally interacting with them rather than reading about what they did.


Again though, nice job hopping in!
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One last thing @Franxx, nice first post! A couple of tricks to make it easier is that we usually use first person present tense for actions, which we’ve found helps keeps the flow going. So something like

Hey, who are all of you??
*The girl with auburn hair said to the strangers in front of her*

would end up feeling more real and impactful if written like

Hey, who are all of you??
*Brushes my auburn hair behind my ear, wariness scribbled across my face*

The second example ends up bringing the character to life, and feels like we’re personally interacting with them rather than reading about what they did.


Again though, nice job hopping in!


Ah thanks! Sorry I got so used to writing it like a book! I mostly do it before i interact fully with anyone so dont worry! Thank you for letting me in aha!
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Ah thanks! Sorry I got so used to writing it like a book! I mostly do it before i interact fully with anyone so dont worry! Thank you for letting me in aha!


For sure, it’s a super common thing we see all the time. Welcome aboard =)
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I REPLIED TOO QUICKLY AHHHH
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I REPLIED TOO QUICKLY AHHHH


You’re fiiine. Don’t worry about it =)
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One of us indeed... Mind you we are two different people. We happen to be friends IRL, she asked for my help formatting her sheet haha.
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I don't want to progress too far cause we might risk leaving Gio and Lily behind. So for now, I'll call it until tomorrow.
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Oh, that’s awesome. First players who know each other IRL.

Usually we assume that characters are still there when the player is offline. There’s an allowance for a bit of time flexibility if necessary, but usually they jump back in where they were and continue on. It ends up being difficult to coordinate everyone being online at once when you have enough people doing a single thing.
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