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And here's Isac! Hope he passes inspection.
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@Vermicelli Forgot to tag ya.
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@Guppy Franz
A couple of grammatical/spelling errors here and there, but I don't see any issue with the character himself. Feel free to post it to the Characters tab after proofreading, and you can start on your opener.

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I'll try come up with a questionnaire and post it here sometime this week. Anyone who wants to answer it for their character can.
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Sweet! Already spotted the errors and I'll fix them quick.

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Here is a questionnaire you may have your characters fill out if you want. Their answers will be added to their Notion page.


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Updated my character profile a bit because I was unsatisfied. Post coming in 10.
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Second round of posts is done. I don't know if I should keep posting updates after everyone posts, or if I should make updates individually as you guys post them, but not letting anyone progress too far ahead in the story. If you guys don't mind the wait, I can keep doing updates the way I'm doing, otherwise we can discuss it. I'm open to suggestions.
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@Vermicelli
Sorry for the wait, I'll try to have something up tonight. Been a bit busy.
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No worries. If you have any questions or anything you want to discuss that can help you, let me know.
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Actually, I was wondering just how much freedom I have in Isaac's current dilemma? Didn't want to derail anything you may have planned for this.@Vermicelli
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@Guppy FranzThat's kind of a vague question and I'd hate to answer it with another question, but it would help if I knew what you'd want to try and accomplish in the next post. Obviously, I know that Isaac is going to want an out to the situation, but it's unlikely that he'll come out on top considering the conditions: He's already sustained injuries and he's outnumbered by guys who got the drop on him while he was sleeping on the train. The thugs are trying to reason with their demands—they know Isaac is just a merc with no personal attachment on why he attacked them prior, so they don't have to kill him as long as they think he's going to stay out of their way. If you want to turn this into an all-out brawl on the metro, I'll roll with it, but from a reasonable perspective it doesn't really need to escalate.
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My bad, it was pretty late when I asked the question so forgive the vagueness, wasn't all there. Anyway what I wanted know is if it was okay if I made up my own dialogue for thugs? Because with Isaac there's no way he'll tell the thugs anything, it would ruin is reputation as a freelance. He's definitely not making it out of this without a few more bruises. He's definitely not up for an all out brawl and will do his best to talk his way out of it, but I just didn't know if you wanted to do the talking for the thugs or if it was alright if I did?

Still a bit groggy, just woke up, but hopefully this question is better.
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No need to apologize, I appreciate the communication nonetheless. I was going to make the leader of this group of thugs an established character, so I’ll be in control of him. I can tell you what he’d say in response to what Isaac would say or we could work on a collab post in DMs.
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Alright sweet! I'll DM you later then after I get done with a few errands today.
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I responded fast because it's good to be proactive but I don't think I totally like it, don't wait on me to but that might get an edit if there's a month between turns again
Also Cherry's original sheet is cringe
Just thought I'd drop that because it's haunting me all of a sudden
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How fast the rounds have been going are likely par for the course throughout this roleplay, so don't feel the need to crank out a post as the updates happen. If you're unsatisfied with your post, feel free to remake it, just let me know when you've adjusted/locked it in because I don't believe I get notifications for edits. If you also want to make adjustments to your character or want to set up potential story hooks and arcs down the line so we know the direction you want to take your story, you are more than welcome to discuss that with me so we can set that up.
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My plan is pretty vague: be hallucinating revolutionary; win, be arrested, or die
The idea was also to try to draw other PCs into it, but it looks like this is being run as a set of 1x1s, which is a new idea to me. Is there some inciting incident on the way to push us all together or is this the ongoing plan?
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