@OddApproved Ok so... the Sk8te member could use a little work. I'm not sure I was super clear about this, but members of Sk8te are not the people to have 'official' businesses. It's literally impossible for them to normally function in Delta City because of their lack of Net Bracers which are required for even the most basic of functions. They aren't connected to the one thing that makes living in the Megacities possible (I.e. The Net). The courier service thing is just something that sort of 'happened' over time. Outside of that, Sk8te members don't have jobs and their universal mantra is living life rather than spending each waking day working a job or being controlled by a computer system.
That being said, the Heir looks great! I could definitely see that character work. Oki could probably use some more sci-fi elements to fit in the cyberpunk world, but outside of that she looks really good.
Since I have to go to bed, I doubt I'll be able to post anything tonight, but I'll work on the characters after work tomorrow! I'll concentrate on giving Oki a sci-fi makeover so that she better fits the narrative. Without straying too far from her persona, I believe I have a couple of ideas for that.
For Klaus, I was at fault because I didn't get Sk8te's purpose. Would it be appropriate if I changed him from a sk8te character to a cred character? I'm willing to transform him for the better and make any necessary changes.
Add on: Even though I am aware that you did not mention anything, I still have a question. Is the behavior of this character, Klaus Kelly, appropriate for the situation and the goals of this roleplay? Does a character with such a violent and sinister aspect of life appeal to this roleplay? I'm just going over everything on his character sheet to make sure I fully understand what needs to be modified and what is desired.
