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@Vertigo That kind of thing is possible. The sand ships and boats already do something similar, so you'd just be using a much more compact version of the technology. How does the technology work you might be asking?

I... I don't know, I never thought about it, just that the thing exists.

Good enough for me!

Any ETA on the OOC btw? I'm itchin'.
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I think in at least another day. In the meantime I can drop this, pretty barebones discord let's be real. I've mainly been working on the main points of the story so it may seem quite slow for the time being.
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Hidden 2 yrs ago 2 yrs ago Post by Teyao
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Hey dude, i posted an aplication, please tell me if there is anything wrong with it.
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@Teyao Miraculously, your character is pretty good, and there's not an awful lot to say, but let's see here...

First is the culture of the Jotun, which for the most part is about right. They live in seclusion in order to practice their peaceful ways, despite their immense strength and physical superiority to humans, they are in the end a dwindling race. However, they are also pretty wary of the ways of the world outside, so some level of skepticism would be just right for your character.

Anyway yeah that's pretty much it, those skills and everything for combat make sense and don't sound overly powerful, in fact I actually think you need another technique that doesn't rely on having a Cryo user around. Ice Armor is cool and all, but you essentially cannot use it without a Cryo friend or an icy environment. You can note it gives him the uncanny ability to not be frozen in place by Cryo though, so he becomes immune to a status effect.

Otherwise I'd give him another something, or make Water Barrage have less drawbacks and be your bread and butter for offense. Really, up to you. Maybe something using his axe and shield too.

Anyhow seems good otherwise.
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@Teyao Miraculously, your character is pretty good, and there's not an awful lot to say, but let's see here...

First is the culture of the Jotun, which for the most part is about right. They live in seclusion in order to practice their peaceful ways, despite their immense strength and physical superiority to humans, they are in the end a dwindling race. However, they are also pretty wary of the ways of the world outside, so some level of skepticism would be just right for your character.

Anyway yeah that's pretty much it, those skills and everything for combat make sense and don't sound overly powerful, in fact I actually think you need another technique that doesn't rely on having a Cryo user around. Ice Armor is cool and all, but you essentially cannot use it without a Cryo friend or an icy environment. You can note it gives him the uncanny ability to not be frozen in place by Cryo though, so he becomes immune to a status effect.

Otherwise I'd give him another something, or make Water Barrage have less drawbacks and be your bread and butter for offense. Really, up to you. Maybe something using his axe and shield too.

Anyhow seems good otherwise.


Oh thanks, yeah I wll likely add another skill, I tend to nerf my characters a lot for some reason
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Local 1%er is probably going to get kidnapped by sand pirates.
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Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Sho Minazuki
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The OOC is now open.
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@The Irish Tree I much like this character. I'm gonna assume the back of her hand is going to be a kind of hand to hand, and she uses gloves also, but for flavor it's just slapping I guess. Anyway onto the character.

Avant Garde for sake of clarity, I think should increase your chances of hitting a target, as well as lowering the chance you might be countered or parried.

I like how the skills are set out being all about the nails, so no real problems there. The backstory is pretty solid too. If you like, you could have a servant who left the house with you as someone loyal to her. I thought that would've been a funny thing with a servant running around trying to help her out.

Anyhow other than that, pretty much good.

I realize I've yet to give out the unique Independents, so I'll take care of that a little later, once I've got all the sheets in one place.

For now, everyone is free to add their character to the Characters section in the OOC, granted that they have been accepted.
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@Sho Minazuki

Added the changes to Avant Garde. And, while I do like the idea of a servant following her around, it doesn't especially fit with her backstory now that she's left her family's fortune, and all.
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Room for one more?
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Room for one more?


I invited him here, btw, Sho.

Also, here's the OOC thread:

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