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@CaptainManbeard would be super awesome!
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@CaptainManbeardAs long as it looks similar with my original banner I don’t mind. I like to think that it’s actually Cassie’s handwriting. ☺️
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I'll try getting a quick post up getting my two character in on the batman cctv room action and a litel snippet of them being at the gala before hand. even if they not had a chance to get all in on the meet and greet so far. might not be massive t hough but at leaast be there with the band!
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Sorry if not much but I did a thing and got the two with the rest of the group :)
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Was going to try and work on stuff if it was slow today at work, but it got super busy. I'm off tomorrow though so I'll be able to focus on RP stuff :).
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Okay, post is up. The Metallo-Bot's energy bolts give off some Kryptonite radiation, and the scorpion monsters are fairly strong with paralyzing venom in their stingers. Feel free to use that info to write out your battle scenes.
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I will start work on my post today, although it may take me a few days but I don't think I'll miss the deadline.
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trying to divise some plans here that i debate weather would help or not lol
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I may post again today or tomorrow to give some more guidance within the story.
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Just curious, when you said Kara used a pillar as a shield and then rushed the Metallo-Bot, did you mean she broke the pillar off and is holding it to shield herself from the Kryptonite blasts while also firing her heat vision? Just wanna make sure I fully understand what happened in your post.
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Yes that is what i was thinking she could do. Although she could just use the pillar like a baseball bat. I can go that route if it makes more sense.
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Yes that is what i was thinking she could do. Although she could just use the pillar like a baseball bat. I can go that route if it makes more sense.


I just wasn't sure of the logistics there because if she is holding the pillar as a shield but also firing heat vision, the rays from her eyes would just hit the pillar she was holding in front of her. If she moves the pillar enough for her eyes to have a clear shot of the Metallo-Bot, then it would also have a clear shot to fire Kryptonite blasts at her face. And If she is just firing heat vision blindly through the pillar, she risks hitting the van or other parked cars and causing them to explode. Plus if she just ripped out a support pillar, there may be structural consequences to the building. So, I'm just trying to fully understand what she is doing so that I can write what happens afterwards XD.

EDIT: I also suggest you take a little more time to proofread your posts to ensure you are writing them in a way that gives a clear picture to everyone else what your characters are doing.
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Like this part, for example:

Her attention turned towards the robot. Looking around the room for anything to use as a shield. Deciding on using a nearby pillar. Flying at top speed towards the robot while shooting her heat vision at it.


This doesn't say anywhere that she ripped out the pillar and held it in front of her or how exactly she used it. For all I knew, that could of meant she hid behind it for a minute to dodge a blast and then jumped out and flew at him. It's not clear at all what is actually happening.
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@CaptainManbeardAll our characters are supposed to fight something individually, correct? I hope what I did was okay, I wasn’t sure. :)
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I’m not really sure what to have Superboy do. ^^;
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@Crimson FlameYou could have Superboy check on Scarlet Beacon? Wonder Girl helped Conner up but didn’t have time to check to see if he was okay before a scorpion dude showed up. Just a thought. ☺️
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I’ll do that, and Freeze Breath the Metallo Bot.
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My apologies i will make some edits to my post so that it is clearer what is going on.
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I'll try to post again today to give a bit more guidance to the scene and have Nightwing guide the team.
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Also just a heads up for any Kryptonians getting close to the Metallo-Bot: He's got that big chunk of Kryptonite in his chest, which instantly weakens any Kryptonians who get close, and he's been deliberately designed to combat Kryptonians and their powersets.
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