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@ERode Klava 2.0 looks solid. "Dai-katana" isn't a proper keyword though, but I think greatsword fits with the whole nodachi/big ass katana vibe you're going for. SWOLE DEFLECT looks fine, just be aware that a behemoth's fist or other retardedly huge attacks aren't going to just bounce off of her sword. Just wanted to put that out there before signing off on it. But yea, just change that keyword and SLAP 'ER IN THERE!

Sorry for the huge delay. I'd like to say that I've been working on this since 2 days ago, but I haven't had the chance til now, so pretend this was done then.
Does "As of becoming a Gold Rank Genre, Marrie has found that she's able to become one with the wind and turn incorporeal when casting Melodies. This comes with a 20 mana cost at the start of the casting." sound about right or need to be balanced more?


20 mana is about half of the cheapest way you can cast it normally. It's also a note wind peeps don't normally get, and your special offers other forms of versatility. For reference, Mika has a gold escape special and, while it costs no mana, it offers no other utilities and can only be used three times. I think what would be fair would be to just to let you slap [Intangible] in your melody with the understanding that it only effects Marrie during cast. This represents Marrie's struggle to cast a spell while also turning herself into air. If Marry tries to form a big expensive counter attack, it'll be more costly than doing something more simple. So I'd say...

"As of becoming a Gold Rank Genre, Marrie has found that she's able to become one with the wind and turn incorporeal when casting Melodies. She can do this by adding an Intangible note to her melody."

That sound cool? If so, slap it in da tab.

@Izurich Geez, the new wave of Inquisition plants really suck at hiding their allegiance. Real talk, I stand with #superiortosilmeria. We're still going over this one though so I'll give you a final verdict when I'm not making dinner/doing taxes/multitasking.
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"Any sources" include herself or any outside forces?
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Dai-Katana is just great-sword but for weebs.

I'll change it anywayssss.
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@ERode



Speaking of christian servers, you can join us on discord right now!
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Sounds good, copy-pasted your version in and added to Char tab. I didn't read the usual intangible in the DOCS so I just pulled 20 out of thin air, lol.
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@Izurich Geez, the new wave of Inquisition plants really suck at hiding their allegiance. Real talk, I stand with #superiortosilmeria. We're still going over this one though so I'll give you a final verdict when I'm not making dinner/doing taxes/multitasking.


Geez, spoilers, Bro Ken! 😤

Cool, I just woke up myself.

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"Any sources" include herself or any outside forces?


Yep, any sources, whenever she's affected by a [Flight] Effect Note, basically, regardless of sources.
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Yep, any sources, whenever she's affected by a [Flight] Effect Note, basically, regardless of sources.


Oke, slight problema, it's kinda pointless if you can give yourself flight for free anyways. Especially since we don't know if you'll be facing someone/something with the specific note too, much less have someone on your team available to help there.

Boss man thinks the perma +1 in that regards is a bit too much for all that. But I get that it'd be weird to have a flightless Angel outside of Maverick, so maybe keep just the self flight? If not we're always open for brainstorming something else.
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Huh, with regards to Izu's Flight special, I could've sworn that Klava's Silver Special was something along the lines of 'Construction counts as one Rank higher'. Wouldn't the Izu Flight special just be a natural evolution of that, giving some more conditional perks now that it's Gold? The perma +1 is entirely a selfish thing anyhow, so it's not that crazy.
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Oke, slight problema, it's kinda pointless if you can give yourself flight for free anyways. Especially since we don't know if you'll be facing someone/something with the specific note too, much less have someone on your team available to help there.

Boss man thinks the perma +1 in that regards is a bit too much for all that. But I get that it'd be weird to have a flightless Angel outside of Maverick, so maybe keep just the self flight? If not we're always open for brainstorming something else.


That's fair, and coincidentally, it is the one aspect that I'm not sure if it's too much for Gold or not on top of everything else. It's the one that I don't need any further discussions to simply remove, just give me the confirmation and I'll do it right away.

Huh, with regards to Izu's Flight special, I could've sworn that Klava's Silver Special was something along the lines of 'Construction counts as one Rank higher'. Wouldn't the Izu Flight special just be a natural evolution of that, giving some more conditional perks now that it's Gold? The perma +1 is entirely a selfish thing anyhow, so it's not that crazy.


Yeah, I also believe the "count as +1 rank higher" part is fiiiine, it's the "any sources" part that makes it a bit too much, if not also rather pointless.
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So, what's your verdict, Bro Ken?
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@Izurich The issue is not that that they get a free enhance on their flight, it's that they get a free enhance on their flight and flight itself is absolutely free. Just by casting it at gold rank they get A rank speed, and if they enhance it further they get S. So for 32 mana per turn they get the fastest movement speed in the RP and can fly on top of it. Or for free they can fly slightly slower than that. Why even use other notes?

So you can keep the rank up on flight if you'd like, but I'd like to see the mana cost reduction toned down a bit. Maybe [bronze self] is totally free, which would give Angel the option to cruse around in "low power mode," but she'd have to burn mana to go full speed?
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@Bro Ken Oooh, that's a fine idea. Alright, I'll change the Zephyr of Eden part to:

"Firstly, when Angel uses the [Bronze Self] Cast Note, the [Flight] Effect Note can be added to the Melody for free. Secondly, If Angel is affected by the [Flight] Effect Note, it effectively becomes +1 Rank stronger."

All coolz?
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@Izurich Yes, that satisfies our concerns. You may take your double agent and fly her to the character tab.
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Welcome back to the team!

Pay no mind to the deer(?) skull hiding in the corner.
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Here is my later then expected submission.


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So who's this? Oros the Collector?

Wait, no! Oros del Oro!
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Oho, I like her already!

Real quick though, you got an invalid keyword for your instrument.

Swap Akimbo Revolver out with Handgun, Handgun.
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It has been done, I switched it over to Handgun, Handgun.

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Oros you say? well, you aren't far off the mark perhaps, maybe the answer is already within sight but just needs to be discovered. I'm just a bundle of mystery and intrigue when I start going.
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@Nakushita That's a lot of edge for someone who fights with pistols.

Anyway, I don't see any issue with pistols that have the range and penetrating power of an anti-material rifle. You can take Happy "Neubenheimer" Chaos and slap them in the character tab.

We're looking pretty good player wise. I'm going to give @TaintedMushroom and Dalton some time to work on their characters, but I think we'll be starting sooner than later. If anyone else is interested in joining we have plenty of room.
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