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AlmostEternity That's crazy, I do declare.

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@Memory
I fixed it. Thanks, again.
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Here's my first character. (Ignore every other character that I have made, they never existed)




Name: Yuriy "Niko" Nikolaev
Age: Seems to be around 14-15
Gender: Male
Personality: Blank
Appearance: 5'11", seems to be missing his right eye as well as his right arm, his clothing is as follows: White jacket over a red sweater, a red scarf, odd black and white striped pants, regular brown boots, he also has a black cat hairpin.
Abilities: Psychokinesis, Blood Manipulation, Enhanced Durability. Blood Devil Transformation

Blood Devil Form:
Due to the demonic genetics inside of him, he can transform into the Blood Devil. It's appearance is very odd, having red scales across its body, four arms, and sharp, bladed fingers. It is worth mentioning that he grows about 4 inches in this form.
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Here's my first character. (Ignore every other character that I have made, they never existed)




Name: Yuriy "Niko" Nikolaev
Age: Seems to be around 14-15
Gender: Male
Personality: Blank
Appearance: 5'11", seems to be missing his right eye as well as his right arm, his clothing is as follows: White jacket over a red sweater, a red scarf, odd black and white striped pants, regular brown boots, he also has a black cat hairpin.
Abilities: Psychokinesis, Blood Manipulation, Enhanced Durability. Blood Devil Transformation

Blood Devil Form:
Due to the demonic genetics inside of him, he can transform into the Blood Devil. It's appearance is very odd, having red scales across its body, four arms, and sharp, bladed fingers. It is worth mentioning that he grows about 4 inches in this form.


Looks good to me. Any word on motivations, goals, how he became interdimensional, etc?
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@AlmostEternity

Any chance we could reduce the amount of narrative contained in actions? The action symbols aren't supposed to have a mind of their own; it's more like a security camera observing people interacting, almost DND style. Any thoughts are implied through the actions they take, but we don't get to peer into character minds. For example, your latest post would align better like:

Huh?
*Turns around, surprised, and look across my body to examine anything out of place*
Otherworlder? Er, who are you?
*My eyes frit from myself back to you and compare the two*
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Sure. I'm just used to being descriptive :D
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Sure. I'm just used to being descriptive :D


Thanks! We do things pretty differently, but it's worked for the 11+ years we've been around =)
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Looks good to me. Any word on motivations, goals, how he became interdimensional, etc?


All pretty much unknown for now

that's short for "I didn't think of it so I'll just go along with whatever happens and see if I can figure something out or improvise."
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All pretty much unknown for now

that's short for "I didn't think of it so I'll just go along with whatever happens and see if I can figure something out or improvise."


I'm fine with that. Anything setting in mind for how you'd want him to meet up with everyone or dealer's choice?
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I'm fine with that. Anything setting in mind for how you'd want him to meet up with everyone or dealer's choice?


I usually leave it up to another. And since I haven't really caught up with anything, I think I would leave it up to someone else.
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I usually leave it up to another. And since I haven't really caught up with anything, I think I would leave it up to someone else.


Honestly, I'm down for a party. Let's have him meet Katherine in the cafe everyone's convening at if that works.
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Honestly, I'm down for a party. Let's have him meet Katherine in the cafe everyone's convening at if that works.


Sounds good to me!

Any suggestions on how I should go about it?
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Sounds good to me!

Any suggestions on how I should go about it?


Just set up a post about him walking in and @ Webmaster.
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oh, by the way, would you guys prefer if I change my profile picture to Niko? Or maybe put him in my bio thingy?
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oh, by the way, would you guys prefer if I change my profile picture to Niko? Or maybe put him in my bio thingy?


If you're down for a pfp, that'd be sick! That's what we all do.
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@Sp00ki
Just a heads up that we try to keep OOC and IC threads pretty distinct, and try to quote when you can. Makes it easier to track conversation.
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The amount of people has confuzled me, who exactly is in the cafe?
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The amount of people has confuzled me, who exactly is in the cafe?


You, me (this account + Artifact), Sp00ky, and AlmostEternity. It's basically creating a dimensional sink right now, and you're all free to interact.
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Hey @AlmostEternity, I gotta emphasize that the action symbols really don't have a narrator's voice. They're purely for describing actions, things that can be picked up with the five senses. Anything subtler than that needs to either be verbalized by a character or inferred by the reader based on the character's actions.
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Wait what time of day is it? Morning? Noon? Night?
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Wait what time of day is it? Morning? Noon? Night?


Noonish
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