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AlmostEternity That's crazy, I do declare.

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@Memory
I fixed it. Thanks, again.
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Sp00ki The real Minos Prime

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Here's my first character. (Ignore every other character that I have made, they never existed)




Name: Yuriy "Niko" Nikolaev
Age: Seems to be around 14-15
Gender: Male
Personality: Blank
Appearance: 5'11", seems to be missing his right eye as well as his right arm, his clothing is as follows: White jacket over a red sweater, a red scarf, odd black and white striped pants, regular brown boots, he also has a black cat hairpin.
Abilities: Psychokinesis, Blood Manipulation, Enhanced Durability. Blood Devil Transformation

Blood Devil Form:
Due to the demonic genetics inside of him, he can transform into the Blood Devil. It's appearance is very odd, having red scales across its body, four arms, and sharp, bladed fingers. It is worth mentioning that he grows about 4 inches in this form.
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Here's my first character. (Ignore every other character that I have made, they never existed)




Name: Yuriy "Niko" Nikolaev
Age: Seems to be around 14-15
Gender: Male
Personality: Blank
Appearance: 5'11", seems to be missing his right eye as well as his right arm, his clothing is as follows: White jacket over a red sweater, a red scarf, odd black and white striped pants, regular brown boots, he also has a black cat hairpin.
Abilities: Psychokinesis, Blood Manipulation, Enhanced Durability. Blood Devil Transformation

Blood Devil Form:
Due to the demonic genetics inside of him, he can transform into the Blood Devil. It's appearance is very odd, having red scales across its body, four arms, and sharp, bladed fingers. It is worth mentioning that he grows about 4 inches in this form.


Looks good to me. Any word on motivations, goals, how he became interdimensional, etc?
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@AlmostEternity

Any chance we could reduce the amount of narrative contained in actions? The action symbols aren't supposed to have a mind of their own; it's more like a security camera observing people interacting, almost DND style. Any thoughts are implied through the actions they take, but we don't get to peer into character minds. For example, your latest post would align better like:

Huh?
*Turns around, surprised, and look across my body to examine anything out of place*
Otherworlder? Er, who are you?
*My eyes frit from myself back to you and compare the two*
Hidden 8 hrs ago Post by AlmostEternity
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AlmostEternity That's crazy, I do declare.

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Sure. I'm just used to being descriptive :D
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Sure. I'm just used to being descriptive :D


Thanks! We do things pretty differently, but it's worked for the 11+ years we've been around =)
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Looks good to me. Any word on motivations, goals, how he became interdimensional, etc?


All pretty much unknown for now

that's short for "I didn't think of it so I'll just go along with whatever happens and see if I can figure something out or improvise."
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