Is my character accepted? Or do I need to change something?
Edit: Finished editing the description for Iabor's demon form.

Sorry Gil I'll give it one last look over but as far as I can tell it's fine. Dandi I'll also accept your character as well. Very nice everyone!

If I've yet to accept you please don't feel ignored. I have other things I am seeing too at the same time right now and it is proving hectic.

I'm a professional I misread your post. -bangs head into desk-

Though if there is anything I'm missing please shoot it to me over PM

Ok from what I've seen everyone so far makes the grade no problem. I'll be starting up the IC tonight (thats around 4pm GMT time for anyone outside England) once I've finishing sorting out a few things and added you all the the ACCEPTED list.

Dandi that goes for you too.

Shoryu please be quick with your CS sheet. Will need it ASAP for the others.

Just for an update. I am adding more LORE information to the OoC first Post. Warlocks may find the current information very interesting...

Cayden Black said
Just for an update. I am adding more LORE information to the OoC first Post. Warlocks may find the current information very interesting...

Oh, that's interesting. So my character can actually control elements, too? Like, water, air, fire, earth? And does she need spells for that?
And also, what is 'tonight'? Since I can be on tonight. I'm one hour before England so please tell me when you're starting. :P

I don't have an exact time for the start just sometimes around 4 or 6 PM GMT so about 5-7 for you.

And yes, All warlocks harness the elements but you must select which one you would be more attuned with. I don't mind you learning as you go to manipulate others better but for balancing reasons lets just focus on the one primary element. Means people work together more.
Feel proud Danddisan, that LORE idea hit me last night after reading your character.

Cayden Black said
I don't have an exact time for the start just sometimes around 4 or 6 PM GMT so about 5-7 for you.And yes, All warlocks harness the elements but you must select which one you would be more attuned with. I don't mind you learning as you go to manipulate others better but for balancing reasons lets just focus on the one primary element. Means people work together more.Feel proud Danddisan, that LORE idea hit me last night after reading your character.

Why, thank you... and okay. Well, then, I'll edit my post. She'll do good with water. And freezing stuff. I guess. Since ice is technically water. Like Katara from Avatar.

Oh thats fine. This wasn't too important at the time but I am still building on the LORE system. Magic can be a tricky thing to put into a box...

Cayden Black said
Oh thats fine. This wasn't too important at the time but I am still building on the LORE system. Magic can be a tricky thing to put into a box...

Yes, I know, and that's why I wrote specializes, not uses because that would be just limiting.

Umm I'm curious about something, is it still okay that Iabor has a mastery over the elements?

I don't mind but I completely overlooked something. Gilgex...YAH TOO DAM BIG!

lol Sorry I should have noticed that. I'm afraid godzilla size is too much for the style we're aiming at. As a Daemon, you're meant to be more humanoid than demons...

As for the elements like I said to Danddisan it's ok to use them, just not be a master lord of all of them.

Oh okay I can make him smaller, and make him look more humanoid as well. It's not a big problem ^_^

This looks interesting, I'd like to give it a shot.

Hope my CS is good enough, if anything needs changing then just let me know.

Name
Azmun

Race
Demon

Age
211

Gender
Male





Bio
Azmun is a demon of chaos with a dark hide as strong as iron and mastery over the element of fire. A cloud of flames seems to always envelop him, threatening to consume any who might get to close. These flames are volatile and grow more and more violent by Azmun’s anger until they unleash under the form of a flame blast, scorching anything in a 10m radius around him. His body constantly generates these flames for him to manipulate as he sees fit. However his formidable ability is only usable when in his true demonic form, while in his human form he has no control over the element but is still immune to its effects.

As a human, Azmun is a highly skilled warrior with a super-human prowess for combat and versatile with virtually any weapon that falls in his hands though he mostly prefers wielding a sword in each hand. He is usually summoned during war times and set as a vanguard in battles where he can unleash his full potential and turn any foes to smoldering piles of ash.

The words used to summon him are : “I call thee, Spawn of Chaos and Flame!” to which he answers “Who must burn?”

Okay I finished editing Iabor's demon form, he looks more humanoid now.

Gilgex said
Oh okay I can make him smaller, and make him look more humanoid as well. It's not a big problem ^_^

Thanks Gilgex. I failed to notice that at first lol

As for you Zamok, everything seems to be in order. I will ask though about his flames. Does he manipulate them or made from them? Flame masters would be able to manipulate them you see so while powerful its also a weakness. Just bringing that up (though it would be pretty interesting IMO).

It's okay I just had to do more math in my head, I had to make him big enough to be able to take a wagon that was falling, and I got 80 feet.... I just -shrugs-

Edit: though now that I've looked up wagons he's 30 feet on his hands, and feet. While 32 feet standing upright.

Gilgex said
It's okay I just had to do more math in my head, I had to make him big enough to be able to take a wagon that was falling, and I got 80 feet.... I just -shrugs-

He's demonic. He's supernatural. He can have the strength of a giant and be the size of a hobbit. Or wuxia-like, gravity-defying super speed. You know how they say size doesn't matter? Well that applies double in fantasy. And arguably even more when infernal creatures of dark magic are involved.

Well said Aegis.

Thank you.