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Yeah. I might re-watch it all again just cause I haven't in about a 8 months or so.
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Well as long as you understand the basics the rest will be filled in IC.
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Lol I understand a little more than the basics. Actually I've been able to follow every theory and expand on some too. I was a little obsessed with the show :p Yeah...I'm gonna re-watch it again now...Good thing I own all of SG-1 and Atlantis :D

Maybe I shoulda made a scientist...
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Multi-chars are accepted.

Also Atlantis is back in Pegasus now, I'm connecting it to the Legacy book series.
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Multi-chars are accepted.Also Atlantis is back in Pegasus now, I'm connecting it to the Legacy book series.


Why did they go back and more importantly where did they get the power, the ZPMs were all but dead when they crash landed.
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I'm going with the Legacy Book series, really good series. A) They had unfinished business. B) Felt they were responsible for the Wraith so had a duty. C) O'Neill forced the IOA into making them go. D) I cannot recall where they got the additional ZPMs.
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Complete, if you're accepting:
|Name: Penelope Kate

|Callsign: WMD - Weapon of Mass Destruction? Woman of Mass Destruction? Who knows!

|Age: 38

|Rank/Title(Dependant on position): Doctor

|Appearance: Long black hair, often tied up in a bun, gaunt face with prominent cheekbones, frustratingly pale, dark brown eyes, rather pointy chin, 5'8", skinny.

|Role: Scientist

|Summary in a sentence: Weapons engineer proficient in high-energy physics obsessed with ascension, convinced it's an obvious solution to the "lukewarm war" (her own words) with the Lucian Alliance.

|Nationality: Canadian

|Biography: After a bright-eyed college career, Penelope graduated with a doctorate from MIT in experimental nuclear and particle physics. Area 51 expressed interest in her after they read her paper on advancing the yeild of atomic bombs through a theoretical substance that bore striking similarities to Naquadah. She was recruited and helped to develop the Mark IX in a peripheral role after introduction to the life of a experimental weapons development engineer. There she met Samantha Carter, who noted that Penelope had a frightening blind curiosity in the project.

Penelope became one of Earth's secret weapons. Her personality lead her to become nigh-obsessed with whatever project she was placed on, and she played an instrumental role in the development of the Horizon Mark IX deployment system and the PWAR - although that project was cancelled when the Asurans displayed an unexpeted resistence to Anti-Replicator Waveform technolody. With the elimination of the Asurans in the Pegasus galaxy and the Ori in the Milky Way, Penelope found herself in the odd situation of not having a specific job any more.

While there was some development of the Mark X naquadria bomb (which she played part in), funding for such superweapons was diminishing rapidly. The current administration didn't have quite the same zeal for mass destruction as the previous ones. In her frustration and boredom during off-hours, Penelope did research. Lots of research. She learned about the Dakara weapons platform (regretfully destroyed), the Icarus project (billed as a failure on many levels), replicators, symbiote poison, Anubis' planet-buster, Asuran gate beam weapons, and many other theoretical superweapons. Through her research, she learned about Merlin's anti-ascended-being weapon, and through it, ascension. At first ascension was nothing more than a side interest to Merlin's weapon, but it gradually began to grow on her.

As the next administration continued the previous administrations anti-WMD policy, it became less quietly frustrating to her and more of an imminent threat when the Lucian Alliance destroyed two Earth outposts and nearly detonated a 70 MT device in Washington, DC. Clearly, the Lucian Alliance did not believe that Earth had the capacity or fortitude to retaliate. She urged her superiors to strike back hard and fast with neutron bombs, - no lasting radiation, no extensive damage, only dead bad guys - or at least demonstrate that Earth had the capability to do so. They refused. She let it go.

When she heard about the Lucian takeover of Destiny, she again urged her superiors to consider a neutron bomb. Frustrated by her lack of progress, she went over her bosses' heads, using her connection with Carter to get a meeting with Gen. O'Neill of Homeworld Command - something she later realized was a mistake. Especially after how he flat-out denied her ideas. This pissed off her bosses mightily.

While she suffered through menial tasks and pointless dead-end projects, she turned her mind back to the Lucian Alliance arms race. Her superiors were clearly blind; the Lucian Alliance wouldn't stop at three naquadah-enhanced bombs. Earth needed a trump card, and if the bueraucracy couldn't see it now, then at least she'd be prepared when they did. It was here that thoughts of ascension once again haunted her - ascended beings had demonstrated their power and capabilities multiple times. With the majority of superweapons destroyed and her access to useful projects cut off, this seemed like the only logical avenue left to her. So she slowly studied ascension, and even managed to sneak a few looks at the DNA resequencer at Area 51 left over from Anubis' clone Khalek. It (and the one at Atlantis) was strictly off-limits, as physical death and other horrific side effects were likely results.

Her ultimate plan became to either ascend herself, and then demonstrate her new powers to the Lucian Alliance until they felt threatened by Earth a la M.A.D. (whilst researching methods to distract the Ancients or conceal herself so that they wouldn't interfere if it came to wiping out the Lucian Alliance (although she would be willing to sacrifice herself in that event)), or to create a weapon that operates on higher planes of existence, denying the Lucian Alliance's ability to retaliate while also failing to interfere with the Ancients.

After suffering her bosses' new ire (they did everything but fire her), she jumped at the chance to get on board the Langford, believing that at least her former bosses wouldn't be able to influence her in space. The path from disgrace to the Langford was a rocky one, however. After she heard about the ship, she had to convince the head of the project that the weapons systems needed to be inspected to meet Mark IX safety guidelines with some convincing paperwork. She got the project head, in turn, to fill out paperwork requesting herself to the project to oversee Mark IX standards - a request which she assured the project head was standard procedure.

From there, it was a relatively simple task to find something trivially wrong with the system, insist that it be upgraded, wash, rinse, repeat, until she became the only person who really understood all the working parts of the weapons systems in their entirety. That meant that she was part of the briefing committee for the ship's crew, and from there, it was a simple matter to convince the brass that she would be invaluable as a member of the crew. She was therefore accepted as part of the shakedown cruise, and the actual ship deployment. From that point, it wasn't much harder (especially once she'd gotten "close" to some key people) to convince the brass that she should be the lead scientist for the Langford. She was, after all, qualified, and the CO and crew had already gotten used to seeing and interacting with her.

|Personality: Ruthless, cold, calculating. She views life through the lens of curiousity, and will sometimes let people make bad decisions, just to see how they and everyone around them will react. Not exactly evil, but certainly not good. She'll act in the better interests of humanity, the ship, the crew, and humanity's allies in that order. Smart, capable, and terrifyingly good at her job. She's always afraid that people will be scared by someone who invents WMD's for a living, so she often tries to distance herself from others. She does, in fact, have a heart, so she attempts to carry herself in a reasonably friendly (if distant) manner. Those friends that she does have are fairly close, though she still tries to hide her "scary WMD-making" self from even their eyes. Rather than simply insult someone's intelligence, she'll take the time to try and teach them. The more people capable of working on a task frees her up for pursuing other interests.

|Tivia: Performs trivial maintainence tasks, ostensibly to conform with the CO's "rank doesn't have its priveledges" attitude, but more often than not finds herself on the bridge, fiddling with some panel or another, quietly observing, giving unbidden advice to the CO. She's got a drive to know information, especially concerning the ship's status, location, and current mission. Enjoys poker and watching New Girl.
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Of course, especially for returning players.

I have updated the Accepted characters list with Cody and Harry, if any further edits are done on their sheets, please let me know so I can keep the list up to date.
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Sep said
Multi-chars are accepted.


Can any of us discuss making bad guys for the side stories later on? No ideas as of yet but could be interesting so long as they fit the main story line, of course.
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GravityFlux. You asked for feedback on the sheet. Aside from a small bit, we couldn't notice anything wrong with it. We quoted that here:
The Gulf War ended, and he had nothing more. So, he requested for UN Duty. When his request was granted, he joined the UN Peacekeepers as a Canadian officer, fighting in most future UN deployments, such as Afghanistan.

Considering his age (you changed it from the original 37 to 36), it makes even less sense to have any mention of the gulf war. We'd suggest highlighting a bit more on more recent wars instead, and if you feel the need to mention the gulf war at all, make it instead relate to his reason for joining military.

But then his prime time came. He was selected as a Strike Leader for the Catherine Langford's military forces. He found out that he HAD been a candidate for such programs earlier, due to his improvisation skills and tactical experience, but he had been too busy, stuck in Afghanistan, where most of his time fighting was spent.

He was quickly briefed on the SG program, and has had enough time to cope with it and learn about it. Immediately after he was selected and briefed for the program, he was freshly promoted to Colonel for his services.

This section feels a bit sparse, and it doesn't entirely make sense. If Homeworld Security and the IOA wants someone for the program, they won't care much if (s)he is busy in some war merely affecting a minor Earth nation or two. They've got the clout to take pretty much anyone in the SG-participating nations' militaries. Of course, it could've been that he said "no" till he felt "finished" down there. That would build up a stronger impression of his stubbornness.

Pretty sure that anyone going offworld, especially in a leadership role, would go through more than a quick briefing about the SG program. We'd suggest adding a short tour or so as an SG team member/leader. While there's been no mention of the USAF having any Canadian SG-team(s), a lot could have changed as IOA and Homeworld security rose to more prominent positions. We at least wouldn't send someone as a leader on a mission like this unless we've tested their mettle against aliens.

One final question: Why was he promoted? They generally don't promote anyone simply "for their services". Maybe he did something to make him truly stand out during his SG-initiation?

We'd usually tear far more holes in character sheets, but we're not a GM in this RP, and there wasn't much else worth tearing at. The rest of the sheet just did not have anything that we saw worth picking at. In other words, we liked the rest of it.
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Cayden, players are welcome to write episode plans and submit them to the GMs. If we like them and think they will run well that episode will be included into the plot.

This is high praise from Ellri by the way Flux.
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Sounds fine to me. I'll wait to see the pilot before I do anything.
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Ellri said We at least wouldn't send someone as a leader on a mission like this unless we've tested their mettle against aliens.


As O'neill said, no-one is qualified to go through that gate before they step through it. This mission is no less different than sending people to new worlds and hence I don't think they would of specially put him through SG training just for it if he is a recent addition to SG-Personnel. A lot of people will be pushing to get a more prominent role on this ship who do not have their own or the capability/willingness to make their own. Which is why(Minus the IOA) I like the fact that some of the key positions aren't from the original SG countries.
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GravityFlux. You asked for feedback on the sheet. Aside from a small bit, we couldn't notice anything wrong with it. We quoted that here:Considering his age (you changed it from the original 37 to 36), it makes even less sense to have any mention of the gulf war. We'd suggest highlighting a bit more on more recent wars instead, and if you feel the need to mention the gulf war at all, make it instead relate to his reason for joining military.This section feels a bit sparse, and it doesn't entirely make sense. If Homeworld Security and the IOA wants someone for the program, they won't care much if (s)he is busy in some war merely affecting a minor Earth nation or two. They've got the clout to take pretty much anyone in the SG-participating nations' militaries. Of course, it could've been that he said "no" till he felt "finished" down there. That would build up a stronger impression of his stubbornness. Pretty sure that anyone going offworld, especially in a leadership role, would go through more than a quick briefing about the SG program. We'd suggest adding a short tour or so as an SG team member/leader. While there's been no mention of the USAF having any Canadian SG-team(s), a lot could have changed as IOA and Homeworld security rose to more prominent positions. We at least wouldn't send someone as a leader on a mission like this unless we've tested their mettle against aliens.One final question: Why was he promoted? They generally don't promote anyone simply "for their services". Maybe he did something to make him truly stand out during his SG-initiation? We'd usually tear far more holes in character sheets, but we're not a GM in this RP, and there wasn't much else worth tearing at. The rest of the sheet just did not have anything that we saw worth picking at. In other words, we liked the rest of it.


Again, I wasn't quite done, but yes, this is what I needed
Thank you so much. Now I can make it better. Thanks so much
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No problem.
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Hope you brought your ladders and gappling hooks. There is a wall of text here.
You don't have to read the whole sheet..... but at least the trivia and appearance scetions are probably a good idea to read.

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Well this is embarrasing. My gigantic character sheet seems to have broken the accepted characters post.

Workin' on getting that fixed, in the mean time, the full sheet is above...
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Hope you brought your ladders and gappling hooks. There is a wall of text here.You don't have to read the whole sheet..... but at least the trivia and appearance scetions are probably a good idea to read.


Okkkkkkk
THAT IS HUGE
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He made the mistake of throwing the sheet to us for questioning, with no attempt at reining us in. The result was that every other paragraph or so got something akin to "EXPLAIN!". That in itself is dangerous enough. He did it several times.
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Lol I don't think I'll be reading that CS unless I have a spare hour or two XD
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