Posted. Right now Elim is too focused on killing her targets to continue any conversation.

er hello? I put up a character sheet...

I'm hoping to post in the morning

Post nao (XD, jk jk)

Right, okay so, couple of things that need attention, so here goes...

Sezir, am I safe in presuming the "Dark Figure" is meant to be the same one everyone else was meant to see? If so, then bare in mind it's not meant to linger, and in fact only be there for like a split second.

Okay, Reap, I actually saw your sheet when it was first posted but have mostly been conflicted about it, hence my lack of response until now. First of all, if his world was one of the ones that blinked out and he was there at the time, then that means he's absurdly old or immortal or something of that nature, and I don't think such a thing fits in with this particular story (feel free to correct me on his age if I'm misunderstanding something, but that's what I took from the history). Secondly, and this is where I was most conflicted, is in regards to his sword. Now, I'm not claiming to know your intentions or anything, so I'll just apologize in advance for this, but the sword (to me, anyway) seems to just be a re-skinned Keyblade and I'm afraid it won't be feasible in this setting. In case you're unaware, Heartless can be killed with conventional weapons, as evidenced by Final Fantasy characters being able to fight them off, so if you're worried about not being able to defend yourself, then don't be. Also, I have plot-related plans for how the party will eventually deal with Heartless and the Darkness in general and your sword kind of contradicts some of those plans, I'm afraid. Finally, one can't just spend centuries surviving in the Dark Realm. For one, it wouldn't stop him from aging, and secondly, just being in that Realm constantly runs you the risk of being consumed by Darkness. Ever wonder why Riku stopped using the dark portals? It's because the Other Side is so pure with Darkness that just briefly passing through it via Corridor of Darkness can be risky to one's Heart.

Just wanted to say that I'm still here. I'm waiting for the plot before I post again

Hey I changed it to make it sound more like the the dark thing left. I did not really mean for it to linger.

I posted, going to get some action soon ;). These dodgy blokes(Renose)

^^

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Right, okay so, couple of things that need attention, so here goes...Sezir, am I safe in presuming the "Dark Figure" is meant to be the same one everyone else was meant to see? If so, then bare in mind it's not meant to linger, and in fact only be there for like a split second.Okay, Reap, I actually saw your sheet when it was first posted but have mostly been conflicted about it, hence my lack of response until now. First of all, if his world was one of the ones that blinked out and he was there at the time, then that means he's absurdly old or immortal or something of that nature, and I don't think such a thing fits in with this particular story (feel free to correct me on his age if I'm misunderstanding something, but that's what I took from the history). Secondly, and this is where I was most conflicted, is in regards to his sword. Now, I'm not claiming to know your intentions or anything, so I'll just apologize in advance for this, but the sword (to me, anyway) seems to just be a re-skinned Keyblade and I'm afraid it won't be feasible in this setting. In case you're unaware, Heartless be killed with conventional weapons, as evidenced by Final Fantasy characters being able to fight them off, so if you're worried about not being able to defend yourself, then don't be. Also, I have plot-related plans for how the party will eventually deal with Heartless and the Darkness in general and your sword kind of contradicts some of those plans, I'm afraid. Finally, one can't just spend centuries surviving in the Dark Realm. For one, it wouldn't stop him from aging, and secondly, just being in that Realm constantly runs you the risk of being consumed by Darkness. Ever wonder why Riku stopped using the dark portals? It's because the Other Side is so pure with Darkness that just briefly passing through it via Corridor of Darkness can be risky to one's Heart.

okay points are taken. I would like to keep his schematic as a more mature figure in the group though, would it be possible that traversing the worlds and dark world that time would move differently so that it's only been a handful of years to him while to the outside world time has gone on as normal? that way I could kinda keep things the same. As far as the sword thing I'm not too attatched to the concept, so I could just have it as a normal blade, only after his near death he found his own personal strength enough to combat them. Im aware of the risks of traveling in the darkness, and I mentioned that it has corrupted him in some ways, in other ways it remains untouched in memory of the woman he loved. While he is a dark individual his center is still full of light, because he's still holding onto the hope that he will find her.

I will wait for plot before posting again (unless you need me to post Forced, I have no idea what to post at this moment though)

I am also waiting fora bit more to happen.

I'm going to try and post tomorrow morning or afternoon while i'm at college to get this needle in. I should be able to do that before the plot Renose. I usually post in the mornings because work and til evening and this couple of days I've needed a little time to myself as I'm doing weekends. But going to make sure I give you something to build from tomorrow definitely.

That won't be necessary, as I've now got things moving. For now, the attacks are only Shadows, with perhaps the occasional Soldier to mix things up. Nothing more than that for now, after all we're not going for a TPK here. :P

So I guess we post for encountering Heartless then?

Posted btw. Had Elim still be near Sezir's chara.

Not right next to her, but just in the same general vicinity (like twenty yards away)

Posted

Would it be okay if Moon In-Sun gets capture by the heartless?

Changed my profile just a bit. Nothing serious thought. :)
Also changed horse to motorbike cuz horse did not feel like they fit in as well.

Whose turn is it to post?

Nobody's in particular. I just wanted to ensure there was enough time for everyone to respond before I continued things.