Shurikai said
Just a couple things. There currently isn't smithing or lockpicking. Once a race with.. locks is discovered, heck yeah, go for it. Smithing will probably be brought in with the locks. The wood elves are extremely simple. They use stone weapons.Orphans would be brought up within The Pure One or with a close family friend or relative.I shall add these to one of my open posts, thank you.

Fixed it up.

It looks good. Accepted!

Shurikai said
It looks good. Accepted!

Yesssssssss.

Name: Hodfred MoonGale

Date of Birth: 20th day of summer

Age: 19

true age: 114

Gender: male

Position: hunter

Skills: Beside knowing a lot of things about Grawlvs, he also knows how to make medicines out of their antlers (that's to be expected, he belongs to the MoonGale, the best antler medicine maker in the whole village.) Although he lacks of hand to hand combat and archery ability, he is truly good in throwing dagger.

Appearance:

Personality: There's nothing special about Hodfred, he's just a normal wood elf. He can be nice as long as you can be, he can be friend as long as you are not a foe, he's selfish but not to his friends. Of course he also have flaws to his personality, he's not very optimist, always thinks negatively, he is slightly impatient, that's why no one tries to mess up with him, for when he loses his cool, he will go crazy, this elf is very picky when it comes to food,he always wanted it cooked, he is fairly immature, stubborn and very untidy and the worst thing about him is he lacks of sense of humor. Hodfred is very restless, he has lots and lots of hobbies, including fishing, cooking/baking, taking care of Grawlvs, he can only get rest by sitting in front of his furnace, watching the flames burn the woods, which is also one of his hobbies. This elf loves comfort and relaxation, but the thing he loves most doesn't offer it, but it offers precious memories and happy experiences, it is adventure.

History: Hodfred had a quite good childhood, just like a normal wood elf, the only thing was, he grew up without a mother. Hodfred was the only son of the great Liahm of MoonGale, who belongs to family that creates the finest antler medicine in the village, and the beautiful Lythia of WoodVile, who belongs to a very kind family, who never had a chance seeing his child grew. Hodfred was born on 20th day of summer in the village where the pure one grows, unfortunately, his mother died delivering him. Being the only son of his father, his father gave all his time to him, cherished and loved him more than a normal parent could. He grew up never feeling the emptiness of growing without a mother, grew up in a comfortable life, away from wilderness, battles and adventures. Hodfred is fond of adventures, which he never experienced yet. Believing he could join adventures by being a hunter, he trained and became one, although he already thought it would not be easy for him, for he don't posses great hunting skills, besides being good at throwing daggers.

hermijouji said
Name: Hodfred MoonGaleDate of Birth: 20th day of summerAge: 19true age: 114Gender: malePosition: hunterSkills: Beside knowing alot of things about Grawlvs, he also knows how to make medicines out of their antlers (that's to be expected, he belongs to the MoonGale, the best antler medicine maker in the whole village.) Although he lacks of hand to hand combat and archery ability, he is truly good in throwing dagger.Appearance: Personality: Hodfred is very respectable elf, not just because he belongs to a very respectable family but also because he is very friendly to his fellows, and very selfless . But his town fellows doesn't know alot of him, including the fact that he is untidy with his stuffs, also his clan fellows hate him for some matters. He has alot of hobbies, including collecting antiques and reading historic tales.History: Being a member of MoonGale clan, fellows has alot of expectation from him, so he decided to be a hunter, as fellows thought he can be good one because his family has the best hunters of the town, although originally wants to be a guard of his family's Grawlv farm. Hodfred was born on 11th day of summer, his mother died delivering him, that made the whole clan hated him and thought he could bring bad luck to the family, but his father felt differently, he cherished him and gave all his love to Hodfred, the clan almost decided to kill Hodfred, thinking he is a bad omen, luckily his father is an official of the clan, he made the clan head remove the death sentence. in exchange his father must sacrifice his finest Grawlv yearly.

any one wants play as his father once approved by the GM?

hey sir, you still need a creature right? Can I help adding one?

I changed my character name to Rin. I hope that's okay.

sam haley said
I changed my character name to Rin. I hope that's okay.

That is okay. Any changes before the roleplay starts are all good.

hermijouji said
hey sir, you still need a creature right? Can I help adding one?

Any creatures beyond what I post will be discovered in the role play. There are six more coming.
That reminds me of something!

hermijouji said ~snip~

I will go over your cs when I get home.

Bump!

Sorry for not going over your cs!

There aren't many if any antiques. If there are any, they are in the ruins that the elves "don't go to". The elves also don't have a written language as of yet.

There is no money or monetary value. Begin from a respectable family is about as close as you will get. Also, it seems your characters history conflicts a bit with your characters personality. Saying he is ordinary and nothing special then saying he is not very nice and entitled is conflicting.

Shurikai said
Sorry for not going over your cs!There aren't many if any antiques. If there are any, they are in the ruins that the elves "don't go to". The elves also don't have a written language as of yet.There is no money or monetary value. Begin from a respectable family is about as close as you will get. Also, it seems your characters history conflicts a bit with your characters personality. Saying he is ordinary and nothing special then saying he is not very nice and entitled is conflicting.

Ok, gotta fix it

I do like the rest of it. I hadn't even thought of antler medicines. So once its fixed up your character will be ready to go. :)

I made some modifications to my character sheet so I could adapt with the world as everyone goes off exploring and adventuring.

Oops wrong quote :\

Shurikai said
I do like the rest of it. I hadn't even thought of antler medicines. So once its fixed up your character will be ready to go. :)

Done! But not really satisfied with the changes -.-

sam haley said
I made some modifications to my character sheet so I could adapt with the world as everyone goes off exploring and adventuring.

I will be sure to make the changes.

hermijouji said
Done! But not really satisfied with the changes -.-

Alrighty, it looks pretty good. He is accepted. Remember, you can change things up until the roleplay starts.

Don't worry, you can add back the antiques and such once things start rolling. I would assume that the ruins will be the first thing explored before going over the mountains.
Same goes for you Sam, you can add smithing and lock picking back to your character once its found.

good :D, do you have an idea when will the RP start?

I am waiting on a friend. I will message him. After his and my cs are posted, we should be able to start.

Name: Gwydion

Age:17

True age: 102

Date of birth: 33rd day winter

Gender: male

Position: gatherer

Skills: fair with staff and cudgel weapons. Fair with bow. Skilled with small tools, craftsmanship skills.

Appearance: medium build, silver gray hair, dark brown eyes. 

Personality: Considered eccentric by even his peers but tolerated as mostly harmless for the sake of his family. He is often viewed as borderline heretical for his beliefs, though he considers himself quite devout. Quite oblivious to others at times, he is sometimes thought to be simpleminded but is in fact lost in thoughts his fellow elves do not seem to comprehend. Many of those thoughts wander toward the unknown borders of the forest. 

History: From a well known line of hunters, he is the first in his family to follow the path of the gatherers. His family is tolerent of his eccentricities only because his crafts have been harmless. His mother disapproves and often tries to convince him to become a hunter. He has long dreamed of exploring beyond the forest and of the strange creatures that may exist there.