Doll Master: A Partners RP Interest Check

I changed him up to make him more human-ish. The poison on his sword will paralyze you completely in 7 minutes if the cut is deep, and will kill you in 15. It will work much quicker if the person's heart is beating rapidly. It pretty much works like snake venom. It's pretty dangerous. He uses his sand and sword roughly the same amount.

I'm... not sure about that poison. I'll have to think about this.

Should the poison be weaker? If so, that's completely fine. Heck, we could even throw out the poison if you want. He could just use sand. That's fine too.

It's probably best to throw the poison out. It's hard to balance making it effective and making it fair when there's a fight.

All righty. Anything else? I'll edit soon.

Okay, um... I'll check in just a moment.

Yup. He's pretty much a conglamuration of Naruto characters. He's got the name of one guy, the looks of another, and abilities of a third. Told you I was rushed :-) Should I just scrap the character as a whole and start over? Do you think that would be best?

Oh, you saw the post before I had second thoughts, um...

You can start over if you want. Inspiration is okay but I'm not sure about going to close. ^^;

Perhaps its for the best... Can I keep a Naruto character NAME though? Just the name?

Scratch that. I don't actually care about the name, but if I change all the other rip-offs, can I keep the power? Pweeeeese?

I... suppose if you want, um, though I would like to to see more weird names, since Dolls can have pretty weird names

SWEEEEEEET! SAND POWERS ACTIVATE!!!!! How's about the name.... Um...... Xenophane? Just made that up on the spot.

Edited him again. This time, he is..... XENOPHANE!!!!! THE DESERT REAPER!!!!

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SWEEEEEEET! SAND POWERS ACTIVATE!!!!! How's about the name.... Um...... Xenophane? Just made that up on the spot.

Well, at least that won't get me confused. xD

*Sniffle* I almost sorta miss my copyright infringement character.... Even though he was bound to get me into legal trouble, and I actually don't care about him, I'll still miss him....

Since no one wanted Icarus as a Doll, I decided to change his appearance. I'm starting to think that the little kid thing was off putting, so I made him older

Okay, just explain how he uses sand in his bio and he'll be fine.

HUZZAH! Though, I'm not sure how you explain supernatural powers.... Hmm...... I'll work on it.

Edited him again. I tried to explain it better. What do you think?

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