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Tatsua Aiisen said
I'm making a biotic manipulator, just thought I'd mention it before somebody ninjas me...


Go for it! I'm gonna make mine dermal armor before it's too late.

UPDATE: It's great! Do you want me to accept it now or when it's totally done.
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Either way is fine, the parts with the most need to be accepted have been posted, all that's left is a more fleshed out appearance and history.
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Either way is fine, the parts with the most need to be accepted have been posted, all that's left is a more fleshed out appearance and history.


Ok then, i'll wait till your done then i'll accept you. I'll be working on my character. good luck with the rest of it.
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Yeah, he maaay seem OP, but i'm trying to balance, hell even give him more weaknesses than strengths. If you HATE this character you can be polite and ask me to A: Rewrite him or B: Scrap him and do it again.
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Can I reserve a spot? Working on my app right now.
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Sure Amigo, Spots yours!
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Well it could've been worse: there could've been 260 posts.

I'll start working on my CS now.

I scrapped the idea for twins in order to be original (your welcome Jay).
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Name:
Midori Shiba

Age:
18

Gender:
Female

Appearance:
Midori has pitch black hair, flowing from her scalp down to her lower back. She sports some bangs that ends in a "WW" design just before her eyelids. Her eye color is a sharp blood red, and she towers over most people with a height of 6 feet. She has a slender body figure, and her skin is of a light peach hue. For clothing, Midori simply wears a black halterneck and Daisy Duke short jeans. When using her powers, her red eyes glow.

Personality:
Midori is a vicious and cunning shifter that can stand up for herself if the need arises. Her personality was shaped by all that has happened in her earlier life. There simply wasn't enough 'good' in her early life to turn her into an enthusiastic girl that skips around while humming songs. One should consider themself fortunate to make friends with such a woman. But once a person makes that friendship work, Midori can place her trust within said person. She will probably prefer women as friends over males. She has little to no interest in dating.

History:
Midori Shiba was born 18 years and 3 to 4 months ago, to a married couple that farms. She was incarnated into the rough life, residing in a rather small and crammed house, placed somewhere in the southern Iwate Prefecture. At her toddler stage, when she would learn how to walk, run, and all the other basic necessities of daily life, Midori would spend a large part of her free time running and playing in the fields of her family's farm. She adored the tall grass, and all the bean and pea plants scattered across the whole area. Midori made special bonds with not only the humans around her, but with nature's animals. She would treat the pigs and cattle like family pets, and cared deeply for them (until they were taken to the butcher, of course). She was an only child, but that didn't matter. Her parents, aunts, uncles, and cousins all loved her, and Midori loved them all back.

It wasn't until Midori started school that things went downhill. She did not-so-well in school, despite giving her best efforts. She became saddened due to her failure in school, and with that came depression. Her parents bought Midori a puppy, born not too long before then. Midori quickly developed a great friendship with the dog, and did many things with it, as two best friends would. 5 years passed, and Midori was 11 years old. She still did poor in school, but just barely to pass each grade. It wasn't until 6th grade that she was bullied. The bullies were vicious and disgusting, and Midori tried her best to steer clear of them. It was an ineffective tactic.

Her mother's health declined rapidly. She was barely breathing within 2 months. Midori's mother contracted a new sort of disease that penetrates within the immune system, transforming common colds into life-threatening diseases. After her disease came to a climax, her father drove the family to the nearest hospital, a rather long 60 kilometer drive to the largest nearby town. Her mother died mere hours after their arrival to the hospital. The family returned to the farm, with one extra seat in the car.

Everything happened right after each other. Her father was the next to go. His arm got trapped in some sort of high-tech machinery he never worked before on the farm, and passed away during the amputation. Midori Shiba, at 12 years of age, was scarred and orphaned. All she had left was the dog. But not for very long.

With no aunts or uncles close by to go to, she had no other option but to be sent to an orphanage. It was a horrible experience that she came to regret. Midori was bullied there, as much as she was bullied at her school a year or so ago. The orphanage was kind enough to allow the girl to keep the dog as a pet, so long as she takes care of it. The adults there would purchase all the necessities and what not for the dog, named Potato, but it would be Midori who would know what to do with the supplies.

One miserable day, while it was raining, Potato ran away. He was not wearing his leash at the time. Potato's whereabouts are unknown, let alone whether or not he is still alive. This deprived Midori of her life-long friend. It was the turning point for her discovery of her powers.

The bullying came to a head not long after. The group of boys surrounded Midori. They yelled random names at her, many that she did not like at all. She was being pushed around by the group. Midori then tumbled and tripped, and collapsed onto the ground. She attempted a desperate escape through crawling, but it proved ineffective. The boys proceeded to kick her, and abuse her physically. She would yell, "Stop! Please!" It would be just as ineffective as the escape maneuver she attempted just minutes before. One boy, considered the "ringleader" of the group, grabbed onto her neck, and forced her on the wall into a corner. He repeatedly kicked her. Over. And over. Again.

She was rendered unconscious by a blow to the head. But during this time, in her mind, something formed. Something commanded her, and took control of Midori. Midori came to consciousness, witnessing the boys all surrounding her once again. Her limbs were tied and her mouth was covered in tape. But she was calm. Midori did not display any symptom of fear or inferiority. As the boys prepared to abuse her once more, she retaliated. The ropes untied, and the tape was ripped off. The bullies were staring at her, in a display of fear and that I-should-run-away-now motion. She levitated all of them, one by one, before forcing them onto a wall, and killing them in order with a knife, wielded by her telekinetic powers, not her own hands. Their throats were slit. The ringleader was Midori's final victim, before he too was punctured thirty times in the chest as an act of revenge by Midori. Knowing that she is a murderer, she ran. She fled. Midori abandoned the orphanage, and simply kept moving. She did not stop. Midori was a murderer on the loose, somewhere in the countryside of Japan.

6 years have come and gone. Midori was far from Japan. She made her way to Tokyo, where she sneaked onto a cargo ship bound for America with relative ease. It wasn't until she went through the 11 day journey across the Pacific that she got into trouble. While attempting to sneak off the ship in Seattle, she was spotted and exposed by law enforcement. They shot at her, but the bullets merely froze in mid air. She rotated the bullets 180 degrees, and propelled them towards the shooters. They collapsed to the ground after 10 seconds. The incident made its way to national news, where a murderer was on the loose somewhere in the Seattle-Tacoma metro area. She ran, just like she did in Iwate. To this day, she has not been discovered, and hopefully, will not be exposed anytime soon. Midori is a nomad, traversing the United States, looking for nothing in particular.

Power:
Telekinesis

Strengths:
When faced with non shifters in battle, they are no match.
If shot at, she can prevent bullets from injuring her.
Midori can even turn them back to the shooters.
With enough force, she can tear limbs off of people.

Weaknesses:
When faced with other wielders of telekinetic, she is equal in power to the other people.
Midori can only levitate a limited weight. IE she is able to lift a tractor trailer, but not an A380.
She can only lift objects from so far. IE she can lift an object maybe a 100 feet away, but not 100 miles away.
The object she intends to lift has to be in her line of sight.
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Name: Wilson Calibur

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Appearance: Wilson's usual attire consists of a light and dark grey striped shirt. The shirt is, for the most part, tattered and worn. He always wears a dark grey cap, which casts a large black shadow over his eyes, leaving only a set of dark, heavy eyes with charcoal black pupils. Under the shadow, the only thing visible is his wide, mischievous smile and some pale skin with a pointed chin. He has black jeans and padded grey boots. He makes it a point to wear fingerless black gloves. The youth stands at a height of 5"7, with lanky, long limbs. The little skin that Wilson shows is always unnaturally pale.

Personality: Wilson has a very care-free, mischievous personality. He believes that he's invincible; that no one can touch him. He is considered annoying by most. Wilson rarely loses his wide smile. He considers fooling around and messing with people as his hobby, and he's become very good at his hobby. Wilson is actually surprised at the fact he hasn't been punched in the face yet; you'd think that he'd been punched many times with his kind of attitude. He is very sarcastic and care-free, rarely being truly serious. Being alone for most of his life hardened him, desensitizing him to certain feelings.

History: Wilson Calibur has an awful habit of making enemies. He insults people. Pushes them around. Some shifters think his true shift is just being plain out annoying. Wilson was born into a relatively small family. It was just him and his mother for a while. His father had left them when he was at at young age, so he never really knew him much. But Wilson didn't mind. Wilson learned through doing. His mother juggled a full time job along with him, so most of the time, so often, he was left with a baby-sitter for most of the day. Wilson drove every single one of them out. Ranging from throwing things at them, or dousing them with a hose, or even just non-stop talking until they got a headache, soon no one wanted to take Wilson. So his mother decided the best course to take was just to leave him on his own and hope that when she returned, the place wasn't torn to shreds. It wasn't at all a good idea.

Of course, Wilson could never take being stuck in an apartment all day. It was a simple matter to escape. Just climb out the fire escape! No big deal. Wilson began to explore the streets at the tender age of 8. At around this time in his life, the annoying boy began to show his first ever signs of shifting. Sometimes, Wilson got lost out while exploring in the massive city. Darkness came early, and he was left walking along on the sidewalk alone. While Wilson attempted to give off a feeling of intimidation or mischievousness, he was still only 8, and could only handle so much. He would start off at a brisk walk. Then, a light jog. It would then escalate into a full-out run, just running and looking for his house. Occasionally, in the quickly fading light of day, his hand would briefly disappear as he ran. It would reappear after a moment, so Wilson simply blamed it as a trick of the light. It evolved into something much more.

Wilson began to get more in depth with his powers at the age of 14. He realized his main key to his powers was fear. If Wilson was scared or nervous, or he feared that he was about to get attacked, his body activated a neutral defense mechanism that could help him escape. With concentration, he realized he could focus them, and in a very, very slight sense, control what he did with the power. Wilson could choose what kind of illusion he'd prefer in whatever kind of situation he ends up stuck in. By then, his mother was almost never around. She seemed to almost have completely forgotten about him. She payed the bills, and maybe occasionally stopped by to do something or the other, but other than that she never cared for her son. Wilson liked it it that way. For most of the day, Wilson would just practice his powers, learning how to properly use them for his schemes. Wilson rarely ran into trouble. While walking the streets, he could appear as anyone or anything, which made life a whole lot easier. The shifter would committed the occasional crime; maybe disguising himself in a quick hold-up. But he was never tracked down. Who could, when your entire life was based around not being yourself?

For the most part, Wilson walks the street confidently, not a worry in the world. He doesn't care about most people's troubles and stress. When he needs something, he'll take it, and he doesn't have to worry about being hunted down. His overconfidence will probably be his undoing in the end.

Power: Illusion

Strengths: Wilson's cocky attitude is derived from his Shifting Abilities. Wilson can form an illusion around himself, making him appear in different forms. Wilson can set an illusion of invisibility, which is his personal favorite. He can disappear and reappear at will. He can also shift into different forms; he can appear and sound as someone else or some thing, which he uses often to his advantage, or just for his own fun. He can mainly access this power while nervous or fearful, as it gives him a chance to escape.

Weaknesses: While Wilson adopts the appearance of whatever he chooses, Wilson can't adopt what they can do. He can appear as someone different; but he can't gain their powers or their knowledge. That's unfortunate for Wilson, considering how severely lacking he is in physical attributes. He can't kick, or lift heavy things, or throw a hard punch due to little physical activity in his life. The only thing he's skilled in is running. He just hides behind his illusions, and hopes that they can hold strong enough for him to get away. The illusion can be easily shattered by a strong blow to the head to destroy his concentration.

Other Information: He's the Cheshire Cat. Sue me.
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Wilson's usual attire consists of a muddy grey hoodie, tattered and weathered. The hood casts a shadow over most of his face, leaving only his wide, mischievous smile, and a set of heavy eyes with charcoal black pupils. He has black jeans and padded grey boots. He makes it a point to wear fingerless black gloves. The youth stands at a height of 5"7, with lanky limbs.


Dude, that's almost identical to my character from Page 1. The only difference is the color of his jeans.
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Oh, whoops. Sorry. Didn't see it. I'll change that.
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NOT DONE/ just the basics so far/ will editMidori Shiba18FemaleMidori has snow white hair, flowing from her scalp down to her lower back. She sports some bangs that ends in a "WW" design just before her eyelids. Her eye color is a sharp blood red, and she towers over most people with a height of 6'2. She has a slender body figure, and her skin is of a light peach hue.Midori is a vicious and cunning shifter that can stand up for herself if the need arises. Her share this deadly trait. Her personality was shaped by all that has happened in her earlier life. There simply wasn't enough 'good' in her early life to turn her into an enthusiastic girl that skips around while humming songs. One should consider themself fortunate to make friends with such a woman. But once a person makes that friendship work, Midori can place her trust within said person. Also, quick tip: she will probably prefer women as friends over males. She has little to no interest in dating.Her vectors can only go so far; up to 2 meters.If any one of her two vectors are cut off, she may enter a comatose state, and has a chance of death.If stained with any colored liquids (like blood), the liquid will make the vector visible.


Alright, I have one problem with this... The ability. It's just screaming ELFEN LIED, ELFEN LIED, ELFEN LIED. Please, can you rewrite it to something original? I'm perfectly ok with telekinesis or something of the sorts, but please change it.
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ArcanicNeon said
Alright, I have one problem with this... The ability. It's just screaming ELFEN LIED, ELFEN LIED, ELFEN LIED. Please, can you rewrite it to something original? I'm perfectly ok with telekinesis or something of the sorts, but please change it.


So I can keep the appearance, just change the ability?
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EVA-02 said
So I can keep the appearance, just change the ability?


WELL, change the hair colour please. REMEMBER WHAT I SAID ABOUT ANIME.... *LIFTS UP KNIFE* everything else i fine, just the ability and the hair colour.
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ELFEN LIED, ELFEN LIED, ELFEN LIED


*shudder* NEVER SPEAK OF THAT. NEVER.
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Is there an exact location or name to the place/places where this RP is taking place? Or is it just an unnamed, modern city?
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MatthiasAngel said
*shudder* NEVER SPEAK OF THAT. NEVER.


Elfen Lied being one of my favorite animes....

Sue me.
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Is there an exact location or name to the place/places where this RP is taking place? Or is it just an unnamed, modern city?


Yeah, Probably an unnamed city.

ALSO, after a few more apps are finished (or come in) We'll start the IC.
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Yeah, Probably an unnamed city. ALSO, after a few more apps are finished (or come in) We'll start the IC.


What country? I was hoping for it to be in Japan, because, why America? Always America. America this, America that.
Also is this modern? Like with modern technology and what not?
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What country? I was hoping for it to be in Japan, because, why America? Always America. America this, America that.Also is this modern? Like with modern technology and what not?


Ok, for one. This is not going to take place in Japan. THIS ISN'T AN ANIME. And yes, this is taking place in America. And this is modern, with modern technology and stuff.
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