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I have absolutely no excuse for not keeping up with this. Reigenleif should've been far more active over the last few months.

I cant change history, but I can at least do my best for the present. Even if its not great, i'm going to try and post to catch her up to the present tomorrow (I'd do it now but its well past time I was sleeping).
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Just checking in. I'll have an application posted sometime this weekend. I'll plop the thing in this post when done.
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Sundered Echo said
I have absolutely no excuse for not keeping up with this. Reigenleif should've been far more active over the last few months.I cant change history, but I can at least do my best for the present. Even if its not great, i'm going to try and post to catch her up to the present tomorrow (I'd do it now but its well past time I was sleeping).


Good to see you again, Echo. *hugs*

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Just checking in. I'll have an application posted sometime this weekend. I'll plop the thing in this post when done.


I think i can say we all look forwards to it, meng.
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Alright..now where is everyone? Gorzath and his Argonian friend are in the center of the Market place, watching the thugs follow their friends...who to have them go bother...
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Alright..now where is everyone? Gorzath and his Argonian friend are in the center of the Market place, watching the thugs follow their friends...who to have them go bother...


Don't forget that Zainat and two other d00dz got in a street brawl - Luckily those guards showed up or Zainat would have pwned they asses.
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Dipper said
Don't forget that Zainat and two other d00dz got in a street brawl -


That'll do.

Dipper said Luckily those guards showed up or Zainat would have pwned they asses.


*Raises eyebrow* Oh really? I seem to remember Zainat getting beaten horribly by a fat, crippled, Redguard with a club. I shudder to think what would have happened to him against two, healthy, Redguards.
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That'll do. *Raises eyebrow* Oh really? I seem to remember Zainat getting beaten horribly by a fat, crippled, Redguard with a club. I shudder to think what would have happened to him against two, healthy, Redguards.


Good thing they weren't Redguards - They were a Breton and a Nord. Easy pickings.

Also, where is your evidence for Zainat getting beaten? I don't see it in the thread. xP
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Alright..now where is everyone? Gorzath and his Argonian friend are in the center of the Market place, watching the thugs follow their friends...who to have them go bother...


Well if I could get my shit together Blade would be starting a riot, or organizing one anyway.

Have you started anything with Nyx, Cairo?
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Though no post is yet visible, fear not!

Words have been written this night....
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Here's the CS. I took the bit about a thorough Background a bit too seriously, perhaps, so I hope the summarized paragraph above is helpful.

Name: Shamoun the Dark Pilgrim

Race: Redguard

Family Origins: Shamoun was born into a family bet against Hammerfell. His father often met with and worked for members of notable Houses. The man made connections across the borders as well, all too often wagering against the good of his people. Such business kept to the shadows and Shamoun was instead exposed to the ways of the merchant by his shop-owning mother. Unfortunately, she too made her profits trading with those who would see the Aldmeri Dominion conquer Hammerfell. When rumours of a treaty surfaced, the toddler Shamoun was sent away to Skyrim in 180 4E.

Appearance: Shamoun is half a head shorter than most men and of slender build. His arms, legs, and back are lean from years of labour, but his chest and gut have softened with age. The years have also carved a few thin lines arising from the crux of his brow and curving out from his nose. His cheekbones line with the nostrils of his nose, standing out due to his gaunt cheeks. A scar runs across one such cheek, ending just under his left eye. The mark does not grow hair and adds a peculiar, perhaps humorous line as it cuts into his the dark curls of his short beard. His hair descends to his shoulders, both braided and tied back.



Age: 35 Years too close to becoming a greybeard

Equipment:

  • Well Loved Scimitar

  • Curved Elvish Dagger

  • Alik'r Robes Enforced w/ Hide & Hood all dyed Black

  • Leather Bracers & Boots

  • Short-bow & Small Quiver



Miscellanea:

  • Leather Satchel for Supplies

  • Hand-Size Leather bound Codex

  • Small Jar of Writing Charcoal

  • Leather Roll of Lockpicks

  • Three Days of Rations

  • Water-skin

  • Wetstone & Polish for Blades

  • Modest Collection of Healing & Poisonous Herbs (<3 Uses Each)

  • Light Mortar & Pestle

  • Documents tying him to House of Hammerfell



Favored Skills:
Highly Proficient Skill: One Handed, Every Redguard has the natural inclination for wielding a weapon and Shamoun has practiced that art all his life.

Moderately Proficient Skills: Sneak, Alchemy, Speech, His short time with the Dark Brotherhood focused on honing his ability to Sneak and he has continued practising ever since. Alchemy started as a passing fancy, but upon finding poisons and healing poultices, what amounted to mindless dabbling grew into a hobby. Finally, Shamoun was raised around honeyed words and keeps them readied as but another tool.

Somewhat Proficient Skills: Smithing, Archery, & Lockpicking, Maintaining one's own weapon is important when that weapon is far from home. Shamoun keeps basic tools and knows enough to keep his weapons in decent condition. Archery started as a skill taught in his youth and persists today chiefly as a means to hunt. He was exposed to the latter art first within the Brotherhood, and then while working for the more paranoid Houses within Hammerfell.

Background and a "brief" history:

Every chill night spent in the Skyrim brings back memories colder than the region's harsh winters. In his eyes being sent away as a child was a blessing. Shamoun discovered a tenacity within himself to make ends meet while maintaining his personal codes. He found strength and endured an attack by the omnipotent shadow, the Dark Brotherhood. Better, in a relatively short time he found the group without making enemies of them. He abandoned everything he'd worked for before then to take a chance. Five years later, he'd found his reward painfully short. So Shamoun found a group with devotion so blind it pained him to feign belief and followed those years up serving the rich, no matter how corrupt. Nevertheless, despite all the bittern truths laid before him, Shamoun felt a warmth deep in his chest. The Dark Brotherhood was not simply flesh -- it was omnipotent. An idea can never die, a history will only vanish if forgotten, but he believed and he remembered. Every chill night Skyrim mustered, Shamoun looked back to his memories and knew that he would endure. The harshest of winters would not deter the return of his Brotherhood.



Fighting Style: Shamoun found strength in the flowing movements of standard Alik'r form. Over the years, and with much instruction, he developed his abilities to string each movement into a continuous, responsive, and fast-striking series. He has drawn and written much of his findings in his journal, jokingly naming his 'style' as the Wanderer's Dance. Dance, because the movements bend and move with motions quite fluid compared to a Nord's swing of a battleaxe. Instead of focusing on a few powerful blows, Shamoun uses the speed and endless motions score many shallow wounds. The Wanderer's Dance is such that the more a fight draws out, the greater the damage the opponent will suffer.

While Shamoun has spent many years refining his natural abilities, he is also aware of the power outside of combat. When cool-headed, he will always choose the path without bloodshed. Sneaking is his second best asset and the Dance was crafted with that in mind.

Personality: Shamoun has experienced pain, disappointment, and abandonment, but through every challenge he maintained a strength. He survived and through all of it has developed a faith in his own abilities. For decades he has endured much that might lead others to fall and knowing he made it through feeds a healthy self-confidence. Shamoun feels age approaching, he knows his body has another decade or so if given the proper care. He uses the ambition to bring back the Dark Brotherhood as the source of his strength and courage as it stands, in his eyes, as a dream dashes too soon. Because of his dreams, he is focused on learning skills he remembers made the Brotherhood strong. Beyond the obvious abilities to move with stealth and down a foe despite size or armour, he remembers them for their deep understanding of alchemy, magic, and deceit. Shamoun treats the resurrection of the Brotherhood as his sole obligation. The pressure keeps him thinking away within himself most of the time, often leaving his exterior both cold and stoic. That said, Shamoun finds himself flamboyant, highly expressive, and deeply invested in the world when in combat. The Wander's Dance is to him like painting to an artist or music to a bard.

Ultimately, Shamoun is a Pilgrim in name and spirit. He is all too used to a world where one's dreams are solely theirs to craft, and though he may not realize it, does not yet know how to trust well. Perhaps this also stems from the abandonment of his parents and the betrayal by the merchant. Deep down, he expects to lose every good thing he comes across in life. He fears that when he dies all his years will be for not, that he will only be the Man who Tried. So Shamoun hardens himself and acts as if failure is not an option, because if he is to continue on emotionally, it really isn't.
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Well if I could get my shit together Blade would be starting a riot, or organizing one anyway. Have you started anything with Nyx, Cairo?


No i haven't heard from her since well, the last time she posted. She actually hasn't been on psn for almost a month now, so I haven't been able to contact her.

So long as someone can do the organize riot/initiate riot post, i could jump in at any time.
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Don't forget that Zainat and two other d00dz got in a street brawl - Luckily those guards showed up or Zainat would have pwned they asses.


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Not the post I was expecting to put up, but this ones been a loooong time coming.

Enjoy!
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Also, where is your evidence for Zainat getting beaten? I don't see it in the thread. xP


Guilddeath does not erase his shame!
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Guilddeath does not erase his shame!


No proof, it never happened.
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No proof, it never happened.


I DEMAND TRIAL BY COMBAT!

And there's a post! :DDD
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I DEMAND TRIAL BY COMBAT!And there's a post! :DDD

NO... TRIAL BY STONE!

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I DEMAND TRIAL BY COMBAT!And there's a post! :DDD




So, not much happened this week, eh?
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So, not much happened this week, eh?


BAH. Your little flaming sword couldn't even beat a man who is afraid of flames!
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Alrighty! Shon review time!

(Insert fanfare trumpet)

I actually quite like this submission, and it's clear care and craft went into it, so so far so good!

I do rather like that despite the troubles of his youth, he found a pretty normal and happy life in Falkreath, which I think helps establish him as a pretty well adjusted individual. The Dark Brotherhood angle was interesting, although I do have a couple things I wouldn't mind having clarified.

Shamoun has an understandable interest in finding out who the Brotherhood is is quite fine and rather compelling, but why would they seek him out and offer him the ultimatum? What had he stumbled across that would make him known to them and considered a threat? He was obviously rather discrete about what happened that night they killed the carriage driver, and I don't think they'd run the risk of being discovered by someone inquiring about a poison's alchemy reagents. If you could kind of go into more of the "why" they decided to confront him, that would be great. If mean, even if it's something like he interfered with a contract unintentionally, that would be fine, or like in Skyrim, took it upon himself.

You also kind of glazed over his involvement with the Dark Brotherhood, which is unfortunate given how important it is to his history. What kinds of jobs did he take, what was his relationship with the other guild members? Notable successes and failures? It would be good to know exactly what he did with them and how it came to shape him so much. I mean, the build up from him trying to find them was a lot more detailed than what he actually did for them. Also, who sent him the letter and how did they get it off in time? The Dark Brotherhood sanctuary was raided and destroyed in a sudden raid by the Praetorians. Would it not make more sense for rumour to have reached him? He couldn't have returned to the sanctuary since it was occupied afterwards by the Praetorians.

I quite like that you elaborated more on the partnership Skyrim and Hammerfell entered into after the Siege of Storms, which I'm surprised you didn't mention. How was Shamoun effected by the Auroras? Was he put under its thrall and discovering a loyalty of sorts to the Emperor? Did he notice the disappearances of people in the communities he lived in during that time period? How did he feel when the spell was broken? It was a big world changing event that lead to the Empire succeeding control of Skyrim to Rogvir the Ironheart, which would have changed the politics in Skyrim quite a bit.

And most importantly now is how the dwemer invasion has effected Shamoun? Keep in mind Hammerfell is completely occupied and its armies were mostly crushed with an insurgency propping up resistance against the occupiers, and most of the surviving noble families are in hiding or swearing fealty to the occupiers. If I read that last paragraph right, he's back in Skyrim again, which is where the game will end up eventually, but not for some time. He should be in Hammerfell at this point, and what's going on in Skyrim right now is kind of being kept hush hush until the group arrives.

If you could clear all that up, I'd appreciate it!
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