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Synopsis Since the Dragonborn defeated Alduin, things have been quiet. However, now there is talk of disappearances, strange shadows and sounds at night. Dozens of people have disappeared after only a few short months. Some whisper that the threat of the dragons has simply been replaced by that of a more nightmarish creature. They aren't wrong. Two intrepid souls will embark on a journey across Skyrim to uncover the mystery and discover the true face of the beast that haunts the night.

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Mage20GG as Dantus Ovell
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Awesome. Sorry it's taken so long for a reply. Had work today and was relaxing for a little while when I got home. I'll go ahead and post now, though.

I'm leaving this here as a reference.

Name: Dantus Ovell
Age: 23
Race: Imperial
Appearance: Closely shaved head, no beard, dark eyes. Average build.
Personality: Solemn, until you get him in a tavern. Hates being told what to do, very stubborn.
Weapons/Spells: Steel Sword, Silver Sword, Crossbow, Firebolt, Flames, Healing
Armor/Robes: Leather Boots, Fur Armor (full version with chest and sleeves), and Leather Gauntlets, Necklace of Immunity (Disease Resistance 100%)
Backstory: Former Silver Hand member until he witnessed brutal slaughter at the hands of his superior upon someone who was rumored to be a vampire. The person turned out to be innocent and not a vampire, so he left in shame.
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Name: Rina Greenfield
Age: 21
Race: Breton
Appearance:

Hair Color: Red
Eyes: Green
Height: 5'2''

Personality: Optimistic and inquisitive. The kind of person who always has to know everything.
Spells:
-Restoration: Healing, Lesser Ward, Fast Healing, Healing Hands, Steadfast Ward, Close Wounds, Greater Ward, Heal Other
-Destruction: Sparks, Lightning Bolt, Lightning Rune
-Alteration: Candlelight, Magelight
Robes: Adept Robes of Restoration, Adept Boots of Restoration (shown in image)
Backstory: Formerly a student at the College of Winterhold. Born to a middle class Breton family as an only child. Currently venturing out to see the world.
Finally got my screen capture to work lol. This is Rina at a glance. Let me know what you think.
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Uh.... okay. What am I supposed to do with your IC post? I'm truly lost. I get that you're on the road outside of Morthal but where am I supposed to come in to it? You just started a fight with a vampire after getting bounced from the Inn. Am I supposed to jump in? I would have liked to discuss how we were going to play this out before you jumped right in.
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Sorry. I was a bit...overeager. If you want I could remove it and we can talk before we start.
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No need to apologize. Anyway there are some basic things that we should cover before we start. Like the relationship between our two characters. Are they strangers or have they met before? How are we going to start out the story? How are our characters going to meet or are they travelling together? Are we just going to stumble on to an evil vampire plot to do evil stuff or are we going to be given a mission by a Jarl to investigate some disappearances that later lead us to vampires? I think these are just a few basic things we should work out before we really get into it. Otherwise, I won't really know where you're trying to go with the story.
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Well, how about the Jarl's put out a reward for whoever solves the vampire problem? We could both be trying to earn that bounty and end up working together. We won't know each other beforehand. What do you think?
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Just killing vamps for money? That seems a bit mundane. From what I got from the synopsis I assumed you had at least a general plot in mind that had more mystery to it. I'm fine with meeting each other along the way but if we're just bounty hunting that's not much of a story. The synopsis also says people have only been disappearing which suggests that no one knows what's really going on.

Our main bad guys are vampires in this one so why are they kidnapping people instead of just feeding from them like usual? I think that should be an important plot element. Morthal is also a fairly small town so people would notice if others started disappearing but Falion the court wizard would be the prime suspect since he's generally under suspicion by the townsfolk. It seems like a waste of a good title for us to just start beating up vampires with no real substance to the story.
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Oh no, the bounty is just to get started. Then we uncover the real plot, discovering that there are vampires in the courts of each of the holds. They stand to gain a lot of power all at once.
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Sounds good to me then. What do you want the setting of our encounter to be?
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