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Seems like we have two villains thus far.
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Sauron The Dark Lord said
I think you've clearly seen my need for a lense due to my tragic mistake of never finding the ring.


Do they make contacts that big?
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Those sound good to me! I would love to be a skinwalker but if I can't thats absolutely fine, its your call. I will get a CS up when I get to my laptop tonight. Thank you!
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The D.I.S doesn't have a problem with recruiting monsters but if we don't get some more humans soon I'm going to have to start manufacturing NPCs.
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A bit of a teensy problem: what would the CS look like for a bad guy? It's obvious they wouldn't be "on the team". Then again, it probably wouldn't be much different from the one already posted, huh?
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Just eliminate the slots that pertain exclusively to the D.I.S so Cover Campus, role on team, years on team, field name that sort of thing.
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Name: Curtis Grey (Born Curtis Marcus)
Field Name: Garou
Age: 23 (Born August 29th, 1990)
Position (role on team): Heavy Hitter (on the front lines, especially when shifted)
Time served on team: 2 years
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Role: Through training his body, and being conditioned during his time shifted, Curtis has become quite adept with fighting with his body. He can use weapons but prefers to use his bare hands. He will always be the first into a fight, and usually the last one to leave.
Race: Skinwalker
Special Abilities or Expertise: Curtis is physically intimidating, and has the strength to back it up. Through years of training and being conditioned in his wolfman form he has pushed his physique to the upmost of humanly possible. Curtis has the ability to control when he shifts into the form of a nine foot tall bipedal wolfman. While in this form he is granted vastly improved strength, and is a bit more agile.
Nationality: American, but of Scottish decent
Biography:

Personality: Curtis is very loud and outspoken individual, and isn't afraid of (and often enjoys) expressing his opinion. His years of training has left him at the peak of his physical condition, but deep down inside he is actually very sweet and gentle. Curtis is fiercely loyal to people he considers friends, and would give his life in an instant for people that he truly loves. Despite having The Wolf inside of him Curtis tends to fall into a Beta position in groups rather than an alpha one. He would prove himself a loyal follower than a innovative leader. However this doesn't mean he will blindly follow someone. They must prove to be a worthy individual in his eyes, and even then he isn't afraid to point out when his leader has a dumb idea.
Campus Cover: College Student
Trivia: Curtis is a very large and physically impressive man, standing at a little over six and a half feet tall. However all of those years of seclusion with Alex in the woods has left him awkward towards women, especially ones he finds attractive.
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I seem to have been unclear, a skinwalker can control himself as a wolf and can effect the change at anytime, he is not forced to be a wolf on the full moon.

A werewolf is an uncontrolled killing machine during those three nights, the full moon and the day before and after.

A beastman cannot both transform in the full moon and control himself during the time. Either he has control and changes whenever he likes or he doesn't have control and changes only on the three nights of fullest moon.

Now as to the bsckstory, was this "stranger" a demon or a vampire? I'm guessing cause of the horns he was a demon. This being the case he wouldn't fear a werewolf or a skinwalker, still not sure what Alex was. Demons regard themselves as the dominant lifeform considering humans on the same level as cows or horses to be used and discarded. They consider vampires, werewolves etc even below humans because these monsters were born from humanity no matter how litte they might resemble it.

While werewolves may bite someone being unable to control themselves skinwalkers only turn someone if they have a reason.

This would be my advice, write in some sort of history between Alex and the demon, make it so for whatever reason Alex was hunting this demon, probably for revenge for something or other. Give the demon a reason to fear Alex. Maybe they've battled before and the demon barely escaped with its life and perhaps it is using the blood sacrafices to regenerate itself, I'll leave the details up to you.

My second piece of advice on your character being turned is to make it so he was mortally wounded on the alter before Alex arrived after killing/exorcizing the demon the only way to save your character was to give him thd strength of a skinwalker in order to heal.
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Oooooh! I gotcha. I thought you meant that skinwalkers can control it while the moon is full, my bad xD Thank you for the advice! I will edit the CS when I get to my laptop this evening.
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Alright whenever you can get to it, other than that the character looks real good.
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Interested! I'll have a proper read through the posts and make a CS later :)
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Name: Alex Cain (Everyone calls him by his last name or field name)
Field Name: Striker
Age: 31
Race: Human
Nationality: British (English to be precise)
Position (role on team): Combat Specialist
Time served on team: New transfer to team (but served 7 years in a British team).


Role: Cain utilizes his military experience and combat expertise to help the squad overcome violent situations. He is particularly good at CQB and very handy to have when up against targets/hostiles using firearms.

Special Abilities or Expertise: Cain’s physicality gives him a natural advantage, which combined with his hand-to-hand combat skills means he can even hold his own against many common vampires. He is very good at using firearms, and he has some limited knowledge regarding explosives. Personal experience (both prior to and during his time with the D.I.S) has taught him many things about the supernatural and his knows various methods of dealing with threats; he also has some very limited understanding of certain arts/skills (e.g. using runes) but not to the extent that he can put them to practice.



Personality: Cain is confident but is the kind of man who will only speaks when he feels he needs to; he can come across as a bit grumpy, as he usually has a serious demeanour. It’s not too hard to piss him off, however his self-control is quite commendable as despite being angry he can usually refrain from doing something stupid or rash (he’ll bark but he won’t bite). He hates vampires and is distrustful of many supernatural beings, especially when they’re allowed on a team.

Campus Cover: Gym teacher

Trivia: The only time he doesn’t have his silver dagger on him is when he’s teaching… this is a major reason why he hates teaching.

Hope this is ok :)
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Have updated Curtis' CS. Thank you so much for the advice, giving Alex a beef with the stranger made everything click into place a lot better. Also the stranger is alive, and pissed, giving a possible enemy. Any more thoughts or suggestions because I am always open to them xD
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You remembered to change the skinwalker/werewolf stuff in the bio but you forgot to change it in the other categories, just give the rest of the CS a once over other than that looks brilliant.

Looks great Fat Boy nice to have some normal humans on the team.
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Yet again, that is my bad xD I fixed it, and cannot wait for the IC to start c:
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Just to make sure you know I'm still kicking around :)
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Your kicking has been noted.
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Just to clarify, we currently have CSs from myself (Striker), Saarebas (Crimson), BigPapaBelial (Smoke), Zherdee (Listener), and BuriedComic7 (Garou). Is there anyone you're waiting for? How many people would you ideally like? AND you got any idea when you'd like to start?

Sorry to spam you with questions :P
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We have four Cs's so far,

BigPapaBelial won't be excepted till he made some changes to his CS cause at the moment his bio and personality are the vaguest things I have ever seen.

Minarawr had a plan for a government human experiment but she hasn't created a CS or been here in a while. I think I'm good to write a CS for my demon but I can't do it right now.

So Questions, Answers: We have four Characters not five at the moment, we are waiting on Minarawr, I was thinking like seven but five will do, whenever we have enough people.
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Hey hey, sorry for inactivity. Real life gets in the way a lot, but I finally found some spare time.
My boyfriends's laptop broke down somewhat, but we got it up and running again.
I think I can have my form up, or at least a basic draft of it, on Sunday.
I'd love to make it tomorrow, but I have a birthday so it's probably not gonna work tomorrow.
My apologies for the wait, I'll have the CS up a.s.a.p.
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