bushidoxisamu2 said
Ok done with changes and ready for the second review

• Hades Fury: Totally acceptable now, good job.


• Demonic Presence: Limit the range it allows you to extend it to about five feet, nothing like 100 yards as they did in the fight you're referencing.


• Shadow Puppets: So these just work as mouths and cannons and the strings for the puppets? Wow, I would not have gathered that from the way you described it earlier. Yeah, this is acceptable.


• Hell's Bounds: Acceptable as is.


• Black Plague: This is acceptable, the killing thing is still up for debate. Change it so it says: "Kills normal humans in three days. More powerful beings can resist the poison."


• Demon Wings: Acceptable as is, since flight is only specific to a few characters. And almost all of them can fly up to sonic speeds.


• Regeneration: You limited this well, as is, acceptable.


• Bats of the Night: Perfect limitation.


• Prowess of a demon: The only thing you should watch is the incremental strength increase. These effects are required to have a prep behind them, one turn prep for each increment. And these effects only last one attack, and then have to be prepped again. Other than that, it's acceptable.


• Shadow Puppet Defense: As long as you don't just say "The puppets are spontaneously in the way of the attack." Them blocking it has to make sense, otherwise that would start an argument or two.


• Masochism is the love of pain, not Sadism.


• Power of the Underworld: You should also add that he can see in the dark. Otherwise both parties will be blind.