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Azathoth said
Nice OP, who delivered the invitations to our characters?


Eline.
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Apologies for not having a post up. I intended to have one up before work, but I had a few errands to run that took much longer than I expected.

I have tomorrow off though, so I will make it my mission to have one up late tonight sometime.
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I literally meant who handed them to each of us, I was going to start my post before entering the audience with the Queen.

Oh, ya know, now that you mention it, I took Pyro's response literally in post.
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Character Sheet (With a few jokes towards the end)


Name: Dese And Aviine Atranga

Race: Atzi Humans

Age: 28 and 27

Gender: Males

Appearance: http://pbs.twimg.com/media/BdKrp3ICUAA2Z8b.jpg:large (Not img'd since it didn't seem to be showing properly)

Dese (Left): Tall (6'6), muscular, broad shouldered, with a deep, crisp, and attractive/charismatic voice. However, despite his voice he doesn't seem like the most approachable person.

Aviine (Right): Tall (6'3), muscular, broad shouldered, with a deep, crisp and attractive/charismatic voice, although less so than Dese. He is more approachable.

Faction: Freelancers

Biography:


Skills:

Dese – Skilled with One handed weapons, North Conjuskan wilderness survival, Camel and Horse riding, Shield technique, Spear technique, Cooperation with his dog, Grappling, Endurance, Hunting/Tracking, Crossbow technique, Archery. Dese is an overall excellent warrior, tracker and athlete.

Aviine – Skilled with One handed weapons, North Conjuskan wilderness survival, Camel and Horse riding, Shield technique, Spear technique, Cooperation with his eagle, Grappling, Endurance, Hunting/Tracking, Crossbow technique, Archery. Aviine is overall an excellent warrior, tracker, and athlete, although less so than Dese. More to come in roleplay.

Weaknesses: Neither of them are very sociable or approachable people, Dese more so than Aviine. They can often times be socially awkward and don't understand many of the non-Conjuskan/Atzi customs. They can not swim or read, and are extremely vulnerable to falling ill in Northern regions. Aviine's shamanistic practices can be very time consuming and keep him from fulfilling other duties. Often times, any spell or hex he casts comes with the price of him feeling tired over the next day or more, along with the fact that he may have to do hours of ceremonies in return. Neither of them can perform efficiently with two handed weapons or in heavy armor or have any experience surviving in lands outside of North Conjuska. They have next to absolutely no knowledge of the animal and plant life outside of North Conjuska, which limits their survival ability and Aviine's ability to create more tonics. Although they both have had much experience riding horses, they have not done so in years and may be rusty if the time calls for mounting one. Both brothers face discrimination for being of Atzi ethnicity and are also emotionally troubled

Equipment:

Dese and Aviine typically share equipment with Aviine being the one to mainly have anything of his own, being a shaman. Still, some are used mainly by Dese.

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Steel: 18 inch one edged blade (2), 48 inch double edged sword (2) , 24 inch double bladed axe - 4 inch pikes coming from between the blades (2), 18 inch jagged edged arrow (34), 22 inch across shield – see appearance picture for length (1), 7 foot spear (1), 5 foot spear (2), 36 inch scythe jagged outside edge (1), 6 inch throwing knife (7), 36 inch diameter round shield (2), Cross bow (2), 8 inch cross bow bolts (60), Cloaked scale armor (1), cloak (2), Steel cuffed boot (2) 50 foot grappling hooks (2), Balls (Trolol)

Clothing: Casual Aeribissian outfit (2) Classy Aeribissian outfit (2) Casual Conjuskan outfit (1), Classy Conjuskan outfit (1), Weapons belt (4), Boot (4)

Quesei: A hardy camel from down south, Dese and Aviine have brought him to Aeribis rather than spend money buying a horse. He is indifferent to strangers for the most part, having a rather careless attitude unless immediate danger is present. Being a camel he has excellent endurance, able to outpace any horse over long distances. An odd sight to see being ridden through the forests, Quesei is a young, large animal who will soon be hitting his prime.

Dese


Akimbo: Based off of the Rhodesian Ridgeback, Akimbo is Dese’s closest companion after his brother. Akimbo is a Conjuskan variant of an Atzi breed of dog, made to be an all purpose canine. They can be trained to be expert hunters, fighters, and guards. If brought up right, they are usually calm animals when around those they love. When the time comes for it, however, they can become an expression of unbridled fury. Bred to be able to withstand high and low temperatures, Akimbo can live comfortably in a wide range of environments. The breed is incredibly athletic, and not to be disturbed. They are notorious for acts of aggression and will not be tolerated in some cities. Dese bought Akimbo from illegal sellers in a Conjuskan city. Being a guard dog, Akimbo will not immediately warm up to whoever he sees interacting with Dese. As a result, he may seem as though he is distant and anti social. No, he is simply watching to make sure no one makes the wrong move.

Clothing: See picture (1)

Aviine


Shamanistic: Various herbs, potions, poisons, and animal parts. Shaman staff, spiritual objects used for meditation, blessings, etc.

Diminuendei: An eagle with a 7.5 foot wingspan, Diminuendei is a close companion of Aviine. He was pushed out of his nest as a chick, and miraculously survived. The parents never took him back and so Aviine took and raised him. Everybody expected the eagle to fly off and never come back once it could, but it never did, instead returning to the village to spend time with Aviine. It is a bird of prey with huge talons and can be extremely dangerous to humans if troubled. During the raid on the village, the eagle killed one particular elf who was about to strike Aviine from behind. The last thing the elf’s brain registered were talons driving deep into his skull. However, Diminuendei will only hurt those who pose an immediate threat to Aviine. This does not mean he is friendly; he is aloof to strangers and his gaze looks like a permanent glare, keeping most people away.

Clothing: See picture (1)

Other: In Atzi culture, suicide and backing down are against a strict cultural code. This particular distaste towards suicide is likely the only thing that saved Dese’s father from committing suicide after spiraling into depression.

The Atzi have bred some of the best heat resistant and battle efficient horses, camels, and dogs.

When recognized as Atzi, Dese and Aviine are often treated differently. Sometimes this good, sometimes this is bad.

Quesei, being a camel, will always looked stoned.

Akimbo and Diminuendei are both free roaming animals. This means that they come and go as they please, although they have yet to ever lose track of where their human companions are. As such, there will be times when they go missing for days. At the command of Aviine or Dese, however, they will stay for as long as they are needed.

Akimbo will listen to both Dese and Aviine, although rarely to the latter. Diminuendei, on the other hand, takes orders from Aviine and absolutely no one else.

Dese and Aviine are good at basketball. We all know why.

Having done the dirty work of their employers over the years, Dese and Aviine have been desensitized to things that others would see as violent and cruel. They are not knights; they have no strict list of no this and no that. They still follow the rules condemning suicide and retreat, but apart from that they have next to no limits. They have morals, but will not hesitate to over step them if their village is involved.

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Will read CSthis afternoon.
Literally, it would have been a soldier, however I like the thought of Eline handing them out personally, so we'll stick with that.
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Blah.

It seems my creative processes have come to a screeching halt :/
I hate to hold everyone up here, and this seems like it'd be tons of fun, but I just can't seem to get a good intro post up. I'll keep trying, but please continue on without me if you have to.
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Couple things with the CS, little things that can easily be fixed, nothing major. Biography is fine.

They seem to be skilled at, quite literally, everything short of using two handed weapons. I'm not fond of this. Yes, Eline hired the best, but I don't like it when there isn't something that he isn't skilled at. And while Dese's lack of an ability to communicate can be detrimental at times, it does not outweigh the benefits of being able to do whatever he wants in combat. Aviine has no negatives whatsoever, and even has an added benefit of being a shaman.

Speaking of weapons, you have too many. Unless you plan on carting them around in a wagon, which you won't be because you'll be in forests where a wagon won't fit, I don't see how they'll be carrying all of those weapons without being hindered down enough to where they won't be able to maneuver properly. Two different shields, two different swords, two different spears, a scythe, a crossbow, and an axe, in addition to their armors, will simply not do.
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Azathoth said
Rex, nice CS.


Thanks. You too.

As for the Scorpion King reference, I don't get it.
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That's what I was going for.
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I've edited the equipment list, added weaknesses, and a picture of the "Strange helmet".
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hey is there still room in this rp?
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If you wish to make a CS, then by all means, do so.
Dese/Aviine are accepted.
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Name: Zhit

Race: Imp

Age: 13

Gender: Male

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Faction: Freelancer

Biography: Growing up in a dying village, Zhit learned to be resourceful with the resources around him. Beginning work at a young age, Zhit passed through many occupations, all of which he claims "Don't suit him". The only job he's ever held is at the junkyard. A FREAKING JUNKYARD. All he did was monitor the "valuables" within and sit around being bored. As one can imagine, Zhit eventually grew to toying and finally tinkering with the scrap.
He began to realize he had no real purpose in his little town, and one day, packed a satchel of scrap for the future along with a dagger, breastplate, and single shoulder pad of his own design.
He soon reached a much more lively city, filled to the brim with beings of all kinds. Being an imp, one can imagine finding a job in a larger man's world would be difficult, but with his special talent, Zhit found one shortly after leaving his home. He became a tinkerer of all sorts, working as a form of charter craftsman and inventor on the side.
He began to master tech of all kinds, and life was just dandy. But nothing can be "dandy" forever, especially with witches involved. Most people tend to dislike witches, which is totally understandable, and then there's Zhit. You know how in all those stereotypical movies when a girl gets dumped she has a dartboard with the guy's face on it? That's like Zhit with witches, except the dartboard is on fire and the darts are a little bit closer to crossbow bolts... So yeah. Not a good kind of relationship there.
Long story short, after his home was destroyed, Zhit became one of the best man hunters around. Using his skills of stealth and his sheer resourcefulness, he turned in to a bit of a BA.

Skills:He is a master of stealth and agility, as well as a formidable enemy with short ranged weapons. He also is very good at thinking on the fly and is a master craftsman.

Equipment: A Dagger, hand crossbow, leather chest plate, and leather shoulder pad

Other: This is my first online RP just an fyi. however i have RP-ed in person before.
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I was waiting on Rune and Granox, however it seems that neither will be posting, and I was also waiting on Rex to make an IC post.

Zhit is accepted.

I will be working on a reply, expect it within the next hour or two.

Scratch that, Rex is working on his now. Will be posting today, however, regardless of who is posting when.
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