So, I know my post was super short. And I'm really sorry about that... it's just I wanted to put down SOMETHING to get back into it.
I realize some of the problems I'm having with this one... It's been a long time since I was bullied and it's not really something I like to think about much, but even then that was middle school and not so much in high school. Also, it's been 4 years since I was in high school as well... so it's merging middle school and high school experiences while trying to imagine what that would be like in a Gattaca-like setting, and I don't know... it's just posing problems for me.
But in any case, I posted. I'm totally up for continuing it, but I can't guarantee anything about quality. I'm just having troubles with the whole story, though I liked the idea. I'm really sorry. Anyway, if you want to quit that one because my posts aren't up to spec, I understand. Otherwise, I'll muddle through and work on improving.