[OOC] The Library

[Fallenreaper]

chukklehed said
it's not just ANY cancer, that would be bad. It's SUPER cancer.

Sounds like a disease ridden hero in tights....

[chukklehed]

Well, apparently super cancer comes with telepathy, so at least there's a silver lining.

[Fallenreaper]

chukklehed said
Well, apparently super cancer comes with telepathy, so at least there's a silver lining.

Still can't make anyone take him seriously. :P

[chukklehed]

I mean Charles's cancer

[Kestrel]

So... You dedicated the entire bio to a transition from innocent kid to cold-blooded psychotic killer happening in an instant. Right. Are you sure this character fits? I'm usually not very difficult about the kind of characters people want to play, nor want to bitch too much about the absurdity of it all, but Alyss is seriously fucked up. Cutting up other kids and being smug bout it is not a record that helps you get through your application process. I mean we don't even know how she got into the Library; she more sounds like a mission than an employee. Seriously, we know she was bullied and that she cut other kids up and that's it. I don't usually reject people for a bio, but this is something that needs to be changed.

Ability-wise;

Dark Fury gives you a ranged attack, so it doesn't need to be a power-up as well.

Dark Guardian is op. A back-to-base teleport is cool and insanely useful, but it can't be instant because that's basically an ultimate dodge, and the stat multiplier is besides op wholly unnecessary.

Other abilities look good and stuff. But seriously, that bio :/

[Raen Elvarasi]

I made it a little rushed. If I had a bit more backstory in it, it would seem a bit better...Most of it is in my head...Got lazy. XD I will hash out some more details in it. And they are "Little"....Just...not yet fully grown. XD

As far as the abilities, I guessed...Just wanted to push at the edges, and see what I could get away with. What if I were to half the stat bonus, and give the "Travel" Mechanism a cooldown, and a parameter of "Only if she is in danger"

[Kestrel]

That's honestly a pretty bad first impression, then. What does being lazy with your bio hold in store for us when we get to the IC?

Define danger, depending on your definition I'll see if I allow it.

[Raen Elvarasi]

The reason I put it out so quickly, is because I am dealing with a lot of different things, and trying to get a lot done. I should have taken more time to do it though, and I will. Just give me a few days.

Danger would be....If she is being attacked, or in any "Lethal" danger.

[Fallenreaper]

Post is up, and yes, I couldn't help having Emily smack into Vigna, Alpha. If you're not happy with, let me know and I'll edit it. >_> I had to give you something to react to and if he's not awake, he should be now after that. :p

[Alphakoka]

It's alright. I'll get to posting on Sunday.

[Fallenreaper]

Alphakoka said
It's alright. I'll get to posting on Sunday.

That's good, I know some players dislike having other pcs smack into theirs and didn't want to ruffle feathers. I'll have a Quartz reply up Monday or Tuesday then.

[Kestrel]

Raen Elvarasi said
If she is being attacked, or in any "Lethal" danger.

Alright, so if she´s actually actively being attacked or otherwise in lethal danger unless there´s intervention (ie just being in the presence of a poisonous snake doesn't trigger it unless the snake is specifically targeting her).

@chukklehed. This is what happens if you try to auto-hit things with totally counter-able moves ;p

[Alphakoka]

So, those of you that still remember Simon's last name and your conclusion to it...
*points to Simon's fate*
Is this, in any way, surprising to you?

[Valeric]

Ouch, that was a rather harsh counter.

[chukklehed]

Are you talking about Charles, Maria or Simon?

[Fallenreaper]

Kestrel said This would become even more dangerous as Eowyn began feeling the effects of their song; causing her battlerage to begin wavering... Quartz on the other hand, courtesy of it's smaller size and flight, managed to escape. Nor had he (nor mime) yet to feel the influence of the sirens...

The Quartz in me wants to point one thing out, Kestrel...He is not an it!! :P Not sure why I notice that right away but I did and gain a funny vision of him all feathers puffed out and muttering he's very well knows his gender is male. XD

[Alphakoka]

chukklehed said
Are you talking about Charles, Maria or Simon?

Obviously Charles.

[chukklehed]

I would save him, but I'm not at a computer for a few days.

[Kestrel]

chukklehed said
Are you talking about Charles, Maria or Simon?

All of them. Except Simon isn't a PC :P Also Simon was meant to die. Too little blood these days.

Fallenreaper said
The Quartz in me wants to point one thing out, Kestrel...He is not an it!! :P Not sure why I notice that right away but I did and gain a funny vision of him all feathers puffed out and muttering he's very well knows his gender is male. XD

Gotcha.

[Alphakoka]

Kestrel said
Also Simon was meant to die. Too little blood these days.Gotcha.

Alphakoka said
So, those of you that still remember Simon's last name and your conclusion to it...*points to Simon's fate* Is this, in any way, surprising to you?