[OOC] Star Wars: A New Beginning

[POOHEAD189]

I shall post in a bit, my friends.

[Rawk]

Yikes @POOHEAD189...interesting post, but several discrepancies that, unfortunately, made an ex-Imperial Intelligence Agent look like a complete rookie, lol.

- Destroyed probe droids, that, for all intents and purposes, would have detected your presence & location (or at least one of them) and immediately sent a red-flag back to Gavon.

- You would have had to travel quite a distance to get to where Gavon was behind the door, whereas, by then, he would have at least caught on to you by being alerted earlier from the probe droids.

- Once alerted, he definitely would not have been sitting at the door waiting for you to blast it open, lol

- And tbh, why go through all that trouble to scan an area, check for life signs, and essentially keep his operation as covert as possible for it all to be for nothing, lol.

But seriously, no worries :) I know you were struggling for a post and also trying to move things along, but (as with any character) you would need to take into consideration their background, skills, experience, etc and incorporate that into your posts.

Essentially, I see just about everyone's character on some sort of equal grounds, but they are able to handle certain situations differently (As en example: some are combat oriented, or stealthy, or good enough with computers to use the ship against their enemies, etc)

That being said, based on So'lid and Gavon's background, they should at least be equal in most things, but just have different ways of executing their plans. I think a fair assessment would be that So'lid uses more frontal (shock trooper) assaults, whereas Gavon uses stealth-tactics. Two sides of the same coin I suppose :)

In any case, if you don't mind taking some of the above advice and possible revising your post to where it makes a bit more sense, then that would be great. Also, don't hesitate to send me a PM if you have any ideas! I'm open! :D

[frapet]

@POOHEAD189@Rawk

I have to aggree with Rawk here I am affraid, though we havent gone over it yet, when including others in your post like this I suggest PM'ing them first. Other than that I think it is a good post, good to pick up on the fact that Sol'id doesnt know that Gavon isnt a crewmember, that gives something to work with ^^

[Rawk]

Other than that I think it is a good post, good to pick up on the fact that Sol'id doesnt know that Gavon isnt a crewmember, that gives something to work with ^^

@frapet

Yeah, I loved that he included that! Gavon would definitely play the part for all it was worth then :)

[POOHEAD189]

@Rawk@frapetThanks for telling me. Yes, I just wasn't entirely sure what to do and this past week has been tough on my end. I'll edit when I can.

Edit: And I did. It's Gavon's move.

[frapet]

Ill give gavon a moment to respond than I'll do my post

[Rawk]

Posted!

...yeah, I went out on a limb, so it should get quite interesting ;)

EDIT: btw @POOHEAD189, feel free to do whatever you want to the droids, as I don't see them as a PC, but rather a tool and with limited ability.

[frapet]

post is up, let me know if I didnt adress anyone's situation ^^

[Rawk]

Looks good! Although I'll have to remember in my next post that life support was out :)

[frapet]

is momentum slipping? Have we reached that critical point where the novelty of the roleplay has gone and dissolutionement sets in? :P

[POOHEAD189]

Not for me. I'm just moving all week this week :P @frapet

[Rawk]

Nevah! :) I'm just waiting to see what ol' So'lid is going to do before I make my next move.

@POOHEAD189 Should I assume you won't be posting until next week then?

[POOHEAD189]

@RawkI can perhaps post tonight if God wills it.
That or this weekend.

[Rawk]

No worries mate, just wondering where you're at :)

I suppose in the meantime, if the others want to post, I don't think that will conflict O.o?

[Rawk]

In the interim, let's get a quick location check of all active characters so we are currently on the same page:

@POOHEAD189 So'lid and I on the lower level, near the rear of the ship in between the two rear cargo holds.

@MonsieurShade Jacque is either on or heading down to the lower level of the ship

@Azazaa Krus?

@Sleater Fixer?

Am I missing anyone else?

[Azazaa]

Krus is hiding in one of the crew rooms, pointing a gun at the door.

[MonsieurShade]

@frapet I'm still here, just feel like shit from a combination of work and this damned sinus infection i'm fighting off.

[frapet]

@frapet I'm still here, just feel like shit from a combination of work and this damned sinus infection i'm fighting off.

@MonsieurShade

Feel better mate, maybe you can join kruss (or get shot by him in the process :p) if you dont feel like posting.

[Rawk]

@Sleater Is Fixer getting ready to jettison the cargo on the lower deck? O.O

[MonsieurShade]

@frapet Thanks for the sentiment. Don't worry, I'm gonna post. I hope Sol'id and Gavon are ready for a three way (potentially five with the other stowaways) showdown. I also hope Fixer gives the remaining a heads up before he blows everyone into space, lol.