[OOC] You never see it coming[Freedomliveson/The Elvenqueen]

[freedomliveson]

Oh dear! Thanks for the update! I'll be here when you're ready to go :)

[The Elvenqueen]

*scoots in quickly before work on someone else's computer* XD

Good news! Laptop will (hopefully) be restored to life this weekend! XD We’re going to have to cable it into the router directly as it seems the wireless…wire, thing (too technical for me hahaha) has bit the dust, but hopefully that’s solved my connection problems *frantically taps wooden doorframe* haha

I also managed to copy your latest post into a Word doc by stealing time on my dad's PC while he was at work, so I managed to work on a response in Word while I was gone! :D Wasn’t sure where you wanted to go with Illesia as to whether they were going to kill her here or not so of course feel free to add to or change around any part of Ari’s plan to suit whatever you had in mind there :P

[freedomliveson]

Haha! Good to hear from you, even if it is from a commandeered computer :p

Sounds good! I'll get Illesia cornered in the next post, then have her flee in one after that?

Also, yay for restoring laptop connectivity! Hope that gets sorted out ASAP so you can, you know, have a computer again xD

[The Elvenqueen]

Yes, gosh I feel so...cut off, without a working computer ;w; it's a very strange feeling haha XD

Sounds good to me! :D

[freedomliveson]

soooo, I didn't really mean for this to happen, but I kinda had the battle with Illesia end just because...well,it kinda felt like it would've dragged on for a bit too long. If you want me to go back and revise, I can!

Also, I kinda ended with the two of them having a moment of relative peace. Feel free to slow down/speed up to the calamity on Dromund Kaas...although I feel like it would take a bit for illesia to recover from this AND get off world. This might be a good time for us to have the call for Force users to go to Zinuthra to join the academy we mentioned earlier...

Thoughts?

[The Elvenqueen]

No worries, that sounds good to me! I think poor Bol needs a moment of relative peace to process everything that happened to him too so I shall get them resting up a bit so they're not still "beaten-half-to-death" and then start the ball rolling for the Zinuthra academy, then :D

[The Elvenqueen]

Lots of talking so this came out a bit longer sorry XD

Hope it's all okay and works somewhat with what you had in mind? As always let me know if you want me to change anything. I figured they'd have to fill Saresh in on it sooner or later haha
And sorry if the last bit seemed a bit rushed but I wanted to move them onwards or it felt like they were hanging around on Coruscant a little longer than necessary XD

[freedomliveson]

Thanks for getting us off world! Yeah, it totally does. When we make a return trip back to Coruscant for some reason or another, I'd like for Yerbol and Aria to discover the surprise that Neta left them...but this trip wouldn't be a good time for that. I was thinking they could return AFTER the Xiis have been dealt with. Cause, you know, they're bad xD

Oh no I get it. I'll get us back to Zinuthra...and then, well, here's how I see things unfolding. Let me know what modifications you'd like to make:

1. With the call to all Force sensitives across the galaxy put out, it would take a couple of weeks for at least a passable student body to arrive? In that time we can just have a montage of everyone scrambling to get ready
2. We can open the Academy just in time for there to be reports of disappearances from the budding Force adept settlement on Dromund Kaas(did we agree to have one there? If not, I suppose it would make sense to have one on the other capital world, yeah?)
3. Yerbol and Aria(and others?) go to investigate to find that it's illesia's doing(of course)
4. They hunt her down to find that she's...well, I'd like to surprise you, but let me know if you'd like to tell me what she's up to so you can make suggestions

How's that sound?

[The Elvenqueen]

Oh man, I totally spaced that Neta had left something there for them XD thanks for reminding me! Definitely, yes :P

All sounds good to me! Not sure if we DID originally have one on DK but like you say it makes sense that they would have put one there being a capital world and all XD
Aaaahh, that already makes me nervous for what she's up tooo D: Part of me wants to know and yet part of me wants to keep the suspense haha

[freedomliveson]

Haha! I'll get you some details in the next post :)

Which will be coming today, by the way...after grading. Cause, you know, work xD

[The Elvenqueen]

No worries, I shall be patiently waiting as always! hehe ;)

[freedomliveson]

So, Yerbol's a bit paranoid about stepping out into the field again, hence the sparring scene to build his confidence back up. We don't have to make it long at all, but I thought it might be fun to have these two go at each other again when their relationship is MUCH different than the first time they fought xD.

Edit: what do you think of these buildings for how the academy should look?

Possible academies

[The Elvenqueen]

Aww bless him, poor Bol I don't blame him for being a little nervous! ;w; Definitely an awesome idea as a sort of comparison to their first fight (if we discount the training session with Renso cause they were more focused on learning then than just having a spar XD) back in the tomb :P

Oooooohh, I REALLY like the first one, actually! <3 though I don't suppose the shape is very...practical, in terms of floors/levels (also lots of round rooms o.o may be better in theory than in practise? XD) *shrug* the third one is pretty cool too, if we're thinking about something with a slightly less 'awkward' layout :D

Awesome, so I shall have them attend the opening ceremony after their little spar and then perhaps get word through about the chaos on Dromund Kaas so they can start heading in that direction? :D Post shall be tomorrow most likely as it's getting pretty late here now hahaha

[freedomliveson]

Cool! Would you mind terribly looking up some pictures for the academy as well? Then we can actually decide on what it looks like xD

Sounds good! I suppose those two will have to wait to be teachers until Illesia is dealt with

[The Elvenqueen]

I shall search for some as soon as I'm home! :)

Ohhhh I didn't think about them actually teaching anybody in beween, silly me! XD *facepalm* well I could start that off in my next post alternatively? Let them teach a little bit before chaos descends again? Haha I imagine the Xiis are recovering from the last confrontation so it could work still (and them having to teach youngsters could be VERY entertaining indeed :P)

[The Elvenqueen]

Edit: double post, bad connection in town. My
apologies xD

[freedomliveson]

Hehehehehehe...I've wanted to write in a scene like that for a while now. Done.

[The Elvenqueen]

That's settled then! XD Post incoming shortly, but in the meantime...some pictures/ideas for the Academy:
I quite like the second one here too, actually...thoughts? :)
I know the third one is a model but it was still kinda cool-looking XD

Possible Academy Ideas

[freedomliveson]

Oh yeah, the second one makes the most sense. I do like the first one, but it looks a little too Jedi/Sith-ish for my tastes. The second one it is! Should probably upload that to the Wiki, huh? I'll try to work on the page this week, including uploading pictures and doing bios :)

Edit: I just thought of something...should we take a few days off from writing and just focus on updating the wiki so we're not constantly having to go back and forth? Maybe after the end of Act II? Just a thought.

[The Elvenqueen]

Second one it is then! :D

I also do like that idea, definitely a good thing to do, give us a chance to catch up with the ongoing plot and get it poor wiki kinda got ignored when my internet died ;A; I swear I am gonna make it pretty now that I have it back XD

And bam, post! I wasn't sure whether they would be fighting hand-to-hand or with training blades since you mentioned the room was a smaller one, so I went for the first option as a kind of homage to their "first fight" haha XD feel free to change it up slightly of course as always :P (I also actually went back and skimmed some of our first posts to try and deliberately draw some similarities and maaaan, they were so SHORT!! O_O *nearly faints* What HAPPENED?! XD)

It was getting a bit long so I elluded towards the teaching aspect at the end and thought we could expand upon it in the next few posts or however many we want it to last for C: