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This has got to be the best CS for a dwarf I've ever seen. o.o

Definitely approved. I love the detail you went into the abilities and his personality.


WOOT!
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I dwarf good, apparently.
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Lol, you definitely do.
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So how are we starting off? we just mosey on into the forest for whatever reasons draw us there?
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You can do it that way, yeah. I mean in your case, since Dwarves haven't been out of the mountains in a good while, he could have an outdated map. Maybe he was going to what use to be a village for supplies, then finds nothing but ruins and sees a single flame. Or just a chance passing and he spots it and thinks it's weird so he investigates.
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Name: Fredrick Stonehorn

Age: 31

Race: Human

Inherent Ability: Toughness

Acquired Abilities:
Weapons Training: Fredrick has been training with weapons ever since he was a child. The years of training with the sword, axe and mace allow him to react quickly to enemy attacks as well as perform all kinds of moves with his weapons. He mostly prefers swords and he is usually seen carrying two of them.

Adrenaline Rush: When in combat, Fredrick's adrenaline levels can go up. The more he will fight the higher will his adrenaline level rise, basically giving him the ability to ignore pain, strike faster and with more force. The downside of this however is that the end of the fight will leave him very exhausted.

Survivalist: All the years Fredrick spent with his father in the mountains and in the wild have forced him to develop resistances to elements like cold and heat, to hunt in order to survive, or what plants to eat when animals are scarce and even to extract poisons or toxins from animals and plants and use them on his weapons.

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Personality: Despite appearances, Fredrick is a kind, loyal, helpful and generous man. He only gives respect to those that deserve it and hates those who demand it. He is stubborn, has problems trusting strangers and rarely forgives someone that did him wrong. He lives and breaths for combat and he never hesitates to fight even if the chances are against him. For him walking away from a battle is never an option. His biggest desire is to make sure he dies a warrior's death, which means fighting with a sword in his hands. Other then that he's satisfied with whatever life offers him. He has a strong dislike for bows as well as for those that use them and although he recognizes their utility and only uses them when hunting, he believes that only cowards stay away and fight from a distance.

History: Fredrick is the son of a retired soldier. After his mother died in misterious circumstances his father left the farm he owned to someone else and moved in the mountains where he constructed a house for him and his son and together they lived off the land. Fredrick learned from his father how to use various weapons that was provided to him. One day his father came from a hunt, badly wounded, saying that he was attacked by a wild animal while he was aiming at his target. One hour later he succumbed to his wounds. Sad and disheartened, Fredrick buried his father, took two swords and a dagger, as well as a waterskin and a side bag with food, gold and a sharpening stone for his weapons and decided to hit the road, becoming a wonderer and traveler. That was 6 years ago and to this day he is still wondering through the land.
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Looks good to me, so welcome to the story. :)
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@Aerith of Brae Thanks! I corrected a mistake I made towards the end of my character's history. I'm surprised you never mentioned that. But i'm guessing you realized what I wanted to write anyway.
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@Aerith of Brae Thanks! I corrected a mistake I made towards the end of my character's history. I'm surprised you never mentioned that. But i'm guessing you realized what I wanted to write anyway.


Yeah, I definitely caught it. I'm not really one to worry about typos very much when I can understand what the person's trying to say. It happens to the best of us. Now if you'd been typing
I'd ban you from the RP lol. But yeah, you were good.
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I've seen people write like that honestly, but not here. They piss me off too.
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I think they piss off anyone who's even a decent writer lol. Feel free to hop into the RP at any time. Anyone can really, so long as the app is approved.
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Well, I posted in the IC. Not too much is going on, so I did my best to try come up with something at least somewhat enjoyable to read. I hope it's enough!
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Oh it was. Oddly enough the last bit about the ambush reminded me of Shikamaru's analytical mind in Naruto lol.
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@Aerith of Brae Well I do (or at least did) watch Naruto and love it. So I can see it haha. But I just figured, since he's been soloing it all the time, he would have to be pretty cautious about these things. Although probably still walk into them when his ego takes over.
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Oh I don't doubt it.
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Did a change to Kynna's abilities, including adding a third for story purposes.
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@Aerith of Brae*kills everybody with horrible flute playing, literally* Or it could be some jiggly puff shit going on
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Lol not at all. That's one thing that might possibly get Kynna into trouble. She can't kill. That's why she doesn't eat anything but fruit when she's on her own. So this is her way of being able to stop a danger to herself without killing someone. It's a passive move really. She could give you a sharp headache, but other than that, the only other thing she can basically do is change your mood. Like a sad song would bring a man to tears or a happy one would stop the enemy by making them laugh too much to fight.
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@Aerith of Brae Ohh, so headaches, depression, or musical tickling? I mean that sounds pretty useful. The jiggly puff thing would be cool though, put people to sleep then draw on them. But hey, if it's a poke flute, you could wake up a Snorlax if we happen to find one! (Maybe she'll find an ocarina).
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Oh are we doing colors now for characters? You know I was thinking about it but I wanted to make sure before I did anything
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