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Several years ago Dr. Peter Whitney bought several orphans from various countries. He used these children in experiments. He fully opened their minds to enhanced their natural abilities. But the children were unable to cope with the sideaffects. Frustrated he adopted them all out. A several years later he tried again this time with adult volunteers. Unfortunately the adults weren't able to handle side effects any better then the kids were. Now Dr. Peter Whiney is dead. His daughter Lily has opened her 80 room mansion to these people. She wants to help these people deal with the side effects if her fathers experiment.(This rp is based loosely on a book series)there will be training and missions.

1. This is my RP. What I say goes. If you disagree with something we can discuss it.
2. If you are unsure about something ask I will answer to the best of my ability.
3. If you have a suggestion let me know I welcome suggestions
4. No fighting in the OOC. I don't mind discussions and disagreements.
5. Use the mention button. It helps people know your talking to them. Especially me ;)
6. Internal thoughts are great but please make them appear different from your spoken words. I don't care if you use color or italics.
7. All post must be atleast 3 sentences long.

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shadow
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@KatherinWinter
can we get an example of ability and it's superpower upgrade that you'd expect(more or less) from us? i'm asking so i know how limited a power should be and not be "unrealistically" OP
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@Kibaro I don't like mind reading or mind control. As long as your ability diet control the other characters I'll probably approve it. Some examples from the series: telepathy, flames, animal control, webs, camouflage, echo location, healing, Kinetic absorption, Pheromone manipulation, empathy, Psychometry, Technopathy, and Gravity manipulation. Others you could use https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_superhuman_features_and_abilities_in_fiction
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@Kibaro
Looks good expect two things.
1. Usually there are only two powers there would be the max.
2. At 20 he probably wasn't at the orphanage so he couldn't have been 'bought'
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1. it is 1 power, animal control, but i doubt it's just me looking at an animal and it does whatever i want, the way the character controls animals is trough psychology and some sort of mind manipulation, usually animals are trained trough sounds and gestures, unless you have a different interpretation of the power animal control, in which case let me know please :)

2. changed it, does it make more sense now? i didn't know there was a age limit for orphanages :)
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@KatherinWinter
what is the availability that you expect from us?
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Name:Jed Kiro
Age: 18
Power: Is an Empath and can tell what animals are thinking. He uses his powers to help animals when they need it.
Bio: Jed was always a loner since his Empathy makes him feel others emotions. He Enjoys the company of his German shepard wolf mix Richard. He is always hanging out with his Dog. Jed was a street kid and he got taken off the streets By the Doc. The experiments ended up making him cold towards others.
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@Kibaro ok I guess I read it wrong. Your changes are fine. I would like you to post atleast every other day. Every say would be awesome.
@cara214why and how did he get into the program?
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@KatherinWinter Changed it.
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Appearance:
Name: Kain Lazlof
Age: 20
Bio: Kain was one of the first children to be experimented upon, he never had a real family before and now he had one that was until he was adopted out. A you couple who couldn't get children on their own adopted him. He was happy to still have a family even if it was a smaller one. All seemed good in his life that was until 3 years after he moved in with them, they were constantly arguing with each other and got in some real mean fights. Then one day Kain's adoptive father hit his adoptive mother, Kain couldn't let that go and that was as far as he could remember the first time he went into his 'Berserker Mode'. He punched his adoptive father so hard that he sent him through a solid wall. That was the last thing Kain remembers of that event. Now he is all grown up and managed to control his power somewhat, he heard about the facility being reopened again so he decided to go back to the first ever place he could call home.
Power: Berserker Mode; When Kain enters his Berserker Mode his eyes shine bright red and he behaves more animalistic. In this mode Kain has super human strength, speed and durability also he barely feels pain. The drawback to it is that he can only control that mode for a few minutes and then he completely loses it attacking friend and foe alike. The only way to stop him then is to knock him out or wait for him to fall unconscious.
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@cara214 maybe I'm missing it but I still don't see how he got into the program
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@Zionga so he was experimented on the adopted?
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@KatherinWinterHe was a street kid taken and put into the program.
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@cara214 got it approved
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@KatherinWinter yeah what cara said. Sorry if i didn't say it clearly and thanks for the approve
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@Zionga take will work with the back story.
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@KatherinWinter Okay so should I rewrite some of it or is it good like that?
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@Zionga it's fine the way it is.
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@KatherinWinter Okay thanks :)
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waiting on a couple more.
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