@Themerlinhawk
Good answers, I'll keep them in mind looking through your posts.
And a failure of a character...that was actually surprisingly difficult for me to answer. I'm not sure that you can have a 'failure of a character', in that characters in and of themselves basically are what they are. To me a character is a 'failure' only in that it doesn't come through the way that you want it to, so I think I would have to say that a character of mine that failed cleanly was a soldier named Silas Colt.
He was a soldier who had come back from a distant war with his memory wiped and a dishonorable discharge for something he couldn't remember and couldn't be explained due to confidentiality, so he was a very angry fellow. I still think he was actually a very good character, but I say he failed because his tone was significantly darker than the rest of the group was interested in, so rather than a conflicted and angry veteran he came across as Murderer McMonster, Slayer of Puppies and Bunnies. Everyone basically just thought he was an asshole and left him alone, which wasn't what I'd intended with him, so I think that's probably the best character fail I can think of.
I still think he was a legit character, though. I'm a dick like that. >.>
Good answers, I'll keep them in mind looking through your posts.
And a failure of a character...that was actually surprisingly difficult for me to answer. I'm not sure that you can have a 'failure of a character', in that characters in and of themselves basically are what they are. To me a character is a 'failure' only in that it doesn't come through the way that you want it to, so I think I would have to say that a character of mine that failed cleanly was a soldier named Silas Colt.
He was a soldier who had come back from a distant war with his memory wiped and a dishonorable discharge for something he couldn't remember and couldn't be explained due to confidentiality, so he was a very angry fellow. I still think he was actually a very good character, but I say he failed because his tone was significantly darker than the rest of the group was interested in, so rather than a conflicted and angry veteran he came across as Murderer McMonster, Slayer of Puppies and Bunnies. Everyone basically just thought he was an asshole and left him alone, which wasn't what I'd intended with him, so I think that's probably the best character fail I can think of.
I still think he was a legit character, though. I'm a dick like that. >.>