[OOC] Essence of the World: Cadence [Always Open]

[Themerlinhawk]

Mmm. I dunno about this ;)

[Wind Wild]

[Fairess]

@Themerlinhawk

Nice post, Merlin! Before I write into my next post, though, I should clarify a few things. Roanne's wings were put away as soon as she landed, so they're not out. And she got on the phone as soon as she disentangled herself from the demon rather than collapsed, which is where I'm going to pick up muh post.

[Themerlinhawk]

@FairessNoted and edited. Keep me honest

[Wind Wild]

WTF?! HOW MANY POSTS?

I FREAKING LOVE YOU GUYS! <3<3<3

[Wind Wild]

Hey guys, I was wondering what you think about comments/feedback on posts?

Personally I love getting some, be it positive or negative, and I tend to dork out sometimes.
So when it comes to me, please feel free to tell me what you think about my posts, be it on the OOC or PM.

Over and out.

[Howler]

Feeback me, bro.

But actally by all means, I similarly appreciate feedback one way or another. I promise I'll only nerd-rage snd throw things at my computer for, like, an hour after you talk about my over use of commas and dashes.

No voodoo dolls or anything. Totes promise. <3

[Wind Wild]

@Howler ;( *always wanted a voodoo doll*

[Themerlinhawk]

@HowlerSo there isnt actually a traditional Judo christian god in this world. I dont know if anyone said anything to you. I know I figured that out mid RP last time I was writing for Essence

[Wind Wild]

Seriously? It's on the website. o.o;;

Yeah, there are 2 gods. Aaurus who created Heaven and Hell and all of their inhabitants and Lucy with whom he shared his power later on. The event was celebrated with the creation of the Surface and humans.

So most people use "Oh Gods" instead of referring to just one. But some might play favourites since Lucy came later and she used to be a regular demon.

[Howler]

Yeah, I figured homeboy probably wouldn't be so into Lucy. She was a companion to him, not a God in the way that Aaurus was. As one of the OG angels, he just uses God.

Unless that's not kosher, in which case I'll change it.

[Themerlinhawk]

Okay. I follow now.

[Wind Wild]

You follow NOW? That took a few years, mate. :p

Howler, you're ok, no need to change anything, just making sure we're all on the same page.

[Themerlinhawk]

@Wind WildI've never ONCE seen one of our character say Oh GODS, hop off me Wind XD I write for some of the most cynical and arrogant characters in the game, Lazarus doesn't even believe in gods.

[Wind Wild]

@Howler, a little feedback.
You did very well with capturing the gist of the premise and making a character that fits perfectly (as did Fairess).
I love how casually cruel your character is, and yet he doesn't seem super high and mighty.
I think you do great in painting the picture around him to show what his life/world is about.

Overall, very impressed so far and thank you for joining us. ^^

[Fairess]

Well, you guys's posts are what brought me here in the first place! Hopefully I won't bog things up too much.

[Wind Wild]

@Fairess thank you! Your own posts are awesome and a joy to read so you're far from "bogging things up".
I'm very happy you noticed us. ^-^,,

[Themerlinhawk]

Hey y'all. Ive been kind of absent minded about Essence so I'm going to step up my time here a bit. Wind has been doing awesome things in her life so I figure I can be here to entertain.

Okay I have a new game for y'all

Ask Merlin.: You may ask me one of three types of questions: 1. Riddle 2.Writing or 3. Real life.

You can ask one at a time and I'll give you an honest answer (or attempt if its a riddle), here is the catch.

I get to ask the same type of question of you!

Alright bring it on.@Wind Wild@Fairess@Howler

[Howler]

@themerlinhawk
Have at you, sir!

2. Writing

What is the impression of your characters (in this game) that you want your readers to come away with after reading your posts, and what do you do to convey it?

A two-parter, so sort of cheating, but you can always cheat back. XD

[Themerlinhawk]

@Howler

Shaylee- This character should come off as insecure, kind of spoiled, a little bratty, way too naturally skilled for her own good. That being said she should grow on you over time and you should like her as a sweet girl underneath the spoiled brat. As for how i convey it. Largely through her interaction with Lazarus and how she reacts to not getting her way or having his attention

Ian- Of all my characters Ian should feel like a man who has survived a mid life crisis . He's a wanna be dad but he should come off as a decent man with too many voices in his head. Not crazy mind you but strained. -Read my posts XD large parts of Ian's posts are his internal dialogue which should give you a window not only to what he's experienced but what he's experiencing

Lazarus- This one is hard. Lazarus should give you some insight into me personally. If I COULD be a necromancer i'd be Lazarus. That being said you should come away with the sense of a man who would really like to live quietly with his wife but keeps having that snatched from him. He also should come off as eccentric which given his penchant for running around shoe less and him being retired until the start of this season i think im doing alright. We'll see Lazarus is one of my most dynamic characters.

Okay your turn: Tell us about your absolute worst failure of a character. for whatever reason it failed and did some miserably.