[OOC] A New Dawn - A Star Wars RP

[frapet]

Can I do a more 'on the ground' Chiss officer to Jesmand?

(for any who fear a Thrawn copy, I have never read the trilogy)

[Lmpkio]

Can I do a more 'on the ground' Chiss officer to Jesmand?

(for any who fear a Thrawn copy, I have never read the trilogy)

@frapet

There is a character named and based off Jaina Solo sooo...

[Morose]

@Lmpkio She isn't based off of Jaina Solo. They share a name and both have a twin. Nothing else in common.

[Lmpkio]

@Lmpkio She isn't based off of Jaina Solo. They share a name and both have a twin. Nothing else in common.

@Morose

That's actually what I meant lol-ish.

[frapet]

What rank would the second in command have?

[Lmpkio]

What rank would the second in command have?

@frapet

Second-In-Command? I mean, don't you have it right there?

I kid. She could be the first officer or an XO (someone who takes charge in the absence of the Commanding Officer). I'm no GM so you might want the GMs word first.

[frapet]

I know there is a rule against posting WIP but The thing is done safe for putting the links in propperly (so that they have a name instead of the adress) and the propper rank. And what do I do with the [hr.] thingies?

Atarin

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Atarin

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Character Summary

Name: Hatara ‘Tari’ Noruodo
Aliases: Tari
Age:38
Species: Chiss
Homeworld: Csilla
Allegiance: Empire
Starting Location:Tatooine
Gender: Male
Languages: Basic, Cheunh, Outer-Rim Trade languages.
Occupation:

[hr.]

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Appearance

Height:6’1”
Weight:180lbs
Build: Athletic, Thin
Eyes:Red
Hair:Black
Skin Tone: Blue
Tattoos/Scars/Piercings:Save from minor scarring on arms on hands nothing noteworthy.
Personal Style:Since Atarin joined the Imperial Navy he can hardly be seen without his officers uniform on. As a man of detail he only appears shaven and hair groomed short. Whenever going into battle he dons battle armour that fits over his officer’s uniform.
Atarin would prefer to wear his mercenary battle armour from his early career, a suit mainly built for utility and with hardpoint attachments all over to give him a mechanical edge.
[hr.]

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Psychology

Pragmatic * Self-Righteous * Cautious * Defeatist * Patient * Ambitious

Sexuality:Male
Relationship Status:Single
Personality: Atarin isn’t much liked by the crew of the Vindicator. He is an enforcer at heart, he instils discipline trough fear of what his title means and it has made him appear snobbish and self-righteous to most. They also know however that he will do anything within his power to get things done and those who he doesn’t put in immediate danger can appreciate that. His conviction to stick with the Empire stems from his rejection of Chiss isolationism, though the downfall of the Empire was a heavy blow for his argument. It goes against Atarin’s sense of honour now however to abandon his argument, even though he beliefs the Empire’s days numbered.
His education on Csilla and his subsequent mercenary and military life has learned him to view everything in a cost and benefit picture with himself and his honour at the core of any such calculation. Though he refrains from underestimating enemies he has a disdain for most opposing him and ordering him around. A disdain he funnels into the ambition to rise to the top and keep the Empire alive.
Habits: Minimal 2

• Washing hands and showering often, preferably cold.
• refrain from touching others.
• Cleaning gear.

Hobbies: At least 1

• Dejarik, or any game with luck as a reduced factor.
• Crafting things out of wood.

Fears: 3 real fears that make your character unhinged

• Loosing, and a sore loser in anything for that, returning home being proven wrong being prime amongst them.
• Lack of order. desertion of any kind by his underlings.
• Demotion

Likes: 6 minimal

• Solitude
• Proving himself.
• Hunting.
• Rare Woods.
• To be ahead.
• Technology.
• Games.

Dislikes:

• Not being taken serious (to an extreme).
• Unpredictability.
• Filth (unless in battle).
• Ideals.
• Cowards.
• New people with high ranks.

[hr.]

[hr.]

Cards On The Table

*All skills and possessions are limited to the spaces provided below to start. Do NOT add more!
General Skills:

• Astrogation.
• Coerce.
• Cool.
• Discipline.
• Mechanics.
• Skulduggery.
• Leadership.

Combat Skills:

• Vibrorapier
• Daggers
• Blaster Pistols
• Blaster Rifles
• Tactics (ground)
• Stamina

What Is On Your Person:

• Clothing – Imperial Officers uniform + regalia.
• ID
• Wrist Datapad
• WESTAR-34 blaster pistol, wooden grip + hip holster
• Monomolecular Stiletto + sleeve drop (right arm).
• Laserhone Vibrorapier with a completely straight and unmarked scabbard, making it appear as a long black cane without any adornments (no basket hilt etc.).
• Credits
• Shock Glove and regular glove. Made to appear identical, left hand glove is a Shock glove.

Quarters:

• Personal Trunk
• Woodcrafting set.
• Small game collection.
• Datapad.
• E-11 Blaster Rifle.
• E-11s Sniper Rifle.
• Battle armour of his time as a mercenary.
• Technicians Tools and modification table.
• A small collection of Neural Poisons and a wrist-mounted dart shooter.
• Wrist mounted grapnel launcher.
• Set of off-hand knifes, like blade-breakers and 3 spare monomolecular stilettos.
• Unfinished woodcarvings.
• Spectacles with data-overlay.

[hr.]

[hr.]

History

The Reason You Chose The Side You Did:As a youth Atarin had heated discussions about Chiss isolationism, always pleading for them to involve themselves into galactic affairs. He was often rebuked with the argument about the bureaucracy of the large scale systems. Discussions he started ‘winning’(in his own mind) more often as Palpatine received emergency powers during the Clone Wars. Often were there the warnings of tyranny and oppression but Atarin called it order. He joined the Republic Military, and later the Empire because he was sick of the arguments of what he perceived as hypocrites, even though their insistence on ‘why don’t you join them then’ was taken at heart.
History: Atarin grew up in the Nuruodo Family in Chiss society. This meant a military upbringing from a young age and in Atarin’s case that was amongst the ‘hawks’ of society. Those pleading for breaking the isolationism and taking a more active, or pro-active role in Galactic politics. Atarin took this to heart and was a fervent supporter of breaking with the Chiss isolationist past. As written above his support mainly displayed in discussions but for Atarin this wasn’t enough, especially as the Republic was coursing towards conflict with the Seperatists. He viewed it as a time to put the Chiss on the galactic charts by making use of the temporary lack of a real Republic army and indebting the Republic to the Chiss for the use of their military. This idea never gained enough support however as only a minority was for breaking isolation and the ‘hawks’ were internally divided between supporting the Republic or separatist.
A small group of Chiss, Atarin amongst them no longer wanted to sit idle and joined together in a mercenary company fighting for the Republic as auxiliary. In this time Atarin learned of the difference between all the theory he was thought during his education and hunts and a real war. Which only offered the choice between evil and lesser evil. Fighting on several planets gained him a position within the Republic navy as the conflict dragged on.
The transfer to the Empire affected Atarin little. His position in the navy was unchanged, though a newfound racism that favoured the humans started working against him. He was skipped over for promotion multiple times but in retrospect this kept him clear of places like the Death Star or the Executor. After the destruction of the second Death Star Atarin got commissioned to the Vindicator as a commander for its Stormtrooper detachments.

[hr.]

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Extras

Character Quote:You have to be realistic about this.Theme Song: What would be playing when they walk up if we were in a movie?
Imperial Record:-
Anything Else: roleplayerguild.com/posts/3258004
I know its neigh everyones: Empire Strikes Back._{*By submitting this CS in its completion I am stating I have read all the rules for this Rp and am agreeing to follow them to the fullest with respect and courtesy.}

Tell me what you think!

[Lady Absinthia]

@frapet Rank would most likely be 2nd Lt to Major, remove the "." next to the hr for the lines to show up, and you may want to chose a different color - that dark will be hard for everyone to read in your speech text. And you missed the theme song

[Pundii]

@Lady Amalthea

What would I do without your back seat gming? lol :P

@frapet

She pretty much said it all, you're welcome to choose your own military rank as long as its within those suggested, and perhaps find a lighter colour so it's easier to read. Once you've made those edits the character will ideally be good to go.

[Lady Absinthia]

@Pundii Oh Captain, my captain (tightpants). You'd probably think I was dying if I ever stopped. Like "wait a minute.... you didn't say anything? Are you feeling okay?!!!"

[frapet]

I will take them to heart!
Any suggestions on how I appear? since I wasnt there yet?

[frapet]

Like so?

Atarin

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Atarin

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Character Summary

Name: Hatara ‘Tari’ Noruodo
Aliases: Tari, Major Atarin, Major
Age:38
Species: Chiss
Homeworld: Csilla
Allegiance: Empire
Starting Location:Tatooine
Gender: Male
Languages: Basic, Cheunh, Outer-Rim Trade languages.
Occupation: Major and second in command on the Vindicator.

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Appearance

Height:6’1”
Weight:180lbs
Build: Athletic, Thin
Eyes:Red
Hair:Black
Skin Tone: Blue
Tattoos/Scars/Piercings:Save from minor scarring on arms on hands nothing noteworthy.
Personal Style:Since Atarin joined the Imperial Navy he can hardly be seen without his officers uniform on. As a man of detail he only appears shaven and hair groomed short. Whenever going into battle he dons battle armour that fits over his officer’s uniform.
Atarin would prefer to wear his mercenary battle armour from his early career, a suit mainly built for utility and with hardpoint attachments all over to give him a mechanical edge.

---

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Psychology

Pragmatic * Self-Righteous * Cautious * Defeatist * Patient * Ambitious

Sexuality:Male
Relationship Status:Single
Personality: Atarin isn’t much liked by the crew of the Vindicator. He is an enforcer at heart, he instils discipline trough fear of what his title means and it has made him appear snobbish and self-righteous to most. They also know however that he will do anything within his power to get things done and those who he doesn’t put in immediate danger can appreciate that. His conviction to stick with the Empire stems from his rejection of Chiss isolationism, though the downfall of the Empire was a heavy blow for his argument. It goes against Atarin’s sense of honour now however to abandon his argument, even though he beliefs the Empire’s days numbered.
His education on Csilla and his subsequent mercenary and military life has learned him to view everything in a cost and benefit picture with himself and his honour at the core of any such calculation. Though he refrains from underestimating enemies he has a disdain for most opposing him and ordering him around. A disdain he funnels into the ambition to rise to the top and keep the Empire alive.
Habits: Minimal 2

• Washing hands and showering often, preferably cold.
• refrain from touching others.
• Cleaning gear.

Hobbies: At least 1

• Dejarik, or any game with luck as a reduced factor.
• Crafting things out of wood.

Fears: 3 real fears that make your character unhinged

• Loosing, and a sore loser in anything for that, returning home being proven wrong being prime amongst them.
• Lack of order. desertion of any kind by his underlings.
• Demotion

Likes: 6 minimal

• Solitude
• Proving himself.
• Hunting.
• Rare Woods.
• To be ahead.
• Technology.
• Games.

Dislikes:

• Not being taken serious (to an extreme).
• Unpredictability.
• Filth (unless in battle).
• Ideals.
• Cowards.
• New people with high ranks.

---

---

Cards On The Table

*All skills and possessions are limited to the spaces provided below to start. Do NOT add more!
General Skills:

• Astrogation.
• Coerce.
• Cool.
• Discipline.
• Mechanics.
• Skulduggery.
• Leadership.

Combat Skills:

• Vibrorapier
• Daggers
• Blaster Pistols
• Blaster Rifles
• Tactics (ground)
• Stamina

What Is On Your Person:

• Clothing – Imperial Officers uniform + regalia.
• ID
• Wrist Datapad
• WESTAR-34 blaster pistol, wooden grip + hip holster
• Monomolecular Stiletto + sleeve drop (right arm).
• Laserhone Vibrorapier with a completely straight and unmarked scabbard, making it appear as a long black cane without any adornments (no basket hilt etc.).
• Credits
• Shock Glove and regular glove. Made to appear identical, left hand glove is a Shock glove.

Quarters:

• Personal Trunk
• Woodcrafting set.
• Small game collection.
• Datapad.
• E-11 Blaster Rifle.
• E-11s Sniper Rifle.
• Battle armour of his time as a mercenary.
• Technicians Tools and modification table.
• A small collection of Neural Poisons and a wrist-mounted dart shooter.
• Wrist mounted grapnel launcher.
• Set of off-hand knifes, like blade-breakers and 3 spare monomolecular stilettos.
• Unfinished woodcarvings.
• Spectacles with data-overlay.

---

---

History

The Reason You Chose The Side You Did:As a youth Atarin had heated discussions about Chiss isolationism, always pleading for them to involve themselves into galactic affairs. He was often rebuked with the argument about the bureaucracy of the large scale systems. Discussions he started ‘winning’(in his own mind) more often as Palpatine received emergency powers during the Clone Wars. Often were there the warnings of tyranny and oppression but Atarin called it order. He joined the Republic Military, and later the Empire because he was sick of the arguments of what he perceived as hypocrites, even though their insistence on ‘why don’t you join them then’ was taken at heart.
History: Atarin grew up in the Nuruodo Family in Chiss society. This meant a military upbringing from a young age and in Atarin’s case that was amongst the ‘hawks’ of society. Those pleading for breaking the isolationism and taking a more active, or pro-active role in Galactic politics. Atarin took this to heart and was a fervent supporter of breaking with the Chiss isolationist past. As written above his support mainly displayed in discussions but for Atarin this wasn’t enough, especially as the Republic was coursing towards conflict with the Seperatists. He viewed it as a time to put the Chiss on the galactic charts by making use of the temporary lack of a real Republic army and indebting the Republic to the Chiss for the use of their military. This idea never gained enough support however as only a minority was for breaking isolation and the ‘hawks’ were internally divided between supporting the Republic or separatist.
A small group of Chiss, Atarin amongst them no longer wanted to sit idle and joined together in a mercenary company fighting for the Republic as auxiliary. In this time Atarin learned of the difference between all the theory he was thought during his education and hunts and a real war. Which only offered the choice between evil and lesser evil. Fighting on several planets gained him a position within the Republic navy as the conflict dragged on.
The transfer to the Empire affected Atarin little. His position in the navy was unchanged, though a newfound racism that favoured the humans started working against him. He was skipped over for promotion multiple times but in retrospect this kept him clear of places like the Death Star or the Executor. After the destruction of the second Death Star Atarin got commissioned to the Vindicator as a commander for its Stormtrooper detachments.

---

---

Extras

Character Quote:You have to be realistic about this.Theme Song: What would be playing when they walk up if we were in a movie?
Imperial Record:-
Anything Else: roleplayerguild.com/posts/3258004
I know its neigh everyones: Empire Strikes Back._{*By submitting this CS in its completion I am stating I have read all the rules for this Rp and am agreeing to follow them to the fullest with respect and courtesy.}

[Morose]

@Lady Amalthea@Pundii Oh get a room you two :P

And oooh, someone new for Jaina to play with ^_^

[Lady Absinthia]

@Morose We have one, in our house in YOUR rp :p

[Morose]

@Lady Amalthea Then, uh, get a different room! :P

[Lady Absinthia]

@Morose Aww hell naw - you wanted this, you wanted us as "The Addams", you were the one that started this with the whole "you two act like a married couple" - we are going to make you suffer!!!! (It's our right as your parents :P)

[Lmpkio]

@frapet Actually it's perfectly fine in posting WIP as long as you label them so.

[Morose]

@Lmpkio "Do not submit WIP's - Final CS's only"

[Lmpkio]

@Lmpkio "Do not submit WIP's - Final CS's only"

@Morose

Yup... I just saw that. I never said anything.

[frapet]

so every Imperial is now moving for the conference room of the Vindicator, it'll be fine storywise if I just pop-up there?