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Bleghhhhh. I want Urzoth to have a nightmare pertaining to her lost fiancee Fuzrath but that entire concept in and of itself is a cliche. Maybe just vague bad feelings and weird imagery??
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Robeatics said
Bleghhhhh. I want Urzoth to have a nightmare pertaining to her lost fiancee Fuzrath but that entire concept in and of itself is a cliche. Maybe just vague bad feelings and weird imagery??


Like Hallucinations? I'd say that'd be weirder than nightmares. People have dreams about being with people they once loved and have lost all the time. Waking up feeling bad about it is completely normal. It doesn't have to be PTSD level freakouts about it, just show that Urzoth is pretty bothered by what happened in her past.
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Like Hallucinations? I'd say that'd be weirder than nightmares. People have dreams about being with people they once loved and have lost all the time. Waking up feeling bad about it is completely normal. It doesn't have to be PTSD level freakouts about it, just show that Urzoth is pretty bothered by what happened in her past.


Nah! No hallucinations really (unless she's been going for skooma). My latest post ends with her falling asleep, so I wanted to sort of narrative-wise cash in on that situation. :P

Thanks though! You're totally right. I wanted to really accentuate her current mental state since she's been involved in so many major (traumatic) things and has so many people dependent upon her being a good fighter and a good leader (the latter being something that would definitely put a lot of stress on someone who, since childhood, has had more rivals and enemies than brothers, sisters or friends, the former being something that has always been a cause of stress due to an early life based around protecting her stronghold and family from attack).
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Whew, took me longer than I had hoped to get this post up. I really am going to have to start scheduling my days better. Can't really 'shoot from the hip' and do things whenever you want when you've got a lot going on.
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Finally got Derv and I's collab up. Once again, it was held up by RL things for an unreasonable amount of time, (my net failing).

Dusk, Elayna wanted to talk to Reigenleif yes? Now is the time. Shall we collab? If so, shall I start or would you like to?
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Finally got Derv and I's collab up. Once again, it was held up by RL things for an unreasonable amount of time, (my net failing).Dusk, Elayna wanted to talk to Reigenleif yes? Now is the time. Shall we collab? If so, shall I start or would you like to?


I meant to change that to align more into Soul and Dipper's direction, buuuuuuuut now that you're back we could work something around into that as well somehow. SOMEHOW.

You can start it out with her responding, if you'd like~
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I'm slowly working on CS! Also, Dusk, you just forever ruined my memories of Blue's Clues. With that dancing, long nosed abomination...
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I'm slowly working on CS! Also, Dusk, you just forever *enhanced my memories of Blue's Clues. With that dancing, long nosed, wondrous creature...


I fixed it for you, friend.
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So I may have just became a writer for an upcoming indie game.
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I fixed it for you, friend.


Lies! Lies and heresy!

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So I may have just became a writer for an upcoming indie game.


Cool! What's the game about?
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Cool! What's the game about?


Ever hear about Corruption of Champions? Its an erotic text based game made by an egotiatocal asshole. We decided that we could do better, hahaha. >.>

So for right now... We don,t know. Working on mechanics ATM.
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Never heard of it. Good luck though? Try not to mix too much pleasure with business.
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Rtron said
Never heard of it. Good luck though? Try not to mix too much pleasure with business.


I don't particularly take pleasure from my own writing, so no need to worry there. >_>
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Dipper said
I don't particularly take pleasure from my own writing, so no need to worry there. >_>


You don't take pleasure from your own writing and have to frequently take breaks or else your legs feel like they're noodles? Weirdo.
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Leidenschaft said
You don't take pleasure from your own writing and have to frequently take breaks or else your legs feel like they're noodles? Weirdo.


What are you... I don't...
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Dipper said
Ever hear about Corruption of Champions? Its an erotic text based game made by an egotiatocal asshole. We decided that we could do better, hahaha. >.>So for right now... We don,t know. Working on mechanics ATM.


Is it gonna be just as niche-y as CoC? Because I'm getting a real kick out of imagining you writing page after page of just variations of a character growing a three foot long horse willy.
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Is it gonna be just as niche-y as CoC? Because I'm getting a real kick out of imagining you writing page after page of just variations of a character growing a three foot long horse willy.


God, i hope not.
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God, i hope not.


but there is always a chance in the fanfic~
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Cairomaru said
but there is always a chance in the fanfic~


I'll kill u.
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I'll kill u.


u wot m8
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