[OOC] Cities in the Sky: A Mecha RP (Still Accepting)

[Cultural Titan]

@Urbanliner

Better on abilities.

Nothing really changed on the personality side, but that wording makes me hate it a lot less.

"As he joined, his rivals dropped out one by one as hard infantry training went on" seems at first to suggest that his rivals left because he joined and then that it was because of his training.

I take it English isn't your first language? its not a problem, but it may affect how I judge things.

[Urbanliner]

@Urbanliner

Better on abilities.

Nothing really changed on the personality side, but that wording makes me hate it a lot less.

"As he joined, his rivals dropped out one by one as hard infantry training went on" seems at first to suggest that his rivals left because he joined and then that it was because of his training.

I take it English isn't your first language? its not a problem, but it may affect how I judge things.

@Cultural Titan

I changed that sentence's wording to make it hopefully simply suggest that it was the training and not Brian being a mary sue, and yes, it's not my first language.

I'll make sure to proof-check stuff rather than zipping past it and calling it a day, so stuff I write will hopefully be clearer.

[Cultural Titan]

@Urbanliner

Alright. Going to go to sleep and look it over again before I make a final decision. If you want to make any other changes before then go wild I guess.

[Cultural Titan]

@Urbanliner

You are in. I am concerned however that overall the character was made with him being ordinary too close in mind, but that just means I'll have to do things to him over the course of the game. What kind of things you might be asking? You'll see. Eventually. #evillaugh #bitcheslovecannons

[Urbanliner]

@Urbanliner

You are in. I am concerned however that overall the character was made with him being ordinary too close in mind, but that just means I'll have to do things to him over the course of the game. What kind of things you might be asking? You'll see. Eventually. #evillaugh #bitcheslovecannons

@Cultural Titan

Welp, another under-thinking detected.. but I am happy with what would be happening. I have thought of some stuff that could happen, but no need to reveal it here I guess.

[6slyboy6]

Flagged

[Cultural Titan]

@6slyboy6

Flagged?

[Cultural Titan]

Its Monday and I said I was going to start the IC today so expect that at some point. Probably in the next few hours.

[GreenGoat]

Sweet. I'll be waiting for that.

[6slyboy6]

As in interested

[Cultural Titan]

@6slyboy6Okay.

In other news I probably shouldn't have said I'd have the first post up in a few hours right before I had classes and a shopping trip to get a new keyboard. Maybe a little bit of a misleading time table.

[6slyboy6]

who cares if the Rp is good, AMIRITE?

[Cultural Titan]

Whether or not it is good remains to be seen.

If you are already accepted feel free to be that other mech. I will be your opponent in the as of yet unnamed spider mech.

If you need help getting into things feel free to contact me and I'll do whatever I can.

Other fights will be going on basically alongside this one so feel free to set yourself up against another mech in a fight if you want.

You can fight other players if you both agree to it, but I don't see the point in knocking a player out so soon.

Oh and Garret is 17 now if you didn't notice my changes to his sheet all the way back on page three. You probably didn't because I never drew attention to it. I should put him in with the other characters.

[GreenGoat]

Could be on a point system. Where knocking out a player doesn't necessarily mean knocking them out of the competition.

[Cultural Titan]

@GreenGoat

I was thinking of putting that in for the team rounds later, but at this point the only comment on the earlier proposed rules were that teams were a bad idea so I guess I don't know if I'm even doing that anymore. But initially these were supposed to be best of 1, you get eliminated if you lose matches to get rid of a bunch of lackluster contestants that enter. That said I am open to ideas and I will make a note of the points idea for now.

[6slyboy6]

Damn, why u gotta take my mech spider idea? Now i gotta come up witha new plan.

[Cultural Titan]

@6slyboy6 You can still have it. It can just be a different model or something Seriously don't let it dissuade you.

[ArenaSnow]

Bloody life. Mech's lore is mostly set, equipment almost complete, some of the other bits need doing, pilot needs a form of existence and [CENSORED] somehow managed to be more done than the rest. Meh.

[GreenGoat]

So anyone wanna go post first or be that mech's opponent?

[Cultural Titan]

@ArenaSnow

Sounds good?

@GreenGoat

Go ahead.